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それで、何と言うのでしょうか？
時間内に全てを翻訳することはできますか？

追加要項2点
・明日中に英語の文章を用意できなければ、10月6日の原本に戻らなくてはなりません。
・50ユーロの週末手当をつけます。

時間内にできるかどうか連絡ください。

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それで、あなたの意見はどうですか？
時間内に全てを翻訳することはできますか？

追加要項2点
・明日中に英語の文章を用意できなければ、当初発表予定だった10月6日に戻さなくてはなりません。
・50ユーロの週末業務特別手当をつけます。

時間内にできるかどうか連絡ください。

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Alibabaには、2012年のFacebookのIPO以上の値がついた。Facebookが、純益160億米ドルであった一方で、Alibabaは、今回のIPOで218米ドルの純益となった。

Eコマース企業は、中国のTaobaoやTmall オンラインストアからの資金を利用しているが、今ではAmazonを抜く価値があり、爆発的なデビューを飾った事で事実上、約2300億米ドルの価値があるとされた。

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Alibabaには、2012年のFacebookのIPO以上の値をつけた。Facebookが、純益160億米ドルであった一方で、Alibabaは、今回のIPOで218億米ドルの純益となった。

このEコマース企業は、中国のTaobaoやTmall オンラインストアからの資金を最大限活用しているが、今ではAmazonを抜く価値があり、爆発的なデビューを飾ったお陰で事実上、約2300億米ドルの価値があるとされた。

元の翻訳
Hi there,
It has been three days since I ord but no shipment notice has sent to me at all.
Please kindly tell product shipments situation.

Look forward to hearing from you.

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Hi there,
It has been over three days since I ordered the item, but no shipment notice has been sent to me at all.
Please kindly advise the item's shipping status.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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This product comes with a 1 year guarantee from the day of its purchase from the manufacturer. If it breaks down during the guarantee period, the repair fees will be free. If anything happens to the item, please notify this store by email. We will then contact the place where we send broken items, and will require you to send it there. After repair, we will send it back to you from our store.
Customers from out of the US will be required to send their items for repair to the address of our store in Japan.
Please be careful, as products bought out of the US may be required to pay custom duties.

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This product comes with the manufacturer's 1 year warranty valid from the date of purchase. If it breaks down during the warranty period, the repair fees will be covered for free. If anything happens to the item, please notify us by email. We will let you know the destination details to send the defected item, so please send it to the address. After repair, your item will be returned from our store.
Customers outside the US will be requested to send their defected items to our store address in Japan for repair.
For those customers who purchased the item from outside the US, please note that your item may involve a customs duty payment.

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私は、中に入っていた住所に送り返し、私が払う必要がないと思う輸送費を払います。なぜなら公平でいたいからです。最初の購入費とカナダのオンタリオ州トロントへの輸送コストである200.00米ドルを、返金してください。その後、あなたに返品発送致します。そうしていただけたら、私は100％の肯定的なフィードバックを残します。私はあなたの商品およびサービスに、過去に非常に満足しているからです。

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私は、中に入っていた住所に返送し、配送料を負担します。私が払う必要はないと思いますが、公平性の利益に基づいてそのようにします。最初の購入費とカナダのオンタリオ州トロントへの輸送コストである200.00米ドルを、返金してください。その後、あなたに返品発送致します。そうしていただけたら、私は100％の肯定的なフィードバックを残します。私はあなたの商品およびサービスに、過去に非常に満足しているからです。

元の翻訳
同梱されていた住所に商品を返品しようと思っております、またその際の料金につきましては当方で負担するつもりです。私が負担するのもちょっと違うような気がしますが、今後もお互いに良い関係でいられればと思います。しかしながら合計で200ドルの返金を御願いできればと存じます。内訳といたしましては、購入金額とカナダのトロントまでの送料になります。それを持って返品手続きを行います。今までの御社の製品とサービスには非常に満足しておりまので、御社への評価は”100%満足”とするつもりです。

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同梱されていた住所に商品を返品し、またその際の送料につきましては当方で負担します。私が負担するのもちょっと違うような気がしますが、公平性の利益に基づいてそうします。しかしながら合計で200米ドルの返金を御願いできればと存じます。内訳といたしましては、購入金額とカナダ、オンタリオ州トロントまでの送料になります。それを持って返品手続きを行います。そのようにしていただければ、今までの御社の製品とサービスには非常に満足しておりますので、御社への評価は”100%満足”とするつもりです。

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I have received 2 items.
One of the 2 items, is missing the makeup box (outer box) & does not have an instruction booklet included.
Could you send these accessories as soon as possible please.
If there is not a box or instructions available, please refund my purchase amount for that item.
Thank you.

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I have received 2 items.
One of the 2 items is missing the fancy box (outer box) and an instruction manual.
Could you send these accessories to me as soon as possible please?
If there is not a box or an instruction manual available, please issue me a partial refund for them.
Thank you.

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I have received 2 items
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

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I have received 2 items
One of them did not come with the fancy box (outer case) and its instruction manual.
Please send them to me immediately.
If you don’t have them to send to me, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
Next, you look into this merchandise whether it produces profit or not.
Copy the alphabet written in ASIN at the top of this page and paste it to the Amazon search page of Japan.

Then push the search button,...

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Next, you look into this merchandise whether it will be profitable or not.
Copy the alphabet written in ASIN at the top of this page and paste it to the search page on Amazon Japan.

Then push the search button...

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Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer told me that he or she wanted to purchase A again as an extra.
Please let me know the price.
I would like to order 1 piece.

Have you received B yet?
If you have received it, i would like to order.

When will I receive C?
I have already paid the price of the item 2 months ago.

I request that you let me know about receiving of D and E.

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Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer told me that he or she wanted to purchase A again as an extra.
Please let me know the selling price.
I would like to order 1 piece.

Have you received B yet?
If you have done so, i would like to place an order.

When will I receive C?
I have already paid for the item 2 months ago.

I request that you let me know about the due-in status of D and E.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer contacted me saying he/she would like to purchase one more A for spare.
Could you please tell me the price to sell.
I would like to order one.

Have you got the stock of B?
I would like to order if you have stock.

When C would be arrived?
I have paid the price two months ago.

Please let me know about the stock status of D and E.

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Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer contacted me saying he/she would like to purchase one more A for spare.
Could you please tell me the selling price.
I would like to order one.

Have you got the stock of B?
I would like to order if you have done so.

When would C be shipped to me?
I have paid for the item two months ago.

Please let me know about the stock status of D and E, too.

元の翻訳
In case where price of Amazon Japan x 0.96 is larger than price of Aucfan, etc.,
purchase by Aucfan,etc. other than Amazon.

If there is not much difference in the price for the item listed(does not apply to rule 1), please talk with a person in charge.
Please pay attention to "new item" and "used item".

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In case where price of Amazon Japan x 0.96 is larger than price of Aucfan, etc.,
purchase from Aucfan etc. other than Amazon.

If there is not much price difference for the listed item (does not apply to rule 1), please consult with a person in charge.
Please pay attention to "new item" and "used item".

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If Amazon Japan's Price X 0.96 > Auction fans price etc. they will purchase outside of Amazon.
If there is no major price difference in the price of the listed goods (apply rule 1), please consult the person in charge.
Please pay careful attention to [New] or [Second-hand].

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If the price on Amazon Japan x 0.96 > the price on Aucfan etc.,↵
purchase from Aucfan etc. except for Amazon.
If there is no major price difference between the listed goods (not applicable with rule 1), please consult the person in charge.
Please pay careful attention to "New" or "Used".

元の翻訳
下さい

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お願いします。

元の翻訳
Although I've tried to buy the item,it didn't work and there was a error message.
Please sell me the item below. I'd like to pay by PayPal. Send me a message with bill to my e-mail address: example@example.com.

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Although I've tried to buy the item,it didn't work because an error message showed.
Please sell me the item below. I'd like to pay by PayPal. Please send me the PayPal invoice to my e-mail address: example@example.com.

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I was going to purchase the product just now, but I couldn't make the payment due to the display of error message.
Please sell me the product below. I am going to make payment by Paypal, so please send the Paypal invoice to example@example.com.

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I was going to purchase the product earlier, but I couldn't make the payment due to the display of error message.
Please sell me the product below. I am going to make payment by PayPal, so please send the PayPal invoice to example@example.com.

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Jut now I try to buy a product, but I couldn't pay.
I got error message.↵
I'll pay by PAY PAL, so please send the invoice of Pay Pal to EXAMLE@EXAMPLE.COM.
Thank you.

Best regard.

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Earlier I tried to buy a product, but I couldn't settle the payment as an error message showed.
Please sesll me the folloiwng item. I'll pay by PayPal, so please send the PayPal invoice to EXAMLE@EXAMPLE.COM.
Thank you.

Best regards.

元の翻訳
We can discount 10% of both of"aaa" and "bbb" .

if you buy both of them, we offer ＄xxx including shipment fee if it is ok via SAL shipment without a registered mail.(if it is via air mail, plus ＄xxx. if it is ems, plus ＄xxx)

please take it consideration, thanks.

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We can give you 10% discount on both of "aaa" and "bbb".

If you buy both of them, we would offer $ xxx including shipment fee via SAL without a registered mail (additional $xxx if it is via air mail, or additional $xxx for ems).

Please take this into your consideration, thanks.

元の翻訳
We can give 10 percent discount for both "aaa" and "bbb".
If you purchase both, we will make it at xxx dollars including shipping charge if you
don't mind about sending it by SAL without registered mail.(in case of air mail, it is plus xxx dollars and in case of EMS, it is plus xxx dollars).
We hope that you consider it. We appreciate your understanding.

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We can give 10 percent discount for both "aaa" and "bbb".
If you purchase both, we will make it at xxx dollars including shipping charge if you
don't mind about sending it by SAL without registered mail (additional xxx dollars in the case of air mail, or additional xxx dollars in the case of EMS).
Please take this into your consideration. Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
私たちはセットアップガイドをダウンロードすることをお勧めします。ガイドにはインストールに関しての正しい説明が記載されています。
KOMPLETE KONTROL Keyboardだけ持っているならば下記のどちらかを選択してください。
Owners of KOMPLETE 10 or KOMPLETE 10 ULTIMATE

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セットアップガイドをダウンロードすることをお勧めします。ガイドにはインストールに関しての正しい説明が記載されています。
KOMPLETE KONTROL Keyboardのみお持ちならば下記のどちらかを選択してください。
KOMPLETE 10もしくはKOMPLETE 10 ULTIMATEの所有者様。

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25:13˜ "CDTV"

Program website: http://www.tbs.co.jp/cdtv/
*Broadcast schedule may differ in some regions

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25:13- "CDTV"

Program website: http://www.tbs.co.jp/cdtv/
*Broadcast schedule may vary in some regions

元の翻訳
中国のWeChat、Dairy Queenほか8社のチェーンストアに店内決済を導入

Tencentは、その人気のモバイルメッセージアプリWeChatによる、中国各地の9つの小売チェーンの店内でのモバイル決済を導入した。

Pingwestが報告のように、中国のWeChatユーザは、同アプリの「Wallet」の中に新しい「Small Payments」（shuaka、すなわち中国語で「カードを通す」）機能があるのに気が付くだろう。WiChat決済のアイコンを押してパスワードを入力すると、QR コードまたはバーコードがその後生成され、小売業者がスキャンすることで店内での購入の決済を受けることができる。

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中国のWeChat、Dairy Queenほか8つのチェーン店に店内決済を導入

Tencentは、自社の人気モバイルメッセージアプリWeChatによる中国各地の9つの小売チェーン店の店内モバイル決済を導入した。

Pingwestの報告にあるとおり、中国のWeChatユーザは同アプリの「Wallet」という項目の中に新しい「Small Payments」（shuaka、あるいは中国語で「カードを通す」）機能があることを見抜くだろう。WeChat決済のアイコンを押してパスワードを入力すると、次にQR コードまたはバーコードが生成され、小売店が店内での購入決済をスキャン、承認する。