翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: アルファベットのA、B、C、D、Eには商品名がはいります。

日本語

先月、Aを送っていただいきありがとうございます。
同じ顧客が予備としてAをもう一つ購入したいと連絡がきました。
販売価格を知らせて下さい。
1つ注文しようと思います。

Bは入荷しましたか？
入荷していれば注文したいです。

Cはいつ届くのでしょうか？
2ヶ月前に商品代金は支払い済みです。

DとEの入荷状況も知らせて下さい。

英語

Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer contacted me saying he/she would like to purchase one more A for spare.
Could you please tell me the price to sell.
I would like to order one.

Have you got the stock of B?
I would like to order if you have stock.

When C would be arrived?
I have paid the price two months ago.

Please let me know about the stock status of D and E.

レビュー ( 1 )

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/23 15:12:19

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer contacted me saying he/she would like to purchase one more A for spare.
Could you please tell me the price to sell.
I would like to order one.

Have you got the stock of B?
I would like to order if you have stock.

When C would be arrived?
I have paid the price two months ago.

Please let me know about the stock status of D and E.

修正後
Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer contacted me saying he/she would like to purchase one more A for spare.
Could you please tell me the selling price.
I would like to order one.

Have you got the stock of B?
I would like to order if you have done so.

When would C be shipped to me?
I have paid for the item two months ago.

Please let me know about the stock status of D and E, too.

[mikang]

レビューと修正をありがとうございます。