takashi F (takashifur) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
With EMS, it takes 4 to 6 days to get from Japan to the destination in South America. With ePacket, it takes 6 to 8 days. Depending on the situation of postal service of your country of residence, the arrival of the package might delay. According to our experience, a delivery to capital areas is relatively on-time, but if the postal service situation is not so favorable, it may be faster if you could go to the post office to receive the package. Also, they always do customs inspection on EMS, and in many cases charge you customs duty.

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With EMS, it takes 4 to 6 days to get delivered from Japan to the destination in South America. With ePacket, it takes 6 to 8 days. Depending on the situation of postal service of your country of residence, there might be delays on the arrival of the package. According to our experience, a delivery to capital areas is relatively on-time, but if the postal service situation is not so favorable, it may be faster if you could go to the post office to receive the package. Also, they always do customs inspection on EMS, and in many cases charge you with customs duty.

元の翻訳
Now we are in April. Do you have any news for me?
If you know anything about the next estimated date for the arrival of goods, please let me know.
I will be waiting for your reply anxiously.

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Now that we are in April, do you have any news for me?
If you know when the next batch of goods is scheduled to come in, please let me know.
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
The rice ”Uonuma Koshihikari" is surprisingly distinct in its taste and texture from the ordinary rice you buy from Wall-Mart.
"Nishiki-goi" are carps that are also called "Swimming Gems"
"Nihon-syu", or Sake that matured in deep snow.
"Hanabi-Taikai (Firework Festivals)" that launch 48-inch gunpowder-balls to the sky.
"Matsunoyama-Onsen" is counted as one of three most famous medicinal hot-springs in Japan.
We are from Niigata Prefecture in japan with these various attractions.
We can ship you many products that can only be found in Japan with careful wrappings.
The fact that you have ordered these products all the way from Japan, will certainly makes you proud too!

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The rice brand ”Uonuma Koshihikari" is incomparably distinct in its taste and texture from the ordinary rice you buy from Wall-Mart.
"Nishiki-goi" are carps referenced as "Swimming Gems".
"Nihon-syu", or Sake are matured in deep snow.
"Hanabi-Taikai (Firework Festivals)" launch 48-inch gunpowder-balls to the sky.
"Matsunoyama-Onsen" is counted as one of three most famous medicinal hot-springs in Japan.
We are from the Niigata Prefecture in Japan which embraces these fascinations.
We can ship you many products that can only be found in Japan packaged with care.
The fact that you have ordered these products all the way from Japan will certainly be something to be proud of!

元の翻訳
The rice ”Uonuma Koshihikari" is surprisingly distinct in its taste and texture from the ordinary rice you buy from Wall-Mart.
"Nishiki-goi" are carps that are also called "Swimming Gems"
"Nihon-syu", or Sake that matured in deep snow.
"Hanabi-Taikai (Firework Festivals)" that launch 48-inch gunpowder-balls to the sky.
"Matsunoyama-Onsen" is counted as one of three most famous medicinal hot-springs in Japan.
We are from Niigata Prefecture in japan with these various attractions.
We can ship you many products that can only be found in Japan with careful wrappings.
The fact that you have ordered these products all the way from Japan, will certainly makes you proud too!

修正後
The rice ”Uonuma Koshihikari" is surprisingly distinct in its taste and texture from the ordinary rice you buy from Wall-Mart.
"Nishiki-goi" are carps that are also called "Swimming Gems"
"Nihon-syu", or Sake that matured in deep snow.
"Hanabi-Taikai (Firework Festivals)" that launch 48-inch gunpowder-balls to the sky.
"Matsunoyama-Onsen" is counted as one of three most famous medicinal hot-springs in Japan.
We are from Niigata Prefecture in japan with these various attractions.
We can ship you many products that can only be found in Japan with careful wrappings.
The fact that you have ordered these products all the way from Japan, will certainly make you proud too!

元の翻訳
Three products that you have entered have sold. I will pay you 3$ as promised.
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Please let me ask you a question, for this is an important issue.
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Do you mean you want to work with me as full-time?
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I make a contract as full-time only with those who will become a manager.
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A manager is responsible for the education of contract workers for me, among many other tasks.
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I have lent you Terapeak to see if you are suitable for a future person in charge.
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Please let me know specifically, which part of this job is hard.

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Three products you listed have sold. I will pay you $3 as promised.
Please let me ask you a question, for this is an important issue.
Do you mean you want to work for me full time?
I offer a full-time contract only to someone who becomes a manager.
The manager is responsible for training contract workers for me, among many other tasks.
I have let you use Terapeak to see if you are suitable for a managerial position in the future.
Please let me know specifically which part of this job is hard.