スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
We tracked by the tracking number, but we found that it has already arrived.
We hate to ask you, but could you please check the nearest delivery company again and
let us know if you find something new gain?

We list the URL of the tracking number below, and please refer to it.

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Thank you for contacting us.
We used the tracking number and we found that it has already arrived.
We hate to ask you, but could you please check the nearest delivery company again and
let us know if you find something has happened?

We list the URL of the tracking number below for your reference.

元の翻訳
Although I can receive compensation of 492 dollars by Ebay, but I have to return the item.
I will lose more than 150 dollars by shipping charge and the fee required for returning.
You lose the sales amount and keep only the music box.
Under this situation, I decided to use not the compensation by Ebay but the one offered at the post office where I do not have to return the item. It will be beneficial for both of us.
For this compensation, we need to make an arrangement in both countries, so I asked you to do so, but I have not received your reply yet.
If you refund 492 dollars immediately, I will change the rating.
As you will find it if you inquire the post office, you will receive the refunded money from the post office, so you will not lose even 1 dollar(you only proceed the arrangement).

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Although I can receive compensation of 492 dollars from eBay, I have to return the item.
I will lose more than 150 dollars by the shipping charge and the return shipping fee.
You lose the sales amount and keep only the [壊れた] music box.
Under this situation, I decided to use not the compensation by eBay but the one offered at the post office where I do not have to return the item. It will be beneficial for both of us.
For this compensation, we need to make an arrangement in both countries, so I asked you to do so, but I have not received your reply yet.
If you refund 492 dollars immediately, I will change the rating.
As you will find it if you inquire the post office, you will receive the refunded money from the post office, so you will not lose even 1 dollar (you only proceed the arrangement).

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I apologize to give you an inconvenience in our trading this time.
As you have not received the item at scheduled day, I will handle it.
I will suggest 2 options, so please let us know your selection.

1. Refunding
2. Send the same item again with tracking

1. I will work on it immediately.
2. I will send it in a couple of days.

I apologize to have given you an inconvenience this time.
I hate to ask you, but I will look forward to your reply.
I appreciate your understanding.

We will send it with the tracking.
We will send it by EMS.

Weight

For women

For men

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Thank you for your reply.
I apologize for causing you the inconvenience in our trading this time.
As you have not received the item at scheduled day, I will handle it [ambiguous].
I suggest 2 options, so please let us know your selection.

1. Refund
2. Send the same item again with tracking

1. I will work on it immediately.
2. I will send it in a couple of days.

I apologize for having caused you the inconvenience this time.
I hate to ask you, but I will look forward to your reply.
I appreciate your understanding.

We will send it with a tracking number.
We will send it by EMS.

Weight

For women

For men

元の翻訳
２０１４年１０月１３日（月）午後１１時５９分までに日本、香港及び豪州の２５０ドル以上の注文に発生する無料のスタンダード便の送料を受領。チェックアウトにおいて、コードFS250を入力。本オファーは、BHLDNの商品、従業員または過去の注文に適用しません。同送料を追加した場合、重量の超過、速達または翌日到着便が利用可能になります。

在庫がある商品の大部分は、注文から２４時間以内に出荷します。しかし、場合によっては、処理に４８時間懸かることがあります。

ご留意頂きたいことは、同時に注文した商品が同一日に出荷されない場合があり、商品が一時的に在庫がないまたはバックオーダーの可能性があることである。↵
これらの状況にご注意いただき、大よその出荷日の連絡をうけるでしょう。

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２０１４年１０月１３日（月）午後１１時５９分（太平洋時間）までに250ドル以上ご注文の場合、日本、香港、オーストラリアへの標準送料を無料にします。チェックアウトにおいて、コードFS250を入力してください。本オファーは、BHLDNの商品、従業員または過去の注文には適用しません。重量超過、速達、または翌日配達は追加料金になります。

在庫がある商品の大部分は、注文から２４時間以内に出荷します。しかし、場合によっては、処理に４８時間懸かることがあります。

ご留意頂きたいことは、同時に注文した商品が同一日に出荷されない場合があります。商品によってはアイテムが一時的に在庫切れや入荷待ちの場合があります。どちらの場合でも出荷のおおよその日付をご連絡いたします。

元の翻訳
I appreciate that you sent a price list and picture.
I am glad as many of them are very beautiful pictures.
I will sell the items based on them.

The size of the flat sheet that you sent is fine.

I have the following questions additionally.
If it has been listed in the before, please send the picture of the magazine.
What kind of package are you going to use when I receive it?
Which delivery company are you going to use?
May I pay by credit card?

I appreciate your cooperation in the future.

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I appreciate that you sent a price list and picture.
I am glad as many of them are very beautiful pictures.
I will sell the items based on them.

The size of the flat sheet that you sent is fine.

I have the following questions additionally.
If it has been listed in the before, please send the picture of the magazine.
What kind of package are you going to use when I receive it?
Which delivery company are you going to use?
May I pay by credit card?

Thank you for everything.

元の翻訳
I did not explain sufficiently. A and B are the members of the group ABC that sings OP of TV. It was decided that they were going to make a debut officially this time.
The group will probably not work so seriously.
The remaining one in the group of 4 members is D who was with C in DGF.
All the members excluding A and E use the Twitter.

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I did not explain sufficiently. A and B are members of the group ABC that sings OP of TV [awkward]. It was decided that they were going to make a debut officially this time.
The group will probably not work so seriously.
The remaining one in the group of 4 is D, who was with C in DGF.
All the members excluding A and E use Twitter [mistranslation].

元の翻訳
If the contract with other companies in Japan is likely to go well, please let me know.
I have to stop the listing in the magazine and press release immediately.
However, I cannot stop the one listed in the magazine on October 15th.
We appreciate your understanding.
On the listing on the 15th, we handle as an agency.

If you already decided to stop the press release and the next listing in the magazine, please let me know.
We are still in the step of consulting with other companies in Japan.
If we still have a meaning to work on it, we will continue the research and sales activity.

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If the contract with other companies in Japan is likely to go well, please let me know.
I have to stop the listing [word choice] in the magazine and press release immediately.
However, I cannot stop the one listed [word choice] in the magazine on October 15th.
We appreciate your understanding.
On the listing on the 15th, we handle [handle what?] as an agency.

If you already decided to stop the press release and the next listing in the magazine [mistranslation], please let me know.
We are still in the process of consulting with other companies in Japan [mistranslation: wrong subject].
If we still have a meaning to work on it [awkward], we will continue the research and sales activity.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

I found that I had made a mistake.
I did not know that a Japanese company other than our company had inquired↵
about the contract of Japanese regular agency to you, and you maintain it "on hold" for us.

I appreciate that you have been still conscientious with me under this kind of situation.
You are a very nice.
I had a number of troubles in my private life, but I should have handled it more promptly.
I will continue this activity.

I greatly appreciate for your great kindness that you have given to me so far.

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Thank you for your reply.

I realize that I made a mistake.
I did not know that a Japanese company other than ours had inquired about the contract of Japanese regular [?] agency to you, and you maintain [tense confusion] it "on hold" for us.

I appreciate that you have been still conscientious [word choice] with me under this kind of situation.
You are a very nice.
I had a number of troubles in my private life, but I should have handled it more promptly.
I will continue this activity.

I greatly appreciate your great kindness that you have given me so far.

元の翻訳
We report about progress of replacing the bed in the dormitory.

As a result of evaluating with an estimate, we decided to purchase the strong one that is appropriate for the use of hotel.

However, it is not much different from the one we are using now in design, but it must be comfortable since it is a new one.
As it is manufactured after we order, which is different from the one sold in the stores, we will receive it around from the beginning to the middle of December.
We appreciate your patience.
That is all we report.

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We report about progress of replacing the bed in the dormitory.

After analyzing the quotation received, we decided to purchase the strong one that is appropriate for the use in hotel.

The design is not that much different from the existing one, but it must be comfortable since it is a new one.
As it is manufactured after we order, unlike the one sold in the stores, we will receive it around from the beginning to the middle of December.
We appreciate your patience.
That is all we report.

元の翻訳
We apologize. We did not send it well.
If what you mean is not SA-1 but for T3, the item is SA-2.
We accept cancellation of the item.
We ask you to send the item to the following address.
When we receive it, we will refund the price for the item after deducting the
shipping charge via Paypal.

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We apologize. We did not send it properly.
If what you mean is not SA-1 but for T3, the item is SA-2.
We accept your cancellation of the item.
We ask you to send the item to the following address.
When we receive it, we will refund the price for the item after deducting the
shipping charge via Paypal.

元の翻訳
We are sorry that we are delayed in responding.

The cardboard box and wood cabinet were not damaged.
We think that the buffer that surrounded the CD player might have been hard, and thereby the glass was broken at the shock when it moved.
We store the packing material as it is.

We understand it.
We ask you to refund by 150 dollars.
Please refund to the Paypal account.
We will work hard obtaining the money.

We appreciate your cooperation.

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We are sorry that we are delayed in response.

The cardboard box and wood cabinet were not damaged.
We think that the buffer that surrounded the CD player might have been hard, and thereby the glass was broken at the shock when it moved.
We store the packing material as it is.

We understand it.
We ask you to refund by 150 dollars.
Please refund to the Paypal account.
We will work hard obtaining the money.

We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
We do not accept exchanging of the items. We ask your understanding about it.
If you are going to purchase the new guitar A, we will give you a discount by dollars.
Please do not miss this chance.

Finally you are coming to Japan next week. It is fall here and it is a very good season.
I would like to plan for 18th and 19th. Have you already planned the schedule?
Do you have some food that you do not want to eat?
I will also look for a restaurant.
I am not comfortable in using English, so I asked a young girl as an interpreter. Then we do not have any problem when we talk.

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We do not accept exchanging of the items. We ask your understanding about it.
If you are going to purchase the new guitar A, we will give you a discount by dollars.
Please do not miss this chance.

Finally you are coming to Japan next week. It is fall here and it is a very good season.
I would like to plan for the 18th and the 19th. Have you already planned the schedule?
Do you have some food that you do not want to eat?
I will also look for a restaurant.
I am not comfortable in using English, so I asked a young girl as an interpreter. Then we do not have any problem when we talk.

元の翻訳
I received .
Thank you.

Please send it to .

I have several questions.?
Does the price you charge include the shipping charge?
To where do I send the price?
After sending the item, could you tell me the tracking number?
From next time, may I log in and purchase without complicated arrangement?

I ask you to reply even if you are busy.

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I received .
Thank you.

Please send it to .

I have several questions.?
Does the price you charge include the shipping charge?
To where do I send the payment?
After sending the item, could you tell me the tracking number?
From next time, can I log in and simply purchase?

I please ask that you reply even though I know you are busy.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry that the item you received was damaged.
We are purchasing the same item, so we ask you a little patience.
We will send it to you as soon as possible.

Could you go to the nearest post office by bringing the item↵
you received under the current condition,and fill out the damage report?
After filling it out, could you please send a receipt number and the document scanned to me?
Then I can proceed the arrangemet of compensation for insurance at Japan Post.

We hate to give you an extra work, but we hope that you understand it.

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We are very sorry that the item you received was damaged.
We are purchasing the same item, so we ask you a little patience.
We will send it to you as soon as possible.

Could you take the damaged item and go to the nearest post office and complete a damage report please?
After filling it out, could you please send a scanned copy of the receipt number?
Then I can process insurance compensation arrangements Japan Post.

Sorry for the trouble, we kindly ask for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Good day.
Thank you for inquiry.
I will send this item by SAL.
Usually you will receive it from 2 weeks to 1 month after I send.
But I ask you to understand that we cannot expect the exact day that you receive it↵
since it is an international mail.

This is also popular in Japan.
We receive a number of orders from customers abroad.
I appreciate your inquiry this time.
If you have further questions, please let us know.
My wish is that I would like people in the world to know the items manufactured in Japan.
I am very glad that I met you via Ebay.

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Good day.
Thank you for your inquiry.
I will send this item by SAL.
Usually you will receive it from 2 weeks to 1 month after I send.
But please understand that we cannot expect [word choice] the exact day that you receive it since it is an international mail.

This is also popular in Japan.
We receive a number of orders from customers abroad.
I appreciate your inquiry this time.
If you have further questions, please let us know.
My wish is that I would like people in the world to know items manufactured in Japan.
I am very glad that I met you via eBay.

元の翻訳
How do you do?

I am yyy at xxxx Corporation.↵
I am going to be in charge of shpping from now.↵
I hope that we can be cooperative.

The following is an order. I ask you to check it.

"Please do not fail to check."↵
We ask you that you list the correct price for the price of the items in the invoice.↵
↵

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Dear (宛名),

I am yyy from xxxx Corporation. I am going to be in charge of purchase order from now on. Thank you for your cooperation in advance.

Here is the purchase order. Can you please check it?

*Important*↵
Please make sure to put correct prices on the invoice.

元の翻訳
We apologize.
It is our mistake of delivery by 100 percent.
We will refund the shipping charge.
We are asking the post office how many day are required until the item arrives.
We appreciate your patience.
It is expected to be about 10 days.
If you request cancellation, we will refund it to you in full.
What is your decision about it?
We will look forward to your reply.

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We apologize.
It is completely our mistake of delivery.
We will refund the shipping charge.
We are asking the post office how many days it takes for the item to arrive.
We appreciate your patience.
It is expected to take about 10 days.
If you request a cancellation, we will refund it to you in full.
What would you like to do?
We will look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Yes.

As I was working on this file, I used copying and pasting.
Usually they are used in other translation.

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Yes.

As I was working on this file, I used copying and pasting.
Usually these operations are used in other translation.

元の翻訳
The following address to which an invoice and item are sent is correct.

〒100-0000
Tokyo
City


I will the Master card whose last number is 2001 for the payment.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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The following address to which an invoice and item will be sent is correct.

〒100-0000
Tokyo
City


I will use the Master card whose last number is 2001 for the payment.
I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Regarding the delivery of roses, we apologize for you to take such a long time.
We checked to rose garden if they can send them earlier.
However, the growth of the roses depends on the weather, and we cannot promise to send them earlier.
We apologize that we cannot satisfy your request.
If we can send them earlier, we will let you know.
We ask for your understanding.

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Regarding the delivery of roses, we apologize for taking such a long time.
We checked to [wrong preposition] [article missing] rose garden if they can send them earlier.
However, the growth of the roses depends on the weather, and we cannot promise to send them earlier.
We apologize that we cannot satisfy your request.
If we can send them earlier, we will let you know.
We ask for your understanding.