スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
追跡方法

貴方の注文の発送後、要請に応じ、貴方が追跡できるリンクをお送りします。
本リンク及び追跡番号についてメールをご確認ください。

注意：本追跡番号を即座に確認できない場合、しばらくお待ちください。
エクスプレスカンパニーによるアップロードに時間がかかります。

間違った発送
上記の総発送時間内に荷物を受け取れない場合、IDカード,　他の有効な身分証明書または弊社ウェブサイトの登録口座へログインする際印刷する注文情報のコピーを持って、直接、近くの郵便局においてご確認ください。返品及び交換

修正後
追跡方法

貴方の注文の発送後、要請に応じ、貴方が追跡できるリンクをお送りします。
本リンク及び追跡番号についてメールをご確認ください。

注意：本追跡番号を即座に確認できない場合、しばらくお待ちください。
エクスプレスカンパニーによるアップロードに時間がかかります。

間違った発送
上記の総発送時間内に荷物を受け取れない場合、IDカード,　他の有効な身分証明書または弊社ウェブサイトの登録口座へログインする際印刷する注文情報のコピーを持って、直接、近くの郵便局においてご確認ください。↵
返品及び交換

元の翻訳
A/ I am sorry to be late in replying.
I listed a doll again today. We hope that you consider it.

B/A box that is in the picture is attached to this item.
3 boxes are attached in total.

C/The current price of the item in Japan is 60 dollars for A
and 55 dollars for B.
We can hardly find both of them in the market.
The shipping charge is around 12 dollars.
This probably is the lower price for this item.
If you still consider purchasing it, please let me know.
(I request the fee for me separately.)

修正後
A/ I am sorry to be late in replying.
I listed the doll again today. We hope that you consider it.

B/A box that is in the picture is attached to this item.
3 boxes are attached in total.

C/The current price of the item in Japan is 60 dollars for A
and 55 dollars for B.
We can hardly find both of them in the market.
The shipping charge is around 12 dollars by air.
This probably is the lowest price for this item.
If you still consider purchasing it, please let me know.
(I request a handling fee for me separately.)

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply. I am Takahashi who contacted you a few days ago. The program that I am interested in the xx. I attached a document here, Is it enough?
At last, I would like to have some information about the program such as studying abroad. What should I do if I do not have the enough language ability.

修正後
Thank you for your reply. I am Takahashi who contacted you a few days ago. The program that I am interested in is OO. I attached the document here. Is it enough?
At last, I would like to have some information about other program such as a language class . Do you have any advice if my language level is not high enough?

元の翻訳
As you said, a serial number must be printed at the back of the head in its manufacturing, but it was deleted.
The reason that I can assume is that the previous owner deleted or it was deleted while it was cleaned. We appreciate that you purchase it by understanding it in advance.

Thank you for indicating it. If you do not mind, would you tell me the difference of the models?
Please tell me from which part you have decided it.

修正後
As you said, a serial number must be printed at the back of the head in its manufacturing, but it was deleted.
The reasons I can assume is that the previous owner deleted it or it was deleted while it was cleaned. We appreciate that you purchase it by understanding it in advance.

Thank you for indicating it. If you do not mind, would you tell me the difference of the models?
Please tell me from which part you have decided it.↵
↵
Best quality

元の翻訳
Thank you for your e-mail. I was just in time for the board meeting.

We had the following opinions in the meeting.
For introduction of A, we need a special native speaker and those who
have an experience in the management training. It is difficult to find these
kinds of people among the staff we have now.
We will be able to start B soon and C is easy to understand.

As we are going to discuss a partner company and the personnel based on these opinions, may we have a little more time?
May we localize only the B first?
Is it more appropriate for us to negotiate with a person in charge of the sales in your company hereafter?

修正後
Thank you for your e-mail. I was just in time for the board meeting.

We had the following opinions in the meeting.
In regards to the introduction of A, we need a dedicated native speaker and those who
have experiences in the management training. It is difficult to find those
kinds of people among the staff we have now.
We will be able to start B soon and C is easy to understand.

As we are going to discuss a partner company and a personnel based on these opinions, may we have a little more time?
May we localize only the B first?
Is it more appropriate for us to negotiate with a person in charge of the sales in your company hereafter?

元の翻訳
I listed that there was a mold at the lens, and I reduced the price much lower than that offered in the market. As it is an used one, people understand the condition differently.
If you do not understand it, you recommend that you do not purchased the used one, and purchase
the new one instead.

This time I paid for the shipping charge for returning the item, so you have not suffered from any loss. I cannot understand why you call me a swindler.

The problem is that you have not returned the accessory to me.
You must be swindling me.
I wonder why you are so dishonest?

修正後
I listed that there was a mold on the lens, and I reduced the price much lower than the price offered in the market. As it is an used one, people take the conditions of products differently.
If you do not understand this point, I recommend that you do not purchase the used one, and purchase
the new one instead.

This time I paid for the shipping charge for returning the item, so you have not suffered any loss. I cannot understand why you called me a swindler.

The problem is that you have not returned the accessory to me.
You must be swindling me.
I wonder why you are so dishonest?

元の翻訳
We have a reason why it took a little time to reply you.
When we were making a final checkup before sending xx that you had ordered, we found a problem.
The truss rod was broken when we were adjusting the neck.
We received it as "USED", but it was repaired to make the broken one appear the perfect one before we received it, and it was broken when we were adjusting this time.
We hate to say, but we cannot sell this guitar to you this time. We apologize to you.
We are very sorry to have caused you an inconvenience. We hope that you understand the situation above.

修正後
We have a reason why it took some time to reply you.
When we were making a final checkup before sending xx that you had ordered, we found a problem.
The truss rod was broken when we were adjusting the neck.
We received it as "USED", but it was repaired to make the broken one appears to be the perfect one before we received it, and it was broken when we were adjusting this time.
We hate to say, but we cannot sell this guitar to you this time. We apologize to you.
We are very sorry to have caused you an inconvenience. We hope that you understand the situation above.

元の翻訳
We cannot receive an undervalued invoice in any situation. we send an e-mail to you twice.
We can accept the returned items within 2 weeks subject to the policy of xx. The followings are the rules and conditions for returning the items.

1. A customer must pay for the shipping charge for returning the items and the duties at the customs
in Japan when the customers return the items to Japan.
2. We will refund you after checking that the condition of the items is the same as the one when it is sent.
3. The items sent must be insured by 100 percent with a tracking number.
4. A customer must pay for the cost required for returning the items..

修正後
We cannot receive an undervalued invoice in any situation. we send an e-mail to you twice.
We can accept the returned items within 2 weeks subject to the policy of xx. The followings are the rules and conditions for returning the items.

1. A customer must pay for the shipping charge for returning the items and the duties at the customs
in Japan when the customers return the items to Japan.
2. We will refund you after checking that the condition of the items is the same as the one when it is sent.
3. The items sent must be insured fully with a tracking number.
4. A customer must pay for the cost required for returning the items..

元の翻訳
I received the lens, but the hood and filter have not been returned yet. The front cap and the back cap are not the ones that had been attached originally. What is worse is that the front cap that was returned is 49 millimeters, which means that it is not a correct size and it is not manufactured by Nikon, either.
Why did it happen? Could you return the accessory that had been attached originally?
I am in an inconvenience. I will refund you after checking the returned item.

I will refund you if you change the low rating to higher one.

修正後
I received the lens, but the hood and filter have not been returned yet. The front cap and the back cap are not the ones that had been attached originally. What is worse is that the front cap that was returned is 49 millimeters, which means that it is not a correct size and it is not manufactured by Nikon, either.
Why did it happen? Could you return the accessories that had been attached originally?
I am in an inconvenience. I will refund you after everything returned.

I will refund you if you change the negative feedback to the positive one.

元の翻訳
I would like to check regarding delivery.
I have not received the bath mat that I ordered in the beginning of this month
in Japan yet.
I listed the day when I made an order and a list of items that have↵
not arrived in Japan.

The following items arrived in Japan on January 27th.

A large size color: I heard that the ivory is the back order.
Are other sizes and the colors also the back order?
If you had already sent, could you tell me the tracking number of the items
that I ordered on January 6ht, 9th and 13th?
I will also contact a delivery company that receives the items all the time.

修正後
I would like to check the delivery status.
I have not received the bath mat that I ordered in the beginning of this month
in Japan yet.
Below is the list of dates I ordered and items that I ordered and I have not received.

The following items arrived in Japan on January 27th.

A large size color: I heard that the ivory is the back order.
Are other sizes and the colors also the back order?
If you had already sent them, could you tell me the tracking number of the items
that I ordered on January 6th, 9th and 13th?
I will also contact a delivery company that receives the items all the time in New Jersey.

元の翻訳
What a coincidence! I had been also absent from the work until yesterday due to the influenze.
Would you please send A as soon as possible?


My name is Yamada who made a reservation from January 28th to February 3rd.
I am going to stay at your hotel with my wife on our honeymoon.
I am very excited since this is my first trip to Hawaii in 7 years.
We will arrive at Oahu Airport at 10 o'clock in the morning,
and will be at your hotel a little after 11 o'clock.
May we check in earlier than the regular checking hour?
If it is impossible, may we leave our personal belongings ↵
at the front desk?

修正後
What a coincidence! I had been also absent from the work until yesterday due to the influenze.
Would you please send A as soon as possible?


My name is Yamada who made a reservation from January 28th to February 3rd.
I am going to stay at your hotel with my wife on our honeymoon.
I am very excited since I have not come to Hawaii for 7 years.
We will arrive at Oahu Airport at 10 o'clock in the morning,
and will be at your hotel a little after 11 o'clock.
May we check in earlier than the regular check-in time?
If it is impossible, may we leave our luggage at the front desk?

元の翻訳
I cannot register as a user. Do you have an account for demonstration?
The page where the contract of the use is listed is not shown. either.
I can see only the picture of the loading.

It has not been fixed yet. I do not see any change after pushing the button of ABC.

修正後
I cannot register as a user. Do you have an account for demonstration?
The page where the terms of use is listed is not shown either.
I can see only the image that says it is loading.

It has not been fixed yet. I do not see any change after pushing the button ABC.

元の翻訳
Let me apologize. I was wrong.
The form of the connector of the item I was looking for is letter L.

修正後
Let me apologize. I was wrong.
The connector of the item I was looking for is in the form of the letter L.

元の翻訳
本レビュー中、顧客のフィードバック及び受領したAからZまでの保証のクレームを含んだ貴口座の内容を調査します。
ここで大切なことは、貴方の掲載の削除に先立ち、貴方による完了済みの注文の実行を継続することです。
その理由は、レビューの一環として貴注文からの購入者のフィードバックを使用するからです。

１．相当するアマゾンの注文番号と共に出荷される商品の追跡番号
２．販売のページへのリンクを含んだ現在の小売またはオンラインによる販売ルート
３．貴方の在庫源を含んだ貴ビジネスの仔細な説明
４．アマゾンへ掲載計画のある在庫量及び発送の対象となる商品の可能性

修正後
本レビュー中、顧客のフィードバック及び受領したAからZまでの保証クレームを含んだ貴アカウントの業績を調査します。
ここで大切なことは、貴方の掲載商品リストの削除に先立ち、完了済みの注文の調達を継続することです。
その理由は、レビューの一環として注文に対する購入者のフィードバックを使用するからです。

１．相当するアマゾンの注文番号と共に出荷される商品の追跡番号
２．販売のページへのリンクを含んだ現在の小売またはオンラインによる販売ルート
３．貴方の在庫源を含んだ貴ビジネスの仔細な説明
４．アマゾンへ出品計画のある商品の在庫量及び発送の対象となる商品の可能性↵

元の翻訳
I asked you to proofread a thesis in English a few days ago.
Regarding the magazine rejected, I received a comment from a reader and then
I added some corrections to the original one. May I ask you to proofread the corrected part again? I can pay you the additional fee. I would like you to work on it as soon as possible. I appreciate your cooperation.

I attached the one after you proofread a few days ago and the one that was corrected this time. The corrected part is written in red ink.

修正後
I asked you to proofread [edit] an article[manuscript] in English a few days ago.
Regarding the journal that rejected the manuscript, I received comments from a reviewer so
I added some corrections to the original one. May I ask you to proofread the corrected part again? I would like you to work on it as soon as possible even if it costs additional fee. I appreciate your cooperation.

I attached the manuscript you edited last time and the one that I added corrections this time. The corrected part is shown in red.

元の翻訳
I asked you to proofread a thesis in English a few days ago.
Regarding the magazine rejected, I received a comment from a reader and then
I added some corrections to the original one. May I ask you to proofread the corrected part again? I can pay you the additional fee. I would like you to work on it as soon as possible. I appreciate your cooperation.

I attached the one after you proofread a few days ago and the one that was corrected this time. The corrected part is written in red ink.

修正後
I asked you to proofread a thesis in English a few days ago.
Regarding the magazine rejected, I received a comment from a reader and then
I added some corrections to the original one. May I ask you to proofread the corrected part again? I can pay you the additional fee. I would like you to work on it as soon as possible. I appreciate your cooperation.

I attached the one you proofread a few days ago and the one that was corrected this time. The corrected part is written in red.

元の翻訳
We apologize to you.
We made a mistake in setting the price due to the mistake
of registering the condition.
We do not have the new inventory for those items.
All the item you ordered are registered under the condition of
the used one.
We hate to ask you, but could you request the cancellation of the order at the Amazon?
You can cancel it subject to the following procedure.

修正後
We apologize to you.
We made a mistake in setting the price due to the mistake
of registering the condition.
We do not have the new inventory for those items.
All the item you ordered are registered under the condition of
the used one.
We hate to ask you, but could you request the cancellation of the order at the Amazon?
You can cancel it in accordance with the following procedure.

元の翻訳
At the translation of Job/1626934, I forgot to add a new term.
Would you add the following?

How are you working on the payment of the invoice issued for December that
we contacted a few days ago?
As we settle our finance this month, we need to solve it as early as possible.
We hate to ask you while you are busy, but we appreciate your cooperation.
If we have to prepare something, please let us know.

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
At the translation of Job/1626934, I forgot to add a new term.
Would you add the following?

How are you working on the payment of the invoice issued for October that
we contacted a few days ago?
As we settle our finance this month, we need to solve it as early as possible.
We hate to ask you while you are busy, but we appreciate your cooperation.
If we have to prepare something, please let us know.

We appreciate your understanding.