スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
※ We will hand 1 participation ticket of the hands shaking for 1 ticket you have.
※ As you cannot participate in the hands shaking if you lose the participation ticket, please be careful not to lose it. (We will not reissue the participation ticket of the hands shaking regardless of the reason such as loss, theft, damage, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.)
※ You are not allowed to hand a present or letter to a performer in person in the hands shaking. Would you please hand it to the staff near you?
※ When we sell out the items, we will stop handing out the participation ticket. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

修正後
※ We will hand 1 participation ticket for the hands shaking event in exchange for 1 ticket.
※ As you cannot participate in the hands shaking if you lose the participation ticket, please be careful not to lose it. (The participation ticket for the hands shaking event will not be reissued under any circumstances, may them be loss, theft, damage, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.)
※ You are not allowed to hand a present or letter to a performer in person during the hands shaking event. Please hand it to a member of the staff near you.
※ We appreciate your understanding in advance that we will stop handing participation tickets for the hands shaking event when we run out of stock.

元の翻訳
私が知っている限りでは、申告額が２０００米ドルを超過しない場合、輸入、通関及び関税の支払いは請求されないそうです。再度、日本からの他のギターの購入においてこの類の請求はありませんでした。

これらの請求が無作為に行われることがあることは知悉しております。

確認のため、詳細を追及中であり、購入意欲は衰えておりません。まもなく連絡します。

イーベイ経由で購入して欲しいのですね。そうすれば、貴方は手数料を支払うことになり、儲からなくなりますね。

修正後
私が知っている限りでは、申告額が２０００米ドルを超過しない場合、輸入、通関及び関税の支払いは請求されないそうです。繰り返しになりますが、日本からの他のギターの購入においてこの類の請求はありませんでした。

これらの請求が無作為に行われることがあることは知悉しております。

確認のため、詳細を追及中であり、購入意欲は衰えておりません。まもなく連絡します。

イーベイ経由で購入して欲しいのですね。そうすれば、貴方は手数料を支払うことになり、入る金額も少なくなりますね。

元の翻訳
※ We will close the sales when we sell out the special bonus and the items.
※ The signature is printed out. We hope that you understand it in advance.

Please refer to here for the AAA Party official shop (for personal computer and mobile phone)
（PC）http://shop.mu-mo.net/avx/sv/list1?jsiteid=APY&categ_id=800272
（MB）http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/avx/sv/list1?jsiteid=APY&categ_id=800272

修正後
※ We will close the sales when we sell out the special bonus and the items.
※ The autograph is printed out. Please understand it in advance.

Please refer to here for the AAA Party official shop (for personal computer and mobile phone)
（PC）http://shop.mu-mo.net/avx/sv/list1?jsiteid=APY&categ_id=800272
（MB）http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/avx/sv/list1?jsiteid=APY&categ_id=800272

元の翻訳
※　If you select a payment at a convenience store and joins it (make a payment) before 23:50 January 15th (Wednesday) 2014, you can purchase it with the special bonus only for AAA Party.
※ However, if we sell out the special bonus and the items, we will close the sales by reservation.

Please refer to here for AAA Party official shop (for personal computer and mobile phone).
http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/APY.html

★ Original special bonus of the mu-mo shop★
Original and live picture ( 7 in a set)

修正後
※　If you select a payment at a convenience store and join it (make a payment) before 23:50 of January 15th (Wednesday) 2014, you can purchase it with the special bonus only for AAA Party.
※ However, if we sell out the special bonus and the items, we will close the reservation.

Please refer to here for AAA Party official shop (for personal computer and mobile phone).
http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/APY.html

★ Original special bonus of the mu-mo shop★
Original and live pictures ( 7 in a set)

元の翻訳
We accept the reservation at 23:59 January 21st (Tuesday) 2014 at the latest.
※ However, if we sell out the special bonus and items, we will close the sales by reservation.

Please refer to mu-mo shop here (for both personal computer and mobile phone)
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?artist_id=AAAXX

★SEVENNETSHOPPING Original special bonus
Original post card (picture A)

修正後
We accept the reservation at 23:59 on January 21st (Tuesday) 2014 at the latest.
※ However, if we sell out the special bonus and items, we will close the reservation.

Please refer to mu-mo shop here (for both personal computer and mobile phone)
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?artist_id=AAAXX

★SEVENNETSHOPPING Original special bonus
Original post card (picture A)

元の翻訳
まもなく値上げしますが、利用の際の新たなコードをお知らせしますので、これまでと同じ値段で購入できます。これにより、以前よりも得しますね。

ご迷惑をおかけしたこと再度お詫びします。ご理解に感謝します。

修正後
まもなく値上げしますが、あなたが注文なさる時に利用の際の新たなコードをお知らせしますので、これまでと同じ値段で購入できます。これにより、以前よりも得をしますね。

ご迷惑をおかけしたこと再度お詫びします。また、ご理解に感謝します。

元の翻訳
As you indicated, we checked and found that the date and time of the sending listed and its actual date and time are completely different.

We apologize for giving you an inconvenience.

All our staff consider it again, and will make an effort to prevent it happening again.
We appreciate that you indicated to us.

修正後
As you indicated, we checked what was going on and found that the listed delivery date and time were completely different from the actual ones.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused.

All our staff will think about why the incident occurred, and will make an effort to prevent it from happening again.
Thank you for letting us know.

元の翻訳
The returned amount is not enough. Why do you handle it so unconscientiously?

I purchased 18 pieces from you and paid in full on the day.
However, among which, I received only 4 pieces.
Would you refund the amount for the remaining 14 pieces in full?

The total of the 14 pieces that I have not received is 2748.68 dollars.
I received 669.54 dollars from you.
So please refund the remaining 2079.14 dollars immediately.

修正後
The returned amount is not enough. Why do you handle it so unconscientiously?

I purchased 18 pieces from you and paid in full on the day.
However, among which, I received only 4 pieces.
Would you refund the full amount for the remaining 14 pieces?

The total amount for the 14 pieces that I have not received is 2748.68 dollars.
I received 669.54 dollars from you.
So please refund the remaining 2079.14 dollars immediately.

元の翻訳
The returned amount is not enough. Why do you handle it so unconscientiously?

I purchased 18 pieces from you and paid in full on the day.
However, among which, I received only 4 pieces.
Would you refund the amount for the remaining 14 pieces in full?

The total of the 14 pieces that I have not received is 2748.68 dollars.
I received 669.54 dollars from you.
So please refund the remaining 2079.14 dollars immediately.

修正後
The returned amount is not enough. Why do you handle it so unconscientiously?

I purchased 18 pieces from you and paid in full on the day.
However, among those, I received only 4 pieces.
Would you refund the amount for the remaining 14 pieces in full?

The total of the 14 pieces that I have not received is 2748.68 dollars.
I received 669.54 dollars from you.
So please refund the remaining 2079.14 dollars immediately.

元の翻訳
Have you used your picture as the icon of the Facebook before?
I thought that I had seen it before I started to follow you.↵
I wonder if I am correct?
I am going to go to an English school from next month or the month after the next.
If I can speak English, I can be at higher position at the work, expand the view and what is the best is that I can speak with you.↵
I worried and did not have courage regarding if I can continue to learn English as it takes time and costs money. I will work hard. Would you please support me?

修正後
Weren't you using your picture as your Facebook icon before?
I thought that I had seen it before I started to follow you, am I right?
I am going to go to an English school starting next month or the month after that.
If I can speak English, I can work at higher position, expand my world and, most of all, speak with you.↵
I was anxious about the fact that going to this school will be costly and time consuming, and worried that I might not be able to continue attending. This prevented me from gathering up the courage to start, but I have decided to make my best and try. I would appreciate your support!

元の翻訳
Have you used your picture as the icon of the Facebook before?
I thought that I had seen it before I started to follow you.
I wonder if I am correct?
I am going to go to an English school from next month or the month after the next.
If I can speak English, I can be at higher position at the work, expand the view and what is the best is that I can speak with you.
I worried and did not have courage regarding if I can continue to learn English as it takes time and costs money. I will work hard. Would you please support me?

修正後
Did you used to use your own picture as your Facebook icon?
I think I saw it before I started following you.
Am I mistaken?
I am thinking about starting English school either next month or the following month.
No doubt people who can speak English at work have an advantage and I'm sure it broadens your horizons, but most of all I'll be able to talk to you.
Going to an English school takes time and money, and I just couldn't sum up the courage since I was concerned whether I could keep going or not, but I think I'm going to give it my best shot! Hope you support me!

元の翻訳
In case where you receive the item with defect
If you receive the item with a defect, we will exchange it with the same item immediately.↵
If we do not have the item we can exchange in the stock, we will refund you. We will pay for the ↵
shipping charge required for returning it.

In case where you receive the item that is different from what you ordered
If you receive the item that is different from what you ordered, we ask you to return it.↵
After you return the item, we will exchange it with the item that you had ordered immediately.↵
If we do not have the item that we can exchange in the stock, we will refund you.

修正後
In case you receive a defective item
If you receive a item with a defect, we will replace it for the same item immediately. If we do not have the item we can exchange in stock, we will refund you. We will pay for the shipping charge required for returning it.

In case you receive an item different from what you ordered
If you receive an item that is different from what you ordered, we ask you to return it. After you return the item, we will exchange it for the item you ordered immediately. If we do not have the item in stock, we will refund you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
We answer regarding above.

We made you worry and inconvenient.
Although we cannot recognized the cause, it might be a problem of the driver.
Would you install the newest driver at the homepage, and try to access it again?
URL:

As we would also like to check its cause, may we know the specification of your personal computer?

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.
Here is our answer regarding the above-mentioned.

We are sorry for the inconvenience caused.
Although we cannot recognize the cause, it might be a problem of the driver.
Would you install the newest driver from the homepage, and try to access it again?
URL:

As we would also like to check its cause, may we know the specification of your personal computer?

元の翻訳
Good day!
I checked the tracking information, and found that it is in the process of customs clearance. I apologize to have kept you for a long time. May I ask you a little more patience?

修正後
Good day!
I checked the tracking information, and found that it is in the process of custom clearance. I apologize for having kept you waiting for a long time. May I ask you a little more patience?

元の翻訳
(MiCOAMERi feat CHIAKI from AAA Collaboration)Ribon lady watch: 5,990 Yen including tax
(MiCOAMERi feat CHIAKI from AAA Collaboration)Bicolor 2 way bag: 7,490 Yen

We are looking forward to seeing you at the hall of the talk show.

(Sales of items at the hall)
We are going to start to sell the items by priority 1 hour before the opening.
However, it is subject to change due to the situation on the day.

修正後
(MiCOAMERi feat CHIAKI from AAA Collaboration)Ribon lady watch: 5,990 Yen including tax
(MiCOAMERi feat CHIAKI from AAA Collaboration)Bicolor 2 way bag: 7,490 Yen

We are looking forward to seeing you at the hall of the talk show.

(Sales of items at the hall)
We are going to start to sell the items from 1 hour before the opening.
However, it is subject to change due to the situation on the day.

元の翻訳
(Acceptance of general ticket)
10:00～December 7th (Sunday)
L code: 0570-084-005
http://l-tike.com

We are going to hold the hands shaking only for those who purchase the items.
We are going to sell the items that are sold at the chiaki's shop gallery and the very popular collaboration items.

We sell them at the chiaki's shop gallery in the hall.
chiaki mirror (chiaki's shop gallery version) 1,600 Yen including tax
We will hold the hands shaking for those who purchase the items after the end of the talk show.

修正後
(Acceptance of general ticket)
10:00～December 7th (Sunday)
L code: 0570-084-005
http://l-tike.com

We are going to hold the hands shaking only for those who purchase the items.
We are going to sell the items that are sold at the chiaki's shop gallery and very popular collaboration items.

We sell them at the chiaki's shop gallery in the hall.
chiaki mirror (chiaki's shop gallery version) 1,600 Yen including tax
We will hold the hands shaking for those who purchase the items after the end of the talk show.

元の翻訳
(Hands shaking for those who purchase the items)

We are going to hold the hands shaking for those who purchase the "chiaki mirror (chiaki's shop gallery version)" after the end of the event on the day.
As we will hand 1 participation ticket of the hands shaking per ticket you have, please have your ticket ready when purchasing the item.

※ When we check your ticket, we are going to stamp the "finished" at the back of the
ticket while hand you 1 participation of the hands shaking.

修正後
(Hands shaking for those who purchase the items)

We are going to hold the hands shaking for those who purchase the "chiaki mirror (chiaki's shop gallery version)" after the end of the event on the day.
As we will hand 1 participation ticket of the hands shaking per ticket you have, please have your ticket ready when purchasing the item.

※ When we check your ticket, we are going to stamp the "finished" at the back of the
ticket while handing you 1 participation of the hands shaking.