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The following product is very popular in Japan.
It will be desirable that the condition of other product is similar to new and/or quite good.

If I can place an order for it, kindly let me know the total price including shipping cost.

I would appreciate it if you could let me know when a novelty comes in including products of TourIssue.

I would like to have particular a golf ball with signature of a Japanese player, etc.
Products of the following players are popular and it is very nice of you to kindly let me know when you have.

If possible, I would like to purchase ones actually used in a tournament with a certificate.

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The following product is very popular in Japan.
It will be desirable that the condition of other product is similar to new and/or quite good.

If I can place an order for it, kindly let me know the total price including shipping cost.

I would appreciate it if you could let me know when a novelty comes in including products of TourIssue.

I would like to have golf balls with signature of a Japanese player, etc.
Products of the following players are popular and it is very nice of you to kindly let me know when you have.

If possible, I would like to purchase ones actually used in a tournament with a certificate.

元の翻訳
You visited at Nakano station sometimes. It would be fun if I pass you on the road!
I was really scared by that earthquake. The area I live is the landfill area so I suffered from liquefaction but I heard that the land under my house was the island, not the landfill area.
So I was safe. There is no need to worry.
I divert myself in Tokyo area such as Shibuya, Ebisu, Shinjuku and Roppongi.
I go for drink, go to Karaoke, play darts with my friends. I go to bars in Roppongi to study English by chatting with Americans. As I am not good at speaking English, I am bit scared to speak with people I don’t know.

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You visited Nakano station often. It would be funny if we were passing each other somewhere without noticing it!
I was really scared by that earthquake. The area where I live is the landfill area so I suffered from liquefaction but apparently the the land under my house was the island, not the landfill area.
So I was safe. There is no need to worry.
I divert myself in Tokyo area such as Shibuya, Ebisu, Shinjuku and Roppongi.
I go for a drink, go to Karaoke, play darts with my friends. I go to bars in Roppongi to study English by chatting with Americans. As I'm an inexperienced English speaker, I am bit scared to speak with someone I don't know.

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For the film, the atmosphere is slightly different from the previous one, however it can be found the great improvements of quality. I do not know it is because of the film director, but the film is well created and attractive. The collaboration with A just upped this month is also fantastic. Would you select the lead music from them? In Japan, audience might prefer him in more POP position, but I support current his stance. It is ideal for our side to release it on sale around ○. What do you think about it? I really would like to move on the negotiation with you further, and he will contact you after concluding our conditions.
Thank you very much for your cooperation in advance,

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For the film, the atmosphere is slightly different from the previous one, however it can be found the great improvements of quality. I do not know it is because of the film director, but the film is well created and attractive overall. The collaboration with A just upped this month is also fantastic. Would you select the lead music from them? In Japan, audience might prefer him in more POP position, but I support current his stance. It is ideal for our side to release it on sale around ○. What do you think about it? I really would like to move on the negotiation with you further, and he will contact you after concluding our conditions.
Thank you very much for your cooperation in advance,

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I am interested in R1 Shallow 440cc, though I do not have enough knowledge about that at all because of not selling in Japan yet.
Could you tell me about differences R1 V1-V3 and R1 Shallow concretely?

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I am interested in R1 Shallow 440cc, though I do not have enough product knowledge about that at all because it has not been on sales in Japan yet.
Could you tell me about differences R1 V1-V3 and R1 Shallow concretely?

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Hello,

My name is ○○.

I'm making a contact to you since I've got interested in your product in your online store.

For example, if I order item below, how the size of box will be when arriving?

Product name:
Product ID:
URL:

Please let me know the length of 3 sides.

Also, please tell me the shipping fee.

I'm sorry for asking so many at once,
but please concern it.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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Hello,

My name is ○○.

I'm contacting you since I'm interested in your product in your online store.

For example, if I order item below, how the size of box will be when arriving?

Product name:
Product ID:
URL:

Please let me know the length of 3 sides.

Also, please tell me the shipping fee.

I'm sorry for asking so many questions at once,
but please concern it.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
The original is also very cute!
Please let me carry out this negotiation.
1. Send me the price list.
2. Will the product will be sent form Viet Nam?
3. Please let me know about Terms of trade. FOB is possible?
4. Leather case and package of nail clippers is different. Do you have intention to produce 1 package next time?
1 sample was dented in the bottom of the tin case.
Because the nail clippers is the case including product, if it was dented we can nor sell it in Japan. Please check the tin case carefully if it is dented or not before shipping

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The original is also very cute!
Please let me carry out this negotiation.
1. Send me the price list.
2. Will the product be sent form Viet Nam?
3. Please let me know about Terms of trade. Is FOB possible?
4. Leather case and package of nail clippers are different. Do you have intention to produce 1 package next time?
1 sample was dented in the bottom of the tin case.
Because the nail clippers is the case including product, if it was dented we can not sell it in Japan. Please check the tin case carefully if it is dented or not before shipping

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But, Your Evaluation is 100%. So i really satisfied with your support.
Therefore i sent this message before evaluating.
About shipment,please be careful in packing the luggage.
International shipment, the goods is arranged very violently, so it is easy to be damaged.
Packing the product in box is easy to be damaged.
I really appreciate your support but i am not satisfied with the condition of product.

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But, Your Evaluation is 100%. So I'm really satisfied with your support.
Therefore i sent this message before evaluating.
About shipment,please be careful in packing the luggage.
International shipment, the goods is arranged very violently, so it is easy to be damaged.
Packing the product in box is easy to be damaged.
I really appreciate your support but i am not satisfied with the condition of product.

元の翻訳
This a tour which is destinated to our company's affiliates.

Please feel free to contact us in case you would like to participate in it.
Reservation, reception and settlement are performed at the front in desk.
(In some cases it might not be possible to accepbusiness acommodations)

The transportation will be free of charge.

The guests will be picked up at the accomodation site and after the the program, the guest will wither be taken to the Kawaguchiko station
or to the accomodation place.


The accomodation place which is handling the optional tour will be here.
The actual program consists about a Canadian canoe experience.
Please refer to the below information:

In the side of the car, there is an illustration of the World Heritage, the Fuji mountain.
We will perform the transportation of children and adults.

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This a tour which is destinated to our company's affiliates.

Please feel free to contact us in case you would like to participate in it.
Reservation, reception and settlement are performed at the front in desk.
(In some cases it might not be possible to accepbusiness acommodations)

The transportation will be free of charge.

The guests will be picked up at the accomodation site and after the the program, the guest will wither be taken to the Kawaguchiko station
or to the accomodation place.


The accomodation place which is handling the optional tour will be here.
The actual program consists about a Canadian canoe experience.
Please refer to the below information:

In the side of the car, there is an illustration of the World Heritage, the Mt.Fuji.
We will perform the transportation of children and adults.

元の翻訳
Contest result announcement

In application period from September 1st to 30th,406 works has been applied.
Then, we spent the voting period "your COOL determines ranking"
Sorry for keep you waiting. Now is the announcement of the result!
The high-ranking prizewinner chosen among 406 applications and the first champion were decided to everybody above
We will inform to the winner the shipment of the prize by an email.
Please be careful that an email from administration is not blocked.
ten days after this announcement if there is no answer the winner will lose the right to receive the prize

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The contest result announcement

In application period from September 1st to 30th,406 works has been applied.
Then, we spent the voting period "your COOL determines ranking"
Sorry for keep you waiting. Now is the announcement of the result!
The high-ranking prize winners chosen among 406 applications and the first champion were decided to everybody above
We will inform to the winners the shipment of the prize by an email.
Please be careful that an email from administration is not blocked.
ten days after this announcement if there is no answer the winner will lose the right to receive the prize

元の翻訳
It's been while. Thank you for efficient handling and prompt response as always.

Here is our order for this time.
A
B

And there was 2 damaged items in the last order, which were the neon tube of A and B. Please see attached photos.
As same as last order, could you send new parts to replace A and B with current order?

And as for C, I damaged it by mistake when I was trying to attach to the neon tube. So could you send new one as same as before?
I'm paying for the cost of the part C as I have damaged it by myself. Please send me the invoice.

I'm looking forward hearing from you.

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It's been a while. Thank you for efficient handling and prompt response as always.

Here is our orders for this time.
A
B

And there were 2 damaged items in the last order, which were the neon tube of A and B. Please check the attached photos.
As same as last order, could you send new parts to replace A and B with current order?

And as for C, I damaged it by mistake when I was trying to attach to the neon tube. So could you send new one as same as before?
I'm paying for the cost of the part C as I have damaged it by myself. Please send me the invoice.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
You need the documents of 5 kinds when you ship to amazonFBA.
1st: "Goods label"
2nd: "Delivery slip"
3rd: "Shipping label"
4th: "Slip of DHL"
5th: "Invoice"

You can ship 4th and 5th as before, but there 1 thing in particular ↵
you should pay attention to.
There are "receiver payment" or "sender payment" about custom duty.
It has to be "sender payment".

If it is not "sender payment", amazon does not receive it.

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You need the documents of 5 kinds when you ship to amazonFBA.
1st: "Goods label"
2nd: "Delivery slip"
3rd: "Shipping label"
4th: "Slip of DHL"
5th: "Invoice"

You can ship 4th and 5th as before, but there is 1 thing in particular you should pay attention to.
That is to whether set "receiver payment" or "sender payment" about custom duty.
It has to be "sender payment".

If it is not "sender payment", amazon does not receive it.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your shipping
It is a little bit quick but if it is possible we want to order one more time in this month.
Could you confirm the stock of the following items
In addition, I think that you can send it together if there is the latest list.
Thank you for your help.

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Thank you for shipping!
I know this is sudden but we want to order one more time in this month.
Could you confirm the stock of the following items
In addition, I think that you can send it together if there is the latest list.
Thank you for your help.