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Regarding the serial number, I have confirmed with the person in charge.
Up till now, we have managed with serial number but some models, including this one, were apparently decided to number separately.

There is no change for specifications and it's completely on the situation in the M company.
By the way, this model's serial number we sent to Mr.Rally this year is LG *. Your base will be the next LG*!

This excellent base is very elegant and high quality. Please enjoy excellent sound forever.

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Regarding the serial number, I have confirmed with the person in charge.
Up to now, we have managed with serial number but some models, including this one, were apparently decided to be numbered separately.

There is no change in specifications and it's completely the internal matter of the company M.
By the way, this model's serial number we sent to Mr.Rally this year is LG *. Your base will be the next LG*!

This excellent base is very elegant and high quality. Please enjoy excellent sound forever.

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Hello.
Sorry for contacting you late.
I was on business trip since last night and could not check email.
Regarding the payment, I have one favor. Since I would like to pay via my new card after the registration in Paypal, could you wait until November 1st? I will return on 1st and will immediately register and make a payment.
Thank you in advance.

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Hello.
Sorry for contacting you late.
I was on a business trip since last night and could not check my email.
Regarding the payment, I have one favor to ask. Since I would like to pay via my new card after it is registered with Paypal, could you wait until November 1st? I will return on the 1st and will immediately register and make the payment.
Thank you in advance.

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Were you busy with that job?
Luke, you have such a various job experience!
I think that's great.
So, what kind of job are you looking for next?

Design is difficult but fun
The best thing is to create something that pleases customers but...
Sometimes, there are clients who do not share the same preference and I had stress from crashing over and over again with those clients.
Now, I try to remember that it's just a job

Wow! You saw me? LOL
Please talk to me next time you see me.
I want to drink a toast with you soon!

Oh! I listened to Pink Floyd's song
The name is..."Dogs"

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Were you busy with that job?
Luke, you have such a various job experience!
I think that's great.
So, what kind of job are you looking for now?

Design is difficult but fun
The best thing is to create something that pleases customers but...
Sometimes, there are clients who do not share the same preference and I had stress from crashing over and over again with those clients.
Now, I try to remember that it's just a job

Wow! You saw me? LOL
Please talk to me next time you see me.
I want to drink a toast with you soon!

Oh! I listened to Pink Floyd's song
It's called..."Dogs"

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The input screen for order content has "Save Your Order" and "Check Your Order" button.
Even if you push "Save Your Order" button, the order will not be sent. Please be aware that the button is for temporarily saving inputed content.

Please refer to "Read The Rules" in Order Entry Page for detailed rules such as ordering period and quantity.

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The input screen for order content has "Save Your Order" and "Check Your Order" buttons.
Even if you push "Save Your Order" button, the order will not be sent. Please be aware that the button is for temporarily saving inputed content.

Please refer to "Read The Rules" in Order Entry Page for detailed rules such as ordering period and quantity.

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Dear cutomer,
Apology and notification.

Among many other shops, thank you very much for purchasing the item from our shop this time.
As we have informed you by email, the item you have purchased has been damaged. We're sorry to put you into this trouble. We're very sorry.

As you are maintaining high rate for feedbacks, we are aware of your common sense so as to understand our incomepetence and we believe you can forgive us.

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Dear customer,
Apology and notification.

Among many other shops, thank you very much for purchasing the item from our shop this time.
As we have informed you by email, the item you have purchased has been damaged. We're sorry to put you into this trouble. We're very sorry.

As you are maintaining high rate for feedbacks, we are aware of your common sense so as to understand our incomepetence and we believe you can forgive us.

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The ordered payment was refunded.

Since Paypal is under your investigating, we could not ship the item.

Please submit an inquiry to Paypal for the detail.

Without the Paypal's approval, we cannot proceed to the shipping.

Please order again after you have been approved by Paypal.

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The ordered payment has been refunded.

Since your Paypal account is still under investigation, we could not ship the item.

Please submit an inquiry to Paypal for the details.

Without Paypal's approval, we cannot proceed with the shipping arrangements.

Please order again after you have been approved by Paypal.

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I'm sorry for replying late and thank you for your reply.

I'm planning to order 2 on October 20th and 3 on November 1st.

I would like to continuously purchase from you.


I send an email to your Paypal address.

Please check that as well!

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I'm sorry for replying late and thank you for your reply.

I'm planning to order 2 on October 20th and 3 on November 1st.

I would like to continuously purchase from you.


I have sent an email to your Paypal address.

Please take a look on that as well!

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Thank you for contacting us earlier.
We are awaiting the arrive of items.

By the way, is there any brand that could be purchased in lower price other than ●●●？
If there is, could you please send the list of brands or items by email?

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Thank you for contacting us.
We are awaiting the arrival of the items.

By the way, are there any brands that could be purchased at a lower price other than ●●●？
If there are, could you please send the list of brands or items by email?

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I am very sorry to inform you this but shipment has already done.
According to the Amazon rule, cancellation before shipment is valid but cancellation after shipment is not.
As for customer cancellation's case, a refund is deducted from postage after an item is returned.
If you wish to received the refund, please reject an item upon arrival.
The refund is available, if returned item has no problem.
Thank you in advance.

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I am very sorry to inform you this but the shipment has already been done.
According to Amazon regulations, cancellations before shipment are valid but cancellations after shipment are not.
As for customer cancellation's case, a refund is deducted from postage after an item is returned.
If you wish to receive the refund, please reject the item upon arrival.
The refund will be processed if the returned item has no problems.
Thank you in advance.

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I am ***, who used the help of English translator to speak with you today around 11:30.

You have mentioned about remitting first by paypal but does that mean to send money as a gift and not as a commodity exchange?


I would appreciate it if you could first send business transaction invoice by paypal.

Would it be possible?


I hope you'll take good care of this as I want to continue our business with you.

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I am ***, who spoke to you today at around 11:30 with the help of a English translator.

You have mentioned about remitting payment first by Paypal but does that mean sending money as a gift instead of commodity exchange?


I would appreciate it if you could first send a business transaction invoice by Paypal.

Would this be possible?


I hope you would look into the above matter and I look forward to future business dealings with you.

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What time does FedEx come to pick up today?

The person in charge will come and pick this item up.
Will return the mis-received rug.

Ordered for 3 rugs but only 1 has arrived so far.
Is this shipment error?
Can only check one TrackingNo as well.
Have the 2 remaining rugs been sent?
I want remaining 2 rugs to be sent immediately.

Checked the picture but there's no problem in this package.
Arrived as ordered.
Please remove the shipment limit.

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What time will FedEx be coming to pick up today?

The person in charge will come and pick this item up.
I will return the rug which has been delivered wrongly.

Ordered for 3 rugs but only 1 has arrived so far.
Is this a shipment error?
Can only check one TrackingNo as well.
Have the 2 remaining rugs been sent?
I would like the remaining 2 rugs to be sent immediately.

Checked the picture but there's no problem in this package.
Arrived as ordered.
Please remove the shipment limit.

元の翻訳
Coo Tek社が新世代Mobile Keyboard TouchPal Xを発売！

中国系キーボードアプリケーション開発会社Coo Tekが、新世代TouchPal Keyboard、TouchPal XをAndoroid向けにリリースした（Google Playにて無料）。Coo Tek社によると、TouchPal XがAndroid端末におけるキーボードアプリケーションの中で最も速く、リリースから72時間以内に100万ダウンロードを突破した。

TouchPal Xに内蔵されている文章読み取り機能、TouchPal Waveはユーザーが画面から指を離すことなく文章を打ち込むことを可能にしている。Coo Tek社はTouchPal Curveを前世代TouchPalと同時にリリースした。

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Coo Tek社が新世代モバイルキーボードTouchPal Xを発売！

中国系キーボードアプリ開発会社Coo Tekが、新世代TouchPal Keyboard、TouchPal XをAndoroid向けにリリースした（Google Playにて無料）。Coo Tek社によると、TouchPal XがAndroid端末におけるキーボードアプリケーションの中で最も速く、リリースから72時間以内に100万ダウンロードを突破した。

TouchPal Xに内蔵されている文章読み取り機能、TouchPal Waveはユーザーが画面から指を離すことなく文章を打ち込むことを可能にしている。Coo Tek社はTouchPal Curveを前世代TouchPalと同時にリリースした。

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Hello. Could you spot the image of an inner part of this bag?
Please tell me a difference between this item and ☆☆.

In addition, is it possible to send over to Japan?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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Hello. Could you spot the image of the inner part of this bag?
Please let me know differences between this item and ☆☆.

In addition, is it possible for you to send it to Japan?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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The contest audicion has begun.

Thank you everyone for your participation to the contest, the application period was closed in September 30th.
From October 1st, today onward, the audiction period starts.

The ranking of this contest is decided by you listeners' votes!
Please press COOL! button if you liked the song. The winner of this contest is decided by the number of COOLs contestants receive during the audicion period.
Up to 20 COOL! is allocated to every audicioner.

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The contest audicion has begun.

Thank you for your participation to the contest, the application period was closed in September 30th.
The audition period has started since October 1st today.

The ranking of this contest will be decided by you listeners' votes!
Please press COOL! button if you like the song. The winner of this contest is decided by the number of COOL!s contestants receive during the audition period.
Up to 20 COOL! is allocated to each voter.

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もう一度、どのパートが必要か教えて頂けますか？当初、Annabelleが担当していたのですが、産休に入っておりまして、連絡が取れません。欠けているパーツを次回の発送時に一緒に入れておきますね。

良い一日を！

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どのパーツが必要なのかもう一度教えて頂けますか？　以前はAnnabelleが担当していたのですが、現在産休に入っておりましてあいにくと話を聞くことができません。足りないパーツを次回の発送時に一緒に入れておきます。

良い一日を！

元の翻訳
もう一度、どのパートが必要か教えて頂けますか？当初、Annabelleが担当していたのですが、産休に入っておりまして、連絡が取れません。欠けているパーツを次回の発送時に一緒に入れておきますね。

良い一日を！

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どのパーツが必要なのか再度教えていただけますか？前回、Annabelleが担当していたのですが、現在産休に入っているため確認ができません。不足分のパーツは次回の発送時に一緒に入れておきます。

良い一日を！

元の翻訳
良好な状態のビンテージスコット製モトクロス・スーパークロスブーツ。サイズ9インチ、留め金にも問題なし。ブーツは良好な状態にあります。ソールの写真を撮っていませんが、ほぼ新品同様です。ご要望があれば写真を掲載します。国内からの注文でしたらpaypal、国外からはebayを使用します。国外からのご注文の際は、是非ご連絡下さい。他に質問がございましたらご連絡下さい。当サイトでの評価は高いのでご心配なく。　よろしくお願いします―スコット

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良好な状態のビンテージスコット製モトクロス・スーパークロスブーツ、ブーティー付き（ブーティーにサイズ９インチと有り、ミディアムシェル）留め金にも問題なし。ブーツは良好な状態にあります。ソールの写真を撮っていませんが、ほぼ新品同様です。ご要望があれば写真を掲載します。国内からの注文でしたらpaypal、国外からはebayを使用します。国外からのご注文の際は、是非ご連絡下さい。他に質問がございましたらご連絡下さい。当サイトでの評価は高いのでご心配なく。　よろしくお願いします―スコット

元の翻訳
A6, the size of a paperback book, is very small. The standard size of a Japanese comic book is ☆by☆. The right side of an attached image is the size of a paperback pocket edition.
I'm not quite sure about the specific size of a graphic novel, but will ☆by☆by☆ book cover work? It's flexible as the width can be sealed to tighten.

You properly got the magazine from 〇 as well！
What should I do. You don't need 2 of them right? But I have sent it already. Sorry, it's my fault for judging prematurely. I'll send some extra gift next time. I hope you'll forgive me.

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A6, the typical size of a paperback book, is pretty small. The standard size of a Japanese comic book is ☆by☆. The right side of the attached image is the size of a paperback pocket edition.
I'm not quite sure about the specific size of a graphic novel, but will a book cover of ☆by☆by☆ dimension work for you? It's flexible as the width can be sealed to tighten.

You got the magazine from 〇 as well！
What should I do. You don't need 2 of them right? But I have sent it already. Sorry, it's my fault for judging prematurely. I'll send some extra gift next time. I hope you'll forgive me.