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It is enough at $15.00 for the shipping charge from Japan to Brazil. If it is not be enough, I will charge it as my courtesy.
The Osaka international post office inquired to a post office in America, they have not received any response yet.
I am sorry to take your time, but would you inquire your local post office about shipment status of the item?
Blow is my address and the tracking number.
If the item cannot be found, we will make a refund of the entire amount.
Thank you for your understanding.

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It is enough at $15.00 for the shipping charge from Japan to Brazil. If it is not enough, I will cover it as my courtesy.
The Osaka international post office inquired to a post office in America, but they have not received any response yet.
I am sorry to take your time, but would you inquire to your local post office about shipment status of the item?
Below are my address and the tracking number.
If the item cannot be found, we will make a refund of the entire amount.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Yoruichi Shihouin from BLEACH

Choi Mochimazzi from Tamako Market

Soretta Orihime from Sakura Taisen series

Manya and Minea from Dragon Quest IV

Elena Peoples from Eureka Seven AO

Casca from Berserk

Athena Glory from ARIA

Afterwords......
I find girls all cute and beautiful whichever countries they are from and whatever their skin colors are. At the same time, brown skinned girls hold the impression as having a neutral stance in their stories and that would be one of the reason that they have their own unique beauties(this is just my opinion).

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Yoruichi Shihouin from BLEACH

Choi Mochimazzi from Tamako Market

Soretta Orihime from Sakura Taisen series

Manya and Minea from Dragon Quest IV

Elena Peoples from Eureka Seven AO

Casca from Berserk

Athena Glory from ARIA

Afterwords......
I find girls all cute and beautiful whichever countries they are from and whatever their skin colors are. At the same time, brown skinned girls hold the impression as having a neutral stance in their stories and that would be one of the reasons that they have their own unique beauties(this is just my opinion).

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We already share the documents needed for Due Diligence at Dropbox, but is it still necessary to conclude NDA?
We heard from Michael before that we don't have to conclude a new contract because we already have concluded NDA to ABC company.

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We have already shared the documents needed for Due Diligence at Dropbox, but is it still necessary to conclude NDA?
We heard from Michael before that we don't have to conclude a new contract because we already have concluded NDA to ABC company.

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Verification/Revision of Japanese-English Translation Corpus

Your job is to verify/revise the mechanically translated Japanese-English/English-Japanese corpus (in excel file).

The senteces are mechanically divided and involve mis-matches. You are expected to identify the errors to correct them on the spreadsheets so that both languages correspond each other. You do not worry about erroneous translations or quality of translations.

Each excel file consists of approximately 7000 lines (corpus). I am thinking of paying $100 for a file, but there are so many files, and would like to discuss to see how many files you think you can work on.

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Verification/Revision of Japanese-English Translation Corpus

Your job is to verify/revise the mechanically translated Japanese-English/English-Japanese corpus (in excel file).

The sentences are mechanically divided and involved mis-matches. You are expected to identify the errors to correct them on the spreadsheets so that both languages correspond each other. You do not worry about erroneous translations or quality of translations.

Each excel file consists of approximately 7000 lines (corpus). I am thinking of paying $100 for a file, but there are so many files, and would like to discuss to see how many files you think you can work on.

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The product is a rare set which was released for 30th anniversary. Lens is not included.
We do not dispatch products on Saturday and Sunday due to postoffice is closed.

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The product is a rare set which was released for 30th anniversary. Lens are not included.
We do not dispatch products on Saturday and Sunday because post office is closed.

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It is even famous in the world of tea ceremony, arts and music.

. Comb hair using wooden comb
Wooden comb means

From ancient times Japanese womens have maintain their hair, and the beauty of black hair have also been admired in the famous Manshyouu poems.And the so called "wooden comb" is a tool used to maintain the beauty of black hair.
Even now also it is extensively used by the young genration who wish to maintain the beauty of hair.
The most superior brushing product

A traditional Japanese good, which is smooth for scalp and no fear of damage to hair due to static electricity.

This woode comb in yellwish brown colour is an extremely fine luxury goods.

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It is even famous in the world of tea ceremony, arts and music.

. Comb hair using wooden comb
Wooden comb means

From ancient times Japanese women have maintained their hair, and the beauty of black hair have also been admired in the famous Manshyouu poems.And the so called "wooden comb" is a tool used to maintain the beauty of black hair.
Even now also it is extensively used by the young generations who wish to maintain the beauty of hair.
The most superior brushing product

A traditional Japanese good, which is smooth for scalp and no fear of damage to hair due to static electricity.

This wooden comb in yellowish brown color is an extremely fine luxury goods.

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ナイフ早く受け取りたいのですが、どのようにすればよいでしょうか。この商品を注文した時、こんなに長く時間がかかるとは思っていませんでした。プレゼントなのです。

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ナイフを早く受け取りたいのですが、どのようにすればよいでしょうか。この商品を注文した時、こんなに長く時間がかかるとは思っていませんでした。プレゼントなのです。

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no101901

Let's go visit the castles to further discover the local history of Japan! Japan's famous 8 castles selection.
The castle is often seen at the areas that are considered as regional centers. The local towns and castles in Japan have a strong and unbreakable historical connection. Let's go and discover the history of the streets and castles!

Nagoya Castle (Nagoya City, Aichi Prefecture)
When talking about Nagoya Castle, the "golden dolphin" (Kinnoshachi) is one of the must-sees. The castle was constructed during the Ieyasu Tokugawa shogunate period, which has its own famous song of "The castle makes Nagoya what she is" being sung by the locals.

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no101901

Let's go visit the castles to further discover the local history of Japan! Japan's 8 famous castles selection.
The castle is often seen at the areas that are considered as regional centers. The local towns and castles in Japan have a strong and unbreakable historical connection. Let's go and discover the history of the streets and castles!

Nagoya Castle (Nagoya City, Aichi Prefecture)
When talking about Nagoya Castle, the "Kin no Shachihoko" (imaginary creature) is one of the must-sees. The castle was constructed during the Ieyasu Tokugawa shogunate period, which has its own famous song of "The castle makes Nagoya what she is" being sung by the locals.

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fr89305

This statue I don't have, but I have a lot of Bhaisajyaguru with medicine
vase.

Bhaisajyaguru that strengthens with both hands Suryaprabha and Candraprabha.
They always form a pair and strike a symmetrical pose towards Bhaisajyaguru.
The Bodhisattva represents the position during ascetic practice in order to attain enlightenment.

Suryaprabha is told to emit light like the sun and extinguish the distress of darkness, whereas Candraprabha is told to eradicate wordly desires with its tender loving heart like the light of the moon.

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fr89305

This statue doesn't have it, but there are a lot of Bhaisajyaguru with medicine
vase.

Bhaisajyaguru that strengthens with both hands Suryaprabha and Candraprabha.
They always form a pair and strike a symmetrical pose towards Bhaisajyaguru.
The Bodhisattva represents the position during ascetic practice in order to attain enlightenment.

Suryaprabha is told to emit light like the sun and extinguish the distress of darkness, whereas Candraprabha is told to eradicate wordly desires with its tender loving heart like the light of the moon.

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I am sorry. As I did not understand very well about this website, so I did not noticed about this project.

I understand. I will ask you to create my name cards.
Thank you.

By the way, I publishe you coool logo in this website.
http://xxx.xxx

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I am sorry. As I did not understand very well about this website, so I did not noticed about this project.

I understand. I will ask you to create my name cards.
Thank you.

By the way, I publishe your coool logo in this website.
http://xxx.xxx

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no78802

There is Touya-lake at the foot of Mt. Usu.
On the other side, there are Touya-lake hot springs which is well known for hot springs area in hokkaidou.

Mt. Bandai (Fukushima prefecture)
Mt. Bandai represents the mountains in Aiｚu area which is written in Japanese old poem
as "Mt. Bandai is a mountain of treasure".
Surroundings of Mt. Bandai has been famous for a long time as a resort area for hot springs and skiing.

Mt. Sirane (Gunma prefecture)
One of the most famous hot springs in Japan called "Kusatsu hot springs" is at the foot of Mt. Sirane.

Mt. Asama (Nagano prefecture)
It represents the mountains in Nagano prefecture.
When you head to Nagano prefecture from Tokyo going beyond Kakuhyou Pass,
you can surely see the figure of Mt. Asama.

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no78802

There is Touya-lake at the foot of Mt. Usu.
On the other side, there are Touya-lake hot springs which are well known for hot springs area in hokkaidou.

Mt. Bandai (Fukushima prefecture)
Mt. Bandai represents the mountains in Aizu area which appears in Japanese old poem
as "Mt. Bandai is a mountain of treasure".
Surroundings of Mt. Bandai has been famous for a long time as a resort area for hot springs and skiing.

Mt. Sirane (Gunma prefecture)
One of the most famous hot springs in Japan called "Kusatsu hot springs" is at the foot of Mt. Sirane.

Mt. Asama (Nagano prefecture)
It represents the mountains in Nagano prefecture.
When you head to Nagano prefecture from Tokyo beyond Kakuhyou Pass,
you can surely see the figure of Mt. Asama.

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(middle part omitted) The metal balls won exchange for the prizes. Then the prize will be exchanged for money at the Prize Exchange where cash is brought in from the pachinko place.

It is one of the recognized gambles in Japan. By the way, there are also pachisuros that are in slot machine style.

▼Those animes became pachinkos!

Mobile Suit Gundam

Neon Genesis Evangelion

MACROSS Frontier

▼Rapid increase in the number of female fans!?

KNIGHTS OF THE ZODIAC

The Rose of Versailles

Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion

▼Hard-boiled… The man have joined too!

Golgo 13

FIST OF THE NORTH STAR

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(middle part omitted) In exchange for the metal balls you won, you can exchange it for the prizes. Then the prize will be exchanged for money at the Prize Exchange where cash is brought from the pachinko place.

It is one of the recognized gambles in Japan. By the way, there are also pachisuros that are in slot machine style.

▼Those animes became pachinkos!

Mobile Suit Gundam

Neon Genesis Evangelion

MACROSS Frontier

▼Rapid increase in the number of female fans!?

KNIGHTS OF THE ZODIAC

The Rose of Versailles

Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion

▼Hard-boiled… That men have joined too!

Golgo 13

FIST OF THE NORTH STAR

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ph55502

▼But, since when the beautiful girls begin to run with a pain de mie in their mouth?

We think usually that "the girl is running to school not to be late, with a pain de mie in her mouth and she will bump a boy in the corner" is the typical scene in the girl's anime. However, I read all anime of "ribban" in from 1970 to 1985, but I couldn't find that anime. It's not tyical.

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ph55502

▼But, since when did the beautiful girls begin to run with a slice of bread in their mouth?

We think usually that "a girl who is running in a hurry to school not to be late with a slice of bread in her mouth bumps a boy at the corner" is a typical scene of the girl's cartoon. However, I read all comics of "Ribbon" from 1970 to 1985, and I couldn't find such scene. It's not tyical.

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ph53001

They are the real Japanese beauty! They are the Yamato Nadeshiko in the world of anime.

Always the beatuiful girls you want show up in the world of anime, Yamato Nadeshiko are the best example.In general, they are contrary, compared with the beautiful girls called "Moe chara" who are brightly cute. However, they are loved and attracting. We introduce this time those Yamato Nadeshiko of the world of anime the Japanese are proud of. Which girl do you like?

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ph53001

They are the real Japanese beauty! They are the Yamato Nadeshiko in the world of anime.

Always there are ideal beatuiful girls in the world of anime, and Yamato Nadeshikos are the best examples.In general, they are contrary to the beautiful girls so-called "Moe chara" who are brightly cute. However, they are still loved and attracting. This time, We introduce those Yamato Nadeshikos of the world of anime that Japanese are proud of. Which girl do you like?

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ph49409

In this occasion, they are accepted by the producer of TV anime,”Ore no Imoto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai” and their first CD "irony" was chosen as opening theme of this anime.

The name of "ClarS" is the combination of the first character of their names,and it means "bright" in Latin.

▼To your suprise, they don't show up there.
They dont show up there, but you can watch at their two person's portrait in the anime style.

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ph49409

On this occasion, they drew the attention from the producer of TV anime,”Ore no Imoto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai” and their first CD "irony" was chosen as opening theme of this anime.

The name of "ClariS" is the combination of the first character of their names,and it means "bright" in Latin.

▼To your suprise, they don't show up their faces.
They don't show up their faces, but two person's portrait in anime style is open to the public .

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ベトナムの病院やクリニックに行く事は、ほとんど行列や不必要な待ち時間につながる。Yton.vnはこのプロセスの効率を上げている。

このモデルの問題は、Yton.vnのスタッフがクリニックを渡り歩き、この形式に参加するように医者を説得しなければならない事だ。Yton.vnがマーケットにオンラインのアポシステムを教えている第一人者であるため、これも一つの機会ではある。

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ベトナムの病院やクリニックに行く事は、ほとんど行列や不必要な待ち時間につながる。Yton.vnはこのプロセスの効率を上げている。

このモデルの問題は、Yton.vnのスタッフがクリニックを渡り歩き、この形式に参加するように医者を説得しなければならない事だ。Yton.vnがマーケットにオンラインの予約システムを取り入れる事を教えている第一人者であるため、これも一つの機会ではある。

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Actually, I have been working on it for 2 months now. That's why I have been re-doing the body panel :)

The welding of the cage is Tig welding. The light cage attached to 〇〇, I made it by T (Tで作った、にしました）, so I hope it may be a reference for the welding finish.
I plan to use resin to duplicate the body panel so that it will be tougher than FRP. If your budget and time allow, I can make the same thing from an aluminum panel myself for you.
As for the pipes of the cage, a good quality iron with welded finish will definitely make it much different.

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Actually, I have been working on it for 2 months now. That's why I have been re-doing the body panel :)

The welding of the cage is Tig welding. The light cage attached to 〇〇, I made it by T (Tで作った、にしました）, so I hope it may be a reference for the welding finish.
I plan to use resin to duplicate the body panel so that it will be tougher than FRP. If your budget and time allow, I can make the same thing from an aluminum panel for you.
As for the pipes of the cage, a good quality iron with welded finish will definitely make it much different.

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it is a 100% convention violation of Absense, so that people have pointed out.

Right Absense or the points that the head menu follows is definitely violations.
Absense at the part of top center would also be violations.
You didn't any warning from Google. It is dangerous to think it no problem.
You will not be able to use the Adsense.

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it is a 100% convention violation of Absense, so that people have pointed out.

Right Absense or the points that the head menu follows is definitely violations.
Absense at the top center would also be violations.
You didn't have any warning from Google. It is dangerous to think it is no problem.
You will not be able to use the Adsense.