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元の翻訳
What I brought was a new OO

I've told them about it and re-sending the missing items.

修正後
What I bought was a new OO.

I've told them about it and asked them to resend the missing items.

元の翻訳
I have sent you the item.
It's still at the Post Ofiice.
I checked the tracking number but it shows nothing yet.
It will take sometime to be reflected the tracking state.

You are requesting a refund to Paypal.
Please cancel it.

Even I send you a new one, the claim will remain.

Please cancel the claim.

I will refund you if the phone was damaged and unable to use.
I trust you so I send you a new one.
Therefore please send it back to me.

修正後
I have sent you the item.
It's still at the Post Ofiice.
I checked the tracking number but it shows nothing yet.
It will take some time to be reflected on the tracking status.

You are requesting a refund from Paypal.
Please cancel it.

Even if I send you a new one, the claim will remain.

Please cancel the claim.

I will refund you if the phone was damaged and unable to be used.
I'm trusting you so I have sent you a new one.
Therefore please send it back to me.

元の翻訳
いいえ　返金は望みません。　他のものを送ってください。　そうでなければフィードバックに悪い評価をしなければいけません。
私のオーダーをキャンセルして下さい。　間違った記事を注文しました。　ごめんなさい、よろしく。

I've contacted to the copyright owner about following apologize.
It's bout "I will never sell this brand"
Currently, I'm waiting for reply.
Thank you.

修正後
いいえ　返金は望みません。　他のものを送ってください。　そうでなければフィードバックに悪い評価をしなければいけません。
私のオーダーをキャンセルして下さい。　間違った品物を注文しました。　ごめんなさい、よろしく。

I've contacted to the copyright owner about following apologize.
It's bout "I will never sell this brand"
Currently, I'm waiting for reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
#william
I appreciate your quick response.
I'd be glad if you can give me the tracking number after you send it.
I will introduce your products to my costumers.

#habit
The return goods have delivered to there on 18th.
Sorry to cause you trouble but please begin the process of refund when you get ready.
Thank you.

修正後
#william
I appreciate your quick response.
I'd be glad if you could give me the tracking number after you send it.
I will introduce your products to my customers.

#habit
The return goods have been delivered to you on the 18th.
Sorry for causing you the trouble but please proceed with a refund when you get ready.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Sorry for having trouble this time.
There were not description about the condition of the booklet; however, I uploaded the picture so you could see and confirm its condition from it.
Since you successfully bid the booklet with some luck, I'm thinking about giving you a refund of $20. How does that sound to you?
I will accept the return of course, so please let me know your request.

修正後
Sorry for this trouble caused.
There was not a description about the condition of the booklet; however, I uploaded the picture so you could see and confirm its condition from it.
Since you successfully bid the booklet with some luck, I'm thinking about giving you a refund of $20. How does that sound to you?
I will accept the return, of course, so please let me know your request.

元の翻訳
Unfortunately, I can not change the shipping option once you have purchased due to the System A.
If you want to change the shipping option, please cancel the order and order it again from the B's top page and choose the Expedited option.
Since I only have one stock available, I will set the merchandise price at $200 in order to prevent other customers to buy.
I will refund $114 before the shipment.
Also, the merchandise is ready for shipping so I can send it after the next day once you make the re-order.
Lastly, If you do not order it again, I will cancel the order.

修正後
Unfortunately, I can not change the shipping option once you have purchased with system A.
If you want to change the shipping option, please cancel the order and order it again from the B's top page and choose the Expedited option.
Since I only have one stock available, I will set the merchandise price at $200 in order to prevent other customers to buy.
I will refund $114 to you before the shipment.
Also, the merchandise is ready for shipping so I can send it the next day after you make the re-order.
Lastly, If you do not order it again, I will cancel the order.

元の翻訳
At first I thought I was wrong because there were so many claims in the email but now I realized that I was not wrong.
There is no mistake in my description.
The interpretation of how you describe the dust may varies but the successful bidder expects it too much.
I never described its condition as mint but he/she expects that.
The product is dusty as I described in the description.
He/She finds my fault extremely that he/she picks the small words and interpret as what he/she is suitable for her/him.

修正後
At first I thought I was wrong because there were so many claims in the email but now I realized that I was not wrong.
There is no mistake in my description.
The interpretation of how you describe the dust may varies but the successful bidder expects it too much.
I never described its condition as mint but he/she expects that.
The product is dusty as I described in the description.
He/She finds my fault extremely that he/she picks the small words and interpret as what he/she thinks is suitable for her/him.

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。

私たちはアメリカ国内の住所あてのみ販売しております。もしペイパルやグーグルアカウントを持っていれば、私たちから購入することはできます。私どもの使用しているクレジットカード決済は海外のカード処理を致しません。ほしい商品と個数を教えていただけると見積もりをだして価格を修正します。

よろしくお願いします。
サム


まさあき　さんど　様

メールありがとうございます。私たちは沢山の日本の会社に売っています。そして貴方の会社にもこの機会に売りたいと思います。フロリダの貴社の貨物輸送業者あてに送ることもできます。どの商品を買うことに興味があるのかを教えてください。

よろしくお願いします
カート

修正後
こんにちは。

私たちはアメリカ国内の住所あてのみ販売しております。もしペイパルやグーグルアカウントを持っていれば、私たちから購入することはできます。私どもの使用しているクレジットカード決済は海外のカード処理を致しません。ほしい商品と個数を教えていただけると見積もりをだして価格を修正します。

よろしくお願いします。
サム


まさあき　さんど　様

メールありがとうございます。私たちは沢山の日本の会社に売っています。そして貴方の会社にもこの機会に売りたいと思います。フロリダの貴社の貨物輸送業者あてに送ることもできます。どの商品を買うことに興味があるのかを教えてください。

よろしくお願いします
カート