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評価: 59 / 1 Review / 2014/02/17 09:28:27

ashikkoman
ashikkoman 59 I am a beginner in translating anythi...
日本語

ph59203

(中略)遊技の結果で得た鋼球を賞品と交換され、パチンコ店から現金が持ち込まれている景品交換所で現金と交換される営業が行われる。

日本で認められているギャンブルのうちの一つなんです。ちなみにスロット形式のパチスロもあります。

▼あのアニメたちがパチンコに!

機動戦士ガンダム

新世紀エヴァンゲリオン

マクロスF(マクロスフロンティア)

▼女性ファンも急増!?

聖闘士星矢

ベルサイユのばら

コードギアス 反逆のルルーシュ

▼ハードボイルド……。あの男たちも参戦ッ!

ゴルゴ13

北斗の拳



英語

(middle part omitted) The metal balls won exchange for the prizes. Then the prize will be exchanged for money at the Prize Exchange where cash is brought in from the pachinko place.

It is one of the recognized gambles in Japan. By the way, there are also pachisuros that are in slot machine style.

▼Those animes became pachinkos!

Mobile Suit Gundam

Neon Genesis Evangelion

MACROSS Frontier

▼Rapid increase in the number of female fans!?

KNIGHTS OF THE ZODIAC

The Rose of Versailles

Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion

▼Hard-boiled… The man have joined too!

Golgo 13

FIST OF THE NORTH STAR



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shioton 56
shiotonはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/19 14:40:43

元の翻訳
(middle part omitted) The metal balls won exchange for the prizes. Then the prize will be exchanged for money at the Prize Exchange where cash is brought in from the pachinko place.

It is one of the recognized gambles in Japan. By the way, there are also pachisuros that are in slot machine style.

▼Those animes became pachinkos!

Mobile Suit Gundam

Neon Genesis Evangelion

MACROSS Frontier

▼Rapid increase in the number of female fans!?

KNIGHTS OF THE ZODIAC

The Rose of Versailles

Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion

▼Hard-boiled… The man have joined too!

Golgo 13

FIST OF THE NORTH STAR



修正後
(middle part omitted) In exchange for the metal balls you won, you can exchange it for the prizes. Then the prize will be exchanged for money at the Prize Exchange where cash is brought from the pachinko place.

It is one of the recognized gambles in Japan. By the way, there are also pachisuros that are in slot machine style.

▼Those animes became pachinkos!

Mobile Suit Gundam

Neon Genesis Evangelion

MACROSS Frontier

▼Rapid increase in the number of female fans!?

KNIGHTS OF THE ZODIAC

The Rose of Versailles

Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion

▼Hard-boiled… That men have joined too!

Golgo 13

FIST OF THE NORTH STAR



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ashikkoman ashikkoman 2014/02/19 15:03:28

Thanks for the review. I am not sure if "That men" and "In exchange for the metal balls you won, you can exchange it for the prizes" are grammatically correct. The first one for obvious reasons. In the second correction you made, you repeat the word "exchange," which is not so natural. but thanks.

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