Shinnosuke (shinnosuke) — 付けたレビュー

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Changing future museums
This technology is employed for sales and marketing promotions, but further development in areas other than advertisement could be an opportunity. During the interview, President Shin from the seller company responded, "In a situation where a research instutuition holds a presentation, we have them incorporated to go along with the guidance by adding the electronic array in the model.", and seems to have started practicing the use beyond the boundary of advertisement.
He futher added his future outlook as "If they could incorporate this technology with those glasses at the museum exhibitions, they could offer guidance in other languages than those limited, as well as through the video. It will change the future of the museums."

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Changing the future of museums
This technology is adopted for sales and marketing promotions, but further development in other areas could be an opportunity besides advertisement areas. During the interview, President Shin from the seller company responded, "In a situation where a research institution holds a presentation, we have them incorporated to go along with the guidance by adding the electronic array in the model.", and seems to have started practicing the use beyond the boundary of advertisement.
He futher added his future outlook as "If they could incorporate this technology with those glasses at the museum exhibitions, they could offer guidance in other languages than those limited, as well as through the video. It will change the future of the museums."

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If you want to provide the ABC service to a merchant, then we want to achieve a business solution between you and a service provider.
Also, we can support you in case you need a connection with a acquirer or a PAYMENT GATEWAY for starting your business in Korea or Japan. Of course, you will not be charged until the business is succeeded.
Now we have company profile materials in Japanese only, so responding by emails; however, if you need one, we will make a new one for you.

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If you would like to provide the ABC service to a merchant, then we would like to achieve a business solution between you and a service provider.
Also, we can support you in case you need a connection with a acquirer or a PAYMENT GATEWAY for starting your business in Korea or Japan. Of course, you will not be charged until the business is succeeded.
Now we have company profile materials in Japanese only, so responding by emails; however, if you need one, we will make a new one for you.

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Plan and challenge
It is still too early to disclose our plan... so we will introduce our current venture.

Among cosplayers, there are many who use a carry cart when they travel to the cosplay event site. The normal carry cart suffers many inconveniences, unsuitable to keep objects with length like weapons and difficult to handle in narrow venues. Inspired by a certain cosplayer's tweet, we decided to build a carry cart that can improve such inconvenience.

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Plan and challenge
It is still too early to explain our plan... so we will introduce our current venture.

Many of cosplayers use a carry cart when they go to the cosplay event. The normal carry cart has many inconveniences, unsuitable to keep objects with long length like weapons and difficult to handle in narrow venues. Inspired by a certain cosplayer's tweet, we decided to create a carry cart that can improve such inconvenience.

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The responsible members are listed here, but we also received a lot of support from people other than the ones listed here.

Alliance Companies
We have received the cooperation of the following people.

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The responsible members are listed here, but we also received a lot of supports from people who are not listed here.

Alliance Companies
We have received the cooperation of the following people.

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Then, I'll order three of A with Tilt brake.

As for the three A I currently have, I'll try to sell them without Tilt brake.
I'll do my best to sell.
May I return them if they are not sold by the end of this year?

Please let me know the grand total to pay for this time.
I'll make a payment by 24th.
If possible, I'd like all the items to be shipped within this week.

I am Taro Yamada, in charge of the operation of A.
I’m looking forward to doing business with you.
Please contact me from the following email address.

I'd like to order and ask some questions.

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Then, I'll order three of A with Tilt brake.

As for the three A I currently have, I'll try to sell them without Tilt brake.
I'll try my best to sell.
Could I return them if I can not sell them by the end of this year?

Please let me know the grand total to pay for this time.
I'll make a payment by 24th.
If possible, I'd like all the items to be shipped within this week.

I am Taro Yamada, in charge of the operation of A.
I’m looking forward to doing business with you.
Please contact me from the following email address.

I'd like to order and ask some questions.

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We have updated the specially set-up Web site for a new album "TREE" which was released on March 5, 2014!

The section for "Good-bye for Now" has been updated.

http://tree.toho-jp.net/ (Available on PCs and smartphones only)

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We have updated the specially set-up Web site for a new album "TREE" released on March 5, 2014!

The section for "Good-bye for Now" has been updated.

http://tree.toho-jp.net/ (Available on PC and smartphone only)

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TVXQ「TREE」SPOT ＜trees in the world＞Ver.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkhexpcbikk Preview

TVXQ「TREE」SPOT ＜Flying squirrels＞Ver.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JOP5I2giPAw Preview

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TVXQ「TREE」SPOT ＜trees in the world＞Ver.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkhexpcbikk Preview

TVXQ「TREE」SPOT ＜Flying squirrels＞Ver.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JOP5I2giPAw Preview

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< Identity document with your face photo >
1. Passport.
2.Drivers license.
3.Basic Resident Register card with your face photo.
4.Physical disability certificate.
5.Foreigner Registration Card (Residency Card).
6.Credit card with your face photo.
7.Student ID with your face photo.　

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< Identity certificate with your face photo >
1. Passport.
2.Drivers license.
3.Basic Resident Register card with your face photo.
4.Physical disability certificate.
5.Foreigner Registration Card (Residency Card).
6.Credit card with your face photo.
7.Student ID with your face photo.　

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That product can be decorated as a tapestry,
or it can be used as a short curtain by cutting along the line on the center with a pair of scissors.
There is no need to re-sew it.
I am sorry for the insufficient explanation.

It definitely seems like a wrong product was shipped.
I have shipped the correct product before you have receive this report,
The new tracking number is #.
I am very sorry for causing you any inconvenience.

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That product can be decorated as a tapestry,
or it can be used as a short curtain by cutting along the line on the center with a pair of scissors.
There is no need to re-sew it.
I am sorry for the insufficient explanation.

Definitely it seems that a wrong product was shipped.
I have shipped the correct product before you have received this report.
The new tracking number is #.
I am very sorry for causing you any inconvenience.

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我々はあなたがこちらのサイトで偽の商品を販売したという苦情を受け取ったため、あなたに申し上げます。

我々のサイトで販売される商品は全て本物でなくてはいけません。我々のポリシーといたしましては、違法に捏造された商品は販売することができません。セラーヘルプにおいて"販売禁止内容"と検索して下さい。

こちらは報告された特定の商品については情報を申し上げられませんが、あなたのフィードバック、バイヤーからの最近のコンタクトや在庫を見直しすることで問題となった商品を判別しやすくなるかもしれません。ぜひリストを見直し、我々のポリシーに見合った販売をお願いします。

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我々はあなたがこちらのサイトで偽の商品を販売したという苦情を受け取ったため、あなたに申し上げます。

我々のサイトで販売される商品は全て本物でなくてはいけません。我々のポリシーといたしましては、違法に捏造された商品は販売することができません。セラーヘルプにおいて"販売禁止内容"と検索して下さい。

こちらは報告された特定の商品については情報を申し上げられませんが、あなたのフィードバック、バイヤーからの最近のコンタクトや在庫を見直しすることで問題となった商品を判別しやすくなるかもしれません。ぜひリストを見直し、我々のポリシーに見合った販売をお願いします。

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So, would you confirm first who charged the fee and why the fee was incurred.

And tell them the abovementioned.

If the situation is still the same, I will file an investigation request to Singapore through Japan Post.

They say that an investigation request should force Singapore side to report to Japan side.

Will you follow the steps above?

We will see to it until it is solved to your satisfaction. Please keep us posted about this issue.

We apologize for the inconveniences.

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So, would you confirm first who charged the fee and why the fee was incurred.

And tell them the above-mentioned.

If the situation is still the same, I will file an investigation request to Singapore through Japan Post.

They say that an investigation request should force Singapore side to report to Japan side.

Will you follow the steps above?

We will see to it until it is solved to your satisfaction. Please keep us posted about this issue.

We apologize for the inconveniences.

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このスタートアップは、ユーザのために定期的なオフライン・イベントを企画する予定である。イベントを通して、同じ目標を持った友人を見つけることもできるし、お互いの刺激にもなる。ユーザが学んできたことを会場で練習できるよう、英語のネイティブスピーカーもイベントに参加する。

このアプリは現在、日本と韓国でのみ売り出されているが、Smatoosは2月末までに中国と台湾でもリリースの予定である。同ティームは、月々500,000人のユーザを目標としている。彼らは、アジアにおけるモバイル教育市場での存在を拡大するため、日本語、韓国語、中国語など、他の学習言語の追加も検討している。

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このスタートアップは、ユーザのために定期的なオフラインイベントを企画する予定である。イベントを通して、同じ目標を持った友人を見つけることもできるし、お互いの刺激にもなる。ユーザが学んできたことを会場で練習できるよう、英語のネイティブスピーカーもイベントに参加する。

このアプリは現在、日本と韓国でのみ売り出されているが、Smatoosは2月末までに中国と台湾でもリリースの予定である。同ティームは、月々500,000人のユーザを目標としている。彼らは、アジアにおけるモバイル教育市場での存在を拡大するため、日本語、韓国語、中国語など、他の学習言語の追加も検討している。