Sam Haugh (sam_haugh3) — もらったレビュー

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I am the world GP, Gp3 champion Kazuto Sakata and together with Noboru Ueda we competed in Japan as former riders. I am already retired and I work in sales in Japan.

We would like to ask some questions about the products you are selling from your company at C.
Instead of going through C to do business with your company, I would like to do business with you directly.
The merits of doing business directly with your company are the 15% handling fee and 3% cash back handling fee that are not needed.
Every month I buy over 10 products from your company and so I would like to do business directly with you.
I would also like to know if there is any price reduction for buying a large number of your lot.

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I am a former rider who competed with the world GP, Gp3 champions Kazuto Sakata and Noboru Ueda. I am already retired and I work in sales in Japan.

I would like to ask some questions about the products your company sells at C.
Instead of going through C, I would like to do business directly with your company.
The merits of doing business directly with your company are the 15% handling fee being paid to C and 3% cash back site handling fee that are not needed.
And since I buy more than 10 products from your company , i am hoping for a big discount.
I would also like to know the quantity of lot sales and discount rates if you have them.

元の翻訳
I am sorry that there was a mistake this time. Also, thank you for getting in contact.
Tomorrow we will once again send your order.
Please keep the mistaken product as an apology.
If there is another person's order form attached, please destroy it.
I will contact you once we have sent the goods.

Thank you for your purchase the other day.
We feel that there has been a mistake with the product that has been delivered to you.
If you could please confirm this then we will send your order.
Thank you and sorry for an inconvenience this may have caused.

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I am sorry that there was a mistake this time. Also, thank you for getting in contact with me.
Tomorrow we will once again send your order.
Please keep the mistaken product as an apology.
If there is another person's order form attached, please destroy it.
I will contact you once we have sent the goods.

Thank you for your purchase from the other day.
We feel that there has been a mistake with the product that has been delivered to you.
If you could please confirm this then we will send your order.
Thank you and sorry for an inconvenience this may have caused.

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I would once again like to confirm the day when the 314 will arrive. Is it safe to assume that the 314 which we bought on August 17th is due to arrive this week?
The 314 that is due to arrive this week; Is it only the one 314 that we have completed the transaction for? In your previous email, it said there was an order for a large number of 314's. Would there be a large number of 314s going to your shop this week? If there is, would you be able to send three to us? Or, have they already been sold?

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I would once again like to confirm the day when the 314 will arrive. Is it safe to assume that the 314 which we bought on August 17th is due to arrive this week?
The 314 that is due to arrive this week is only one of the 314 that we have completed the transaction for on 8/17? In your previous email, didn't it mention that there is a large order of 314s that would be delivered to your shop this week? If there is, would you be able to send three to us? Or, have they already been reserved to be sold?

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We can advertise your lessons directly to students for free.
Today, T7 released a feature where students can receive an alert email for lessons which corresponds with a train station. Will you register this lesson with T7?

If you register your lesson with T7, T7 will find students automatically which suit your lesson criteria.
This is how we can advertise your lesson directly.

There is a summary of the alert email for lessons feature listed below.

Students will register stations they wish to have lessons at through T7.

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We can advertise your lessons directly to students for free.
Today, T7 released a feature where students can receive an alert email for lessons which corresponds with a train station. Will you register this lesson with T7?

If you register your lesson with T7, T7 will find students automatically who suit your lesson criteria.
This is how we can advertise your lesson directly.

There is a summary of the alert email feature for lessons listed below.

Students will register stations they wish to have lessons at through T7.

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If you register your lesson with T7, it will automatically search for stations that are close where you are giving a lesson.
Stations will be organized to how close they are to the students preferences and if there is a match, students will receive an email about your lesson.
Just by registering your lesson with T7, you can gather students to your lessons for free.
It will also be able to tell you the aspirations of students who are interested in your lessons.
It is easy to gather students as you can organize a lesson while looking at the students preferences, such as what day and what time.

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If you register your lesson with T7, it will automatically search for stations that are close to where you are giving a lesson.
Stations will be organized by how close they are to the students preferences and, if there is a match, students will receive an email about your lesson.
Just by registering your lesson with T7, you can gather students to your lessons for free.
It will also be able to tell you the aspirations of students who are interested in your lessons.
It is easy to gather students as you can organize a lesson while looking at the students preferences, such as what day and what time they want.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.
I am very sorry, but we have 3 possibilities for you.

1. We can refund an amount of money.
2. If we have any products you would like, we can send them
3. You can return the product and we can replace it.

We can offer these 3 possibilities.
If you have any other ideas then please tell us.

Thank you for your email

We are sorry that the product is late
Below is the tracking number

It should be delivered within 10 days at the latest

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Thank you for your email.
To apologize, we have three possibilities for you.

1. We can refund the amount of money.
2. If we have them, we can send any product you like.
3. You can return the product and we can have it replaced.

We can offer these three possibilities.
Please tell us if you have other ideas.

Thank you for your email

We are sorry that the product is late
Below is the tracking number

It should be delivered within 10 days at the latest.

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This astonishinｇly thick make-up brush with exquisite hair is what artists recognized. The hair is surprisingly densely bundled. Just by brushing this brush over your skin you can quickly and uniformly put on a thin layer of make-up. You may think that because it is so thin that it cannot hide skin imperfections such as wrinkles and freckles. However, the highly dense bundle of hair picks up the powder and thinly covers your skin. It makes your skin look beautiful even though it is thin layer. You do not need to worry about your make-up coming off either. The hair of the brush is not trimmed and so the hairs that touch the skin are exceedingly nice and soft.

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This astonishingly thick makeup brush with exquisite hair is what artists recognized. The hair is surprisingly densely bundled. Just by brushing this brush over your skin you can quickly and uniformly put on a thin layer of makeup. You may think that because it is so thin that it cannot hide skin imperfections such as wrinkles and freckles. However, the highly dense bundle of hair picks up the powder and thinly covers your skin. It makes your skin look beautiful even though it is thin layer. You do not need to worry about your make-up coming off either. The hair of the brush is not trimmed and so the hairs that touch the skin are exceedingly nice and soft.