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I am terribly sorry for the late reply and would like to sincerely apologize. The number is was told to call by my host mother was the number of another store. As I am currently looking for part-time work, I ended up calling that other number thinking it was for a reply about a job. The person on the other number told me it was the wrong number, and once I returned home and asked my host mother again in more detail I realized the mistake.
Just earlier I left a message on your answering machine as I just bought a new phone today. My number is 〜.

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I am terribly sorry for the late reply and would like to sincerely apologize. The number I was told to call by my host mother was the number for another store. As I am currently looking for part-time work, I ended up calling that other number thinking it was for a reply about a job. The person on the other number told me it was the wrong number, and only once I returned home and asked my host mother again in more detail did I realize the mistake.
Just earlier I left a message on your answering machine as I just bought a new phone today. My number is 〜.

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I heard from my host mother that you would like to know about my English level. My TOEIC score is 570. Since coming here in August, finally once month has passed. To be honest I don't have much confidence in my speaking but I am trying my best. Again I am terribly sorry about today, and will do better in future.

Best regards,

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I heard from my host mother that you would like to know about my English level. My TOEIC score is 570. Finally once month has passed since coming here in August. To be honest, I don't have much confidence in my speaking but I am trying my best. Again I am terribly sorry about today, and will do better in the future.

Best regards,

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Thank you very much for your swift payment, Once again sorry for the late reply. I went to get the Momoshiri Pocky and Strawberry Pretz just earlier. There aren't many stores which have it but we managed to find them. They're really delicious!

The Sweet Potato Jagariko is a new item so it hasn't been put up in stores yet. That's why we want to order it online. Again as always, once I have got all the items together and calculate the shipping costs, would you like me to let you know the price with the additional charges added in? I will make sure to reply to you sometime early next week. Sweet potato is a food that really reminds me of Fall! Anyway, I will speak to you soon.

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Thank you very much for your swift payment, Once again sorry for the late reply. I went to get the Momoshiri Pocky and Strawberry Pretz just earlier. There aren't many stores which have it but we managed to find them. They're really delicious!

The Sweet Potato Jagariko is a new item so it hasn't been put up in stores yet. That's why we want to order it online. Again as always, once I have gotten all the items together and calculated the shipping costs, would you like me to let you know the price with the additional charges added in? I will make sure to reply to you sometime early next week. Sweet potato is a food that really reminds me of Fall! Anyway, I will speak to you soon.

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I have received the item, however it has been so badly damaged that it really can't be called a brand new item. I will return the item so please tell me the best place to return it to. Also I would like a refund for the price of the item. I will appreciate your cooperation

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I have received the item, however it has been so badly damaged that it really can't be called a brand new item. I will return the item so please tell me the best address to return it to. Also I would like a refund for the price of the item. I appreciate your cooperation.

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You will receive an email from us confirming the cancellation.

As we don't have enough in stock of your ordered item, we unfortunately must cancel the order.

The item which you kindly purchased from us has been damaged during shipping.

Has the item you ordered arrived yet? In order to help us improve our service, we would appreciate any feedback or comments.

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Please fil up all of the fields as you like.
You will receive an email from us confirming the cancellation.

As we don't have enough in stock of your ordered item, we unfortunately must cancel the order.

The item which you kindly purchased from us has been damaged during shipping.

Has the item you ordered arrived yet? In order to help us improve our service, we would appreciate any feedback or comments.

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4. Once you have written your feedback, click 'I'm done leaving feedback' at the bottom.

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This is Ken. The beer arrived at our company yesterday after clearing customs. Once again thank you very much for your service.

I have one question. Is ABC selling the tube sesame paste in a three tube set? If they are still selling it could you tell me the price? Is it also possible for you to send me samples?

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This is Ken. The beer arrived at our company yesterday after clearing customs. Once again thank you very much for your service.

I have one question. Is ABC selling the tube sesame paste in a three tube set? If they are still selling it, could you tell me the price? Is it also possible for you to send me samples?

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UK
①Once we received reports that the item was broken, our company responded swiftly. We will have the delivery people compensate for the damages regarding the broken item. We requested this earlier but please inform the delivery people that the item was broken. We can't go ahead with our procedures until that is done. Would you be able to contact us once you have reported it to the delivery people? We appreciate your cooperation. We truly believe that you were not responsible. Have a lovely day!

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UK
①Once we received the report that the item was broken, our company responded swiftly. We will have the delivery company compensate for the damages regarding the broken item. As we requested this earlier, please inform the delivery company that the item was broken. We can't proceed our process until that is done. Would you please contact us once you complete your report to the delivery company? We appreciate your cooperation. We truly trust you. Have a lovely day!

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I understand it may be at your inconvenience but would you be able to send the Taylor 314 to Japan? Please have USPS redirect the 314 that was mistakenly sent to Australia to Japan. I called the Japanese post office a while back but it seems that only USPS will be able to deal with this situation. Once the misdirected 314 safely arrives at my store, please allow me to purchase it. I intend to have it arrive quickly to Japan so that I may deliver it to my customer. Thank you very much for your assistance, please help me in this regard.

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This may inconvenience you, but would you be able to send 314 from the tailor to Japan? Please have USPS immediately resend 314 to Japan since it was mistakenly sent to Australia. I called Japan's post office a while back, but it seems that USPS is the only one, who can address this situation. I will purchase this once the misdirected 314 safely arrives at my store. I'm planning to send it to my customer after it's immediate arrival in Japan. Thank you very much for your assistance, please help me in this regard.↵

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The goods arrived without any problems. There was no customs tax but there was a consumption tax of around $100. Unfortunately this must become part of the total price of the item. Thank you very much.

The item just as last time had no problems. It's great being able to order things from you with such peace of mind. I am thinking of purchasing another item soon.

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The goods arrived without any problems. There was no customs tax, but there was a consumption tax of around $100 [remove the expletive phrases]. Unfortunately this must become part of the total price of the item. Thank you very much.

The item just as last time had no problems. It's great being able to order things [word choice] from you with such peace of mind. I am thinking of purchasing another item soon [singular vs. plural].

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Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, toilet cleaner and flushable wipes. Once it becomes Summer, it becomes easy for odors to linger. I am already using both a deodorant spray and cistern cleaner however I think it is necessary to stop the odor at its source. Just earlier I cleaned both the ladies and mens toilets but they were rather dirty.

Starting from next time, please clean the mens and ladies toilets in turns. It would be best for you to talk about the order and decide from there. Afterwards we will make come up with something to check the cleaning.

Let's have everyone not pretend not to see anything and give adequate attention to the job.↵
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Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, toilet cleaner and flushable wipes. When it becomes summer, it becomes easy for odors to linger. I am already using both a deodorant spray and water tank cleaner, but I think it is necessary to stop the odor at its source. I just cleaned both the ladies' and men's toilets and they were extremely dirty.

Starting from next time, please clean the men's and ladies' toilets in turn. It would be best if we talk about the order and decide from there. Afterwards we will come up with something to check the cleaning.

Let's not pretend we don't see anything and let's be sure we give adequate attention to the job.