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日本語

昨日、トイレ用ブラシ・洗剤・流せる布巾を購入しました。
夏になり、においがこもりやすくなってます。
すでに、消臭スプレーやタンクに入れる洗剤など使っていますが、
原因の根絶が必要なのだと思います。
先ほど男女ともに清掃しましたが、ずいぶん汚れていました。

次回からは、女性は女性・男性は男性で持ち回りで掃除をしてください。
順番などは話し合って、決めてもらえればよいです。
後ほど、清掃チェック用の何かを作ります。

各人が見て見ぬふりをしないで、快適に過ごせるようにしましょう

英語

Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, toilet cleaner and flushable wipes. Once it becomes Summer, it becomes easy for odors to linger. I am already using both a deodorant spray and cistern cleaner however I think it is necessary to stop the odor at its source. Just earlier I cleaned both the ladies and mens toilets but they were rather dirty.

Starting from next time, please clean the mens and ladies toilets in turns. It would be best for you to talk about the order and decide from there. Afterwards we will make come up with something to check the cleaning.

Let's have everyone not pretend not to see anything and give adequate attention to the job.

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tokyomanlyはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/19 11:38:14

元の翻訳
Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, toilet cleaner and flushable wipes. Once it becomes Summer, it becomes easy for odors to linger. I am already using both a deodorant spray and cistern cleaner however I think it is necessary to stop the odor at its source. Just earlier I cleaned both the ladies and mens toilets but they were rather dirty.

Starting from next time, please clean the mens and ladies toilets in turns. It would be best for you to talk about the order and decide from there. Afterwards we will make come up with something to check the cleaning.

Let's have everyone not pretend not to see anything and give adequate attention to the job.↵
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修正後
Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, toilet cleaner and flushable wipes. When it becomes summer, it becomes easy for odors to linger. I am already using both a deodorant spray and water tank cleaner, but I think it is necessary to stop the odor at its source. I just cleaned both the ladies' and men's toilets and they were extremely dirty.

Starting from next time, please clean the men's and ladies' toilets in turn. It would be best if we talk about the order and decide from there. Afterwards we will come up with something to check the cleaning.

Let's not pretend we don't see anything and let's be sure we give adequate attention to the job.

[russ87]

Yeah I would have to agree with your edits, thank you. I guess cistern might be an Australian thing...

[tokyomanly]

I think it just needed a double-check, but given the first-two system sometimes it's not possible. Agreed about cistern.