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元の翻訳
The product below is extremely popular in Japan.
In new or nearly new condition is preferred.

If they are possible to order, please advise of your price, including postage.

I would be most grateful if you would update us when you stock any unusual TourIssue items from now onwards.

I would like to acquire things like autographed balls by Japanese professional golf players.
The following players are popular, so we would appreciate notification should you come to stock any:

We prefer balls that were actually used in play and have an authentication certificate.

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The product below is extremely popular in Japan.
In new or nearly new condition is preferred.

If they are possible to order, please advise me of your price, including postage.

I would be most grateful if you would update us when you stock any rare TourIssue items from now onward.

I would like to acquire things like autographed balls by Japanese professional golf players.
The following players are popular, so we would appreciate notification should you come to stock any:

We prefer balls that were actually used in play and have an authentication certificate.

元の翻訳
To create making.

To give ways of work of a creator,
more freedom, more joy
If we can come first in Japan, we can come first in the world
We want to further increase the speed of the creation of Japanese contents by optimizing communation

To create the way of making.
Mugen Up is a global creative company that will keep providing a new way of working of creators.

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To create making.

To give ways of work of a creator,
more freely, more joyfully
If we can come first in Japan, we can come first in the world
We want to accelerate the creation of Japanese contents by optimizing communation

To create the way of making.
Mugen Up is a global creative company that will keep providing a new way of working of creators.

元の翻訳
Would you provide a discount and reduce the product price to the figure listed below?

OOO dollars

Should it be possible to purchase at this price, I would like to purchase immediately.
If the transaction is possible at the above mentioned price, please forward a PayPal invoice to the following address:

OOO

We sell your products in Japan.
We are having some difficulties as our regular supplier has suddenly raised their prices.
We are therefore inquiring whether we may purchase directly from your company.

We have sales force in Amazon Japan and hold a proven track record.
We hope to continue selling your company's products in Japan.

We look forward hearing from you.

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Would you provide a discount and reduce the product price to the figure listed below?

OOO dollars

Should it be possible to purchase at this price, I would like to purchase immediately.
If the transaction is possible at the above mentioned price, please forward a PayPal invoice to the following address:

OOO

We sell your products in Japan.
We are having some difficulties as our regular supplier has suddenly raised their prices.
We are therefore inquiring whether we may purchase directly from your company.

We have sales force in Amazon Japan and hold a proven track record.
We hope to continue selling your company's products in Japan.

We look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
ソースは融資に関する詳細を公開することを拒否したものの、この資本注入は音声認識産業の入る敷居値を確実に引き上げ、その開発は寡占的競争の段階へと加速すると思われる。

Yunzhishengは最近中国の着用可能な電子機器ブランド、Smartdevicesと共にZ Watchというsmartwatchをローンチした。Yunzhishengは自社の音声認識技術を新商品に取り入れ、小さな画面のsmartwatchから起こる人間機械相互作用や入力方法に主に関する問題を解決した。この装置は、Shanda Geakの1999元（中国語の報告書による）よりはるかに低い699元に価格設定されている。

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ソースは融資に関する詳細を公開することを拒否したものの、この資本注入は音声認識産業の参入障壁を確実に引き上げ、その開発は寡占的競争の段階へと加速すると思われる。

Yunzhishengは最近中国の着用可能な電子機器ブランド、Smartdevicesと共にZ Watchというsmartwatchの製造販売に乗り出した。Yunzhishengは自社の音声認識技術を新商品に取り入れ、smartwatchの画面が小さいことにより起こるマンマシンインタラクションや入力方法に関する共通の問題を解決した。この装置は、Shanda Geakの1999元（中国語の報告書による）よりはるかに低い699元に価格設定されている。

元の翻訳
音声認識サービスYunzhishengがシリーズA融資を何千万ドルと受け取る。Z監視より報道。

Yunzhishengは中国の音声認識操業のスタートアップであり、事情に精通している人々を理由に（中国語の報告書による)、国内のベンチャーキャピタルから数千万ドルを確保した。

この会社は、先の９月に音声認識パブリック・クラウドを開始し、USTC iFlytekに続いてこの技術を公共に提供した２番目の国内企業である。
Baiduがこの8月にこれらの先例に続いた。

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音声認識サービスYunzhishengがシリーズA融資で数千万ドルを受け取る。Z Watch報道。

Yunzhishengは中国の音声認識のスタートアップで、事情に精通している人々によると（中国語の報告書による)、国内のベンチャーキャピタルから数千万ドルを確保した。

この会社は、先の９月に音声認識パブリック・クラウドを開始し、USTC iFlytekに続いてこの技術を一般に提供した２番目の国内企業である。
Baiduがこの8月にこれらの先例に続いた。

元の翻訳
I am considering to telephone ◯ on Monday and inquire for stockists of ☆.
☆ may currently be purchased by reservation at ◆, however, it will incur a separate postage.
I believe the product you informed me of and ☆ are completely different items. This set will probably include his full body drawings and a few variations of facial expressions, however, it will not include the original drawings of anime.
The autographed paper was not distributed to people but was on display at the ◇ shop.
I have made an error and have written your previous address on the EMS slip.
I have already arranged a change of address procedure, however, am uncertain whether it will be accepted in time.

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I am considering to telephone ◯ on Monday and inquire for stockists of ☆.
☆ may currently be purchased by reservation at ◆, however, it will incur a separate postage.
I believe the product you informed me of and ☆ are completely different items. This set will probably include his full body drawings and a few variations of facial expressions, however, it will not include the original drawings of anime.
The autographed paper was not distributed to people but was on display at the ◇ shop.
I have made an error and have written your previous address on the EMS slip.
I have already arranged a change of address procedure, however, i am uncertain whether it will be accepted in time.

元の翻訳
Please refund to shimatora345@gmail.com.

It this is not possible↵
↵
I do not mind if

Please refund via Send Money.

Please do not arrange a refund via credit card.

If you are not convinced, I respect you decision.

Should this be the case, I will return the goods and will re-evaluate your appraisal. Please then send me a request.

I would appreciate an update via email if you have kindly arranged a refund.
In addition, please resend your return adress as I would like to request a refund on the postage incurred upon returning the goods.

I appreciate an early solution to this issue.

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Please refund to shimatora345@gmail.com.

If it is impossible, it is alright.

Then please refund via Send Money.

Please do not arrange a refund via credit card.

If you are not convinced, you can leave it as it is.

Should this be the case, I will return the goods and will re-evaluate your appraisal. ↵
Please then send me a request.

I would appreciate an update via email if you have kindly arranged a refund.
In addition, please resend your return address and I would like to request the postage incurred upon returning the goods.

I will appreciate a quick solution to this issue.

元の翻訳
Therefore, we wish to invite translators to our humble exchange meeting.
For those who are able to participate, we ask you to fill out the form below and send it to us by Friday 1st November. Should we receive a large volume of participants, there will be draw and those who are selected will be contacted by Monday 11th November.
Due to the location our company, the event will only be held in Tokyo, however, it is a good opportunity for other translators to meet in person their fellow translators whom faces they usually cannot see, therefore, we hope we hope we will receive many enthusiastic participants.

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Therefore, we wish to invite translators to our humble exchange meeting.
For those who are able to participate, we ask you to fill in the form below and send it to us by Friday 1st November. Should we receive a large volume of participants, there will be draw and those who are selected will be contacted by Monday 11th November.
Due to the location our company, the event will only be held in Tokyo, however, it is a good opportunity for other translators to meet in person their fellow translators whom faces they usually cannot see, therefore, we hope we will receive many enthusiastic participants.

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I regret that you have been disappointed. I am stunned by shock to learn that the product was in such a different condition to what it was like at the time I had sent it. It is unthinkable for a parcel box to be cut in half by the Japanese Postal Service.
We still have stock and are able to exchange with a new product. Since you have chosen a posting method that does not include insurance, we are unable to provide a refund to the product. Would you please pay for the postage to return the product ? We will pay for the postage for the new product and will also post it with insurance.

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I regret that you have been disappointed. I am stunned by shock to learn that the product is in such a different condition to what it was like at the time I sent it. It is unthinkable for a parcel box to be cut in half by the Japanese Postal Service.
We still have it in stock and are able to exchange with a new product. Since you have chosen a posting method that does not include insurance, we are unable to provide a refund to the product. Would you please pay for the postage to return the product? We will pay for the postage for the new product and will also post it with insurance.