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MPI gethering and inspection visit to TORANOMON HILLS
MPI Japan Chapter will hold Annual Metting, gathering party and preview event of TORANOMON HILLS at Toranomon Hills Forum on July 14th.
We accepts non-member participants for the gathering party started at 19:00. Participation fee for regular member is 6,000 Yen and for general personnel is 7,000 Yen. The participants will include cooperate meeting planners and suppliers relevant to MICE industry.

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MPI gathering and inspection visit to Toranomon Hills
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MPI Japan Chapter will hold Annual Meeting and gathering party at Toranomon Hills Forum, followed by preview event of Toranomon Hills on July 14th.
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It accepts non-member participants for the gathering party started at 19:00. Participation fee for regular member is 6,000 Yen and for general personnel is 7,000 Yen. Among the participants, there will be cooperate meeting planners and suppliers related to MICE industry.

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★Spelling
Suzuki Mariya
★Height
158cm
★Birthday
1999/9/26
★Origin
Tokyo
★Nickname
Marya
★Blood Type
O
★Hobby
KARAOKE、Exercise
★Specialty
Donald Duck voice imitation
★Favorite talent
Hamasaki Ayumi
★Favorite artist, talent
Michael Jackson, AAA

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★Name
Suzuki Mariya
★Height
158cm
★Birthday
September 26, 1998
★Birth
Tokyo
★Nickname
Marya
★Blood Type
O
★Hobby
KARAOKE、Sports
★Specialty
Donald Duck's voice imitation
★Favorite TV Star
Hamasaki Ayumi
★Favorite artist, TV star
Michael Jackson, AAA

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"Together" Release Thanksgiving Event at Kanto Area

※Please understand that our staff might touch your shoulders or arms during induction.
※Re-selling, duplicating and forging the tickets are strictly prohibited.

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"Together" Sale Launch Thanksgiving Event in Kanto Area

※Please understand that our staff might touch your shoulders or arms to guide you. Please attend only if this is acknowledged by you.
※Re-selling, duplicating and forging the event number tickets and hand-shaking event tckets are strictly prohibited.

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"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at Kanto area

Very much thanks for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade is going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group Handshake event at each shops

Place/Participant/Appointed time
Tuesday 17th June, 2014
Special Stage at SHIBUYA TSUTAYA B1 Floor

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"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at Kanto area

Very much thanks for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade are going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group Handshake event at each shops

Place/Participant/Appointed time
Tuesday 17th June, 2014
Special Stage at SHIBUYA TSUTAYA B1 Floor

元の翻訳
"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at Kanto area

Very much thanks for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade is going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group Handshake event at each shops

Place/Participant/Appointed time
・Kanto 1
HMV LUMINE EST
Asami WATANABE, Seran MIZOROKI, Marin YAMAMOTO, Hina NAGAI
(Sorry for the changes of prospective members announced on 12th June.)

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"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at the Kanto area

We thank you very much for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade are going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group handshake event at each shop

Place/Participant/Appointed time
・Kanto 1
HMV LUMINE EST
Asami Watanabe, Seran Mizoroki, Marin Yamamoto, Hina Nagai
(We apologize for the changes of prospective members announced on June 12th.)

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※There is a time limit for each handshake.
※The ticket of Handshake event only valid at the specified date and time.
※One ticket is available for one participation per person.
※For those who would like to participate more the once, please go back to the end of the line again after each handshake.
※Any guest over aged 3 will need a ticket to attend.
※We are not responsible for the reissue of lost or stolen tickets.

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※There is a time limit for each handshake.
※The ticket of Handshake event only valid at the specified date and time.
※One ticket is available for one participation per person.
※For those who would like to participate more the once, please go back to the end of the line again after each handshake.
※Any guest aged 3 and over will need a ticket to attend.
※We are not responsible for the reissue of lost or stolen tickets.

元の翻訳
※There is a time limit for each handshake.
※The ticket of Handshake event only valid at the specified date and time.
※One ticket is available for one participation per person.
※For those who would like to participate more the once, please go back to the end of the line again after each handshake.
※Any guest over aged 3 will need a ticket to attend.
※We are not responsible for the reissue of lost or stolen tickets.

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※There is a time limit for each handshake.
※The ticket of the handshake event is only valid at the specified date and time.
※One ticket is available for one participation per person.
※If you would like to participate more than once, please go back to the end of the line again after each handshake.
※Any guest over aged 3 will need a ticket to attend.
※We are not responsible for the reissue of lost or stolen tickets.

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Upcoming Appearance!!

■TV TOKYO「TV TOKYO MUSIC FESTIVAL(NEW)」
・DATE：Thursday 26th June, 2014
・TIME：18:30-23:24

・OFFICIAL HOMEPAGE： www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/ongakusai_2014/

Part 1「MOKUHACHI！One Night Only~Thursday's premium concert」

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Upcoming Appearance!!

■TV TOKYO"TV TOKYO MUSIC FESTIVAL(NEW)"
・DATE：Thursday 26th June, 2014
・TIME：18:30-23:24

・OFFICIAL HOMEPAGE： www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/ongakusai_2014/

Part 1"MOKUHACHI！One Night Only~Thursday's premium concert"

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【TOKYO】HARDBOILED NIGHT Day One「The Narrows City of Angel and Sin」

DATE： Sunday 13th July, 2014
TIME： OPEN 18:00/START 18:30
PLACE： AKASAKA BLITZ
TICKET： ¥3,000（tax included） Advance -1 Drink（¥500）
※Tickets at Door TO BE ANNOUNCED
※Standing tickets with docket number

■FAN CLUB EXCLUSIVE RESERVATION
Acceptance Period：Wed. 11th June~ Mon. 16th June, 2014
※Astalight* B Course Member Only
​※Booking site will be updated shortly.

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【TOKYO】HARDBOILED NIGHT Day One「The Narrows City of Angel and Sin」

DATE： Sunday 13th July, 2014
TIME： OPEN 18:00/START 18:30
PLACE： AKASAKA BLITZ
TICKET： ¥3,000（tax included） Advance -1 Drink（¥500）
※Tickets at Door TO BE ANNOUNCED
※Standing tickets with docket number

■FAN CLUB EXCLUSIVE RESERVATION
Acceptance Period：Wed. 11th June~ Mon. 16th June, 2014
※Astalight* B Course Memberｓ Only
​※Booking site will be updated shortly.