翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: アーティスト名は「Cheeky Parade」に統一下さい。全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。

日本語

「Together」発売記念 Thanksgiving Event（関東）


ファンのみなさま、いつも応援していただき本当にありがとうございます!!
各地のCDショップにお邪魔して、メンバーから直接感謝のキモチをお伝えします!!

＜イベント内容＞
各店舗においてのグループ別 握手会☆

＜店舗・メンバー・集合時間＞
■関東1
HMVルミネエスト新宿
渡辺 亜紗美・溝呂木 世蘭・山本 真凜・永井 日菜
（6/12に発表したメンバーから変更しております。大変申し訳ありませんが、何卒ご了承ください。）

英語

"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at Kanto area

Very much thanks for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade is going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group Handshake event at each shops

Place/Participant/Appointed time
・Kanto 1
HMV LUMINE EST
Asami WATANABE, Seran MIZOROKI, Marin YAMAMOTO, Hina NAGAI
(Sorry for the changes of prospective members announced on 12th June.)

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/20 03:47:35

元の翻訳
"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at Kanto area

Very much thanks for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade is going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group Handshake event at each shops

Place/Participant/Appointed time
・Kanto 1
HMV LUMINE EST
Asami WATANABE, Seran MIZOROKI, Marin YAMAMOTO, Hina NAGAI
(Sorry for the changes of prospective members announced on 12th June.)

修正後
"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at the Kanto area

We thank you very much for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade are going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group handshake event at each shop

Place/Participant/Appointed time
・Kanto 1
HMV LUMINE EST
Asami Watanabe, Seran Mizoroki, Marin Yamamoto, Hina Nagai
(We apologize for the changes of prospective members announced on June 12th.)

I especially didn't like how all the first names were in lower-case letters and the last names were in all capital letters.