スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — もらったレビュー

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Please negotiate an offer on the [make offer] section of the product page.

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Please negotiate the price from the [make offer] section on the product page.

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< Playguides >
Ticket Piya　http://pia.jp/t/ayu/
Lawson Ticket http://l-tike.com/ayumihamasaki-lawson/
ePlus　http://eplus.jp/ayumi-hamasaki2014/

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< Playguides >
Ticket Pia　http://pia.jp/t/ayu/
Lawson Ticket http://l-tike.com/ayumihamasaki-lawson/
ePlus　http://eplus.jp/ayumi-hamasaki2014/

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[Whenever Online Guangdong]

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[Whenever Guangdong]

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Mr. OO
Good afternoon.

I would like the goods I bid on shipped to Japan.
Is the goods price $10.49 +$12.75 postage totaling $23.24 is this correct?

If you could contact me I will make payment with PayPal quickly.

Thank you.

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Mr. OO
Good afternoon.

I would like to ask you to ship the goods I bid to Japan.
Is it correct that the total price of goods is $23.24 ($10.49 +$12.75 postage)?

If you could contact me, I will make payment with PayPal quickly.

Thank you.

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The goods were delivered n the 9th July, but as you was not there they were returned to the office.
Could you please check if there is a notice of delivery in you post box.
If there is not one, please use the following number to make inquiries.

Contact at the Overseas Post Office

1-800-222-1811

The goods will be kept for 5 days only, so please check as soon as possible.

Thank you.

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The goods were delivered n the 9th July, but as you were not there they were returned to the office.
Could you please check if there is a notice of delivery in you post box?
If there is not one, please use the following number to make inquiries.

Contact at the Overseas Post Office

1-800-222-1811

The goods will be kept for 5 days only, so please check as soon as possible.

Thank you.

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Good afternoon.
I am contacting you form Japan.
Your shop is one of our favorites.
I have been purchasing from you for about 3 years now.
When I checked my account.
I have purchases 5000 EURO from you since March 2013.
(Please check this)
But why am I not able to use my gift vouchers?
Not being able to use them is a little strange.
I plan to purchase again on the 17th of July,
could you give me the promotional codes for these vouchers?
I will be purchasing more and more from your store.
I await your reply.
Thank you.

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Good afternoon.
I am contacting you from Japan.
Your shop is one of our favorites.
I have been purchasing from you for about 3 years now.
When I checked my account.
I have purchases 5000 EURO from you since March 2013.
(Please check this)
But why am I not able to use my gift vouchers?
Not being able to use them is a little strange.
I plan to purchase again on the 17th of July,
could you give me the promotional codes for these vouchers?
I will be purchasing more and more from your store.
I await your reply.
Thank you.

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#abit
Thank you for contacting me.
I'm glad the hear the 10.5 deg has shipped.
Re the fairway wood, Is it possible to send me pictures of the 13 and 15 deg ones?
The same angle you used for the 10.5 is fine
I await you reply.

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#abit
Thank you for contacting me.
I'm glad to hear that you have shipped the 10.5 deg.
Re the fairway wood, Is it possible to send me pictures of the 13 and 15 deg ones?
The same angle you used for the 10.5 is fine
I await your reply.

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OK I understand that.
So, please come to my office on the 10th at 15:00 in Chiyoda Ku.
The reception for business clients is on the 1st floor.
Now, on the first floor of company A's building there is a bank branch, do not go up to their counter please.
It is a little difficult, so when you arrive call my mobile on 111-2234. I will go and pick you up.
I look forward to meeting with you.

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OK I understand that.
So, please come to my office on the 10th at 15:00 in Chiyoda-Ku.
The reception for business clients is on the 1st floor.
Now, on the first floor of company A's building, there is a bank branch, do not go up to their counter please.
It may be confusing, so when you arrive call my mobile on 111-2234. I will come and pick you up.
I look forward to meeting with you.

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An elegant short style for a mature 14 year old housewife.

A squared off impression created from the flattening of the top, short layered straight hair to give a natural flow to the parting.
From there, the volume positioned to the lip line, to accent the glamorous look. The natural coloring with small highlights brings out the shine.
An all over one curl design, fitting neatly into the neckline
Completed with a soft spray for the perfect adult short hair finish.

Cool adult, soft wave long hair.

A cute and beautifully formed curled bob in the casual adult style.

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An elegant short style for a mature 41 year old housewife.

A squared off impression created from the flattening of the top, short layered straight hair to give a natural flow to the parting.
From there, the volume positioned to the lip line, to accent the glamorous look. The natural coloring with small highlights brings out the shine.
An all over one curl design, fitting neatly into the neckline
Completed with a soft spray for the perfect adult short hair finish.

Cool adult, soft wave long hair.

A cute and beautifully formed curled bob in the casual adult style.

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At present your items are being back ordered from the warehouse.
this will cause some delay in the shipping, please wait a short time longer.

I expect they will ship on the 8th July.

I am very sorry that I can promise delivery of the items on the date you have requested.
Due to the customs and inspections in your country it will arrive late.
Please understand this situation.

I will give you the tracking number for you to be able to confirm the package details.

If you are uncomfortable with this, I will accept a cancellation of your order.

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At present your items are being back ordered from the warehouse.
This will cause some delay in the shipping, so please wait a short time longer.

I expect they will ship on the 8th of July.

I am very sorry that I can't promise you the delivery of the items on the date you have requested.
Your goods may arrive late due to a customs check or depending on how your national courier processes the delivery.
Please understand the situation.

I will give you the tracking number so that you will be able to check on the package's status.

If you are uncomfortable with this, I will accept a cancellation of your order.

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If you take a look at the items photo on the page I think you will understand, the item was not damaged originally.
There is a possibility it was broken during transit.
$00 is the amount you have indicated.

There are two ways to resolve this issue

1) Request a compensation for damage from the post office.
I do not know how much compensation you may receive from the post office, but if you explain the situation you should get a refund. I will supplement that claim money with $50 as way of apology.

2) Return the item
Please ensure it is carefully packaged, when it is returned to me I will refund $00.

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If you take a look at the items photo on the page, I think you will understand that the item was not damaged originally.
There is a possibility it was broken during transit.
$** is the amount you have indicated.

There are two ways to resolve this issue:

1) Request a compensation for the damage from the post office.
I do not know how much compensation you may receive from the post office, but if you explain the situation you should get a refund. I will supplement that claim money with $50 as way of apology.

2) Return the item
Please ensure it is carefully packaged; when it is returned to me I will refund $**.

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As you said there is a crack in the base of the kettle that can be seen, and signs of repairs.
I do not know for sure.
However, it does not leak, and can be used without a problem.
Also, as the item has already been packaged, taking additional photographs is hard.

The bottom is flat. However, as it is a hand-made product it is not completely flat, please check the photographs.
I have given you a $00 discount as you have requested.
Further discount is very hard for me to provide.
If you were to purchase several items I could consider a further discount for you.

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As you said there is a crack in the base of the kettle that can be seen, and signs of repairs.
I do not know for sure.
However, it does not leak, and can be used without a problem.
Also, as the item has already been packaged, taking additional photographs is hard.

The bottom is flat. However, as it is a hand-made product it is not completely flat, please check the photographs.
I will give you a $00 discount as you have requested.
Further discount is very hard for me to provide.
If you were to purchase several items I could consider a further discount for you.

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The AAA template is really good isn't it. But, when I press the BBB button can I get the video to display? (like CCC's template)
Is there any reason you know of that the video doesn't display? Well, anyway, its great. I am looking forward to Ver. 3 I am barracking for Germany in the World Cup....lol!

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The AAA template is really good. But, when I press the BBB button can I get the video to display? (like CCC's template)
Is there any reason you know of that the video does not display? Well, anyway, it is great. I am looking forward to Ver. 3 I am barracking for Germany in the World Cup....lol!

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Thank you for your message.

We will arrange delivery from here.
However, if the item does not arrive this time, we will issue a refund.
Thank you
If there are any further inquiries please contact us again through Amazon.

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Thank you for your message.

We were the ones who made the delivery.
However, since the item has not arrived, we have issued a refund.
We hope that is satisfactory.
If you have any further requests, please direct them to Amazon.

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Sorry to keep being of annoyance, but the problem has not been resolved.
As you advised I offset the items shortage.
The item is now Active.
However, on the items page, I can not display the information for my store.
Please refer to the item pages below.

So can you see that my shop name is not displayed?
Naturally, I can not get orders from customers this way.
Please tell me how to remedy this.
Again sorry for the many inquiries.

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Sorry to keep being of annoyance, but the problem has not been resolved.
As you advised I compensated for the lack of information about the item.
So, the item is now Active.
However, on the items page, the information for my store is not displayed.
Please refer to the item pages below.

So can you see that my shop name is not displayed?
Naturally, I can not get orders from customers this way.
Please tell me how to remedy this.
Again sorry for the many inquiries.

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I purchased these kettles as being made in Japan, but it is difficult to provide evidence they were.
If you are fond of the Dragon Pattern, can I suggest OO.
This one is much older, and very detailed manufacturing.
However, in the end I will have to ask you to make your decision by viewing the photos only.
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The way to use the OO for a longer life is described below for you.

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I purchased these kettles, which I believed made in Japan. But it seems difficult to prove they are truly Japanese products.
If you prefer the design with dragons, I would recommend OO.
It looks much older and more delicate.
But it’s up to you to make the final choice by considering the photos.
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Sorry for the late reply.
The item was not English compliant originally.
Therefor I do not have a replacement item.o me.

If you are not satisfied please return the product t
If you return it according to Amazon rules, I will refund your money.

I'm sorry to have caused an inconvenience to you in this instance

If there is anything further you require please ask.

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Sorry for the late reply.
The item was not English-compatible originally.
Therefore I do not have a replacement item available.

If you are not satisfied please return the product.
When you return the item according to Amazon policy, I will issue a refund.

I'm sorry to have for the inconvenience that has been caused to you this time.

We look forward to doing the business with you again.

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It seems that the Pulse Oximeter Alarm is not functioning.

Indeed, depending on the pulse rate, the level of the sound will change.
However, SpO2 alarm does not work.

I set the lower threshold to 95 on the SpO2.
SpO2, which was then measured is below the threshold, but the item did not sound the alarm.

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It seems that the Pulse Oximeter Alarm is not functioning.

Indeed, depending on the pulse rate, the level of the sound will change.
However, the main SpO2 alarm does not work.

I set the lower threshold to 95 on the SpO2.
SpO2, which was then measured is below the threshold, but the item did not sound the alarm.

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出品者と商品を評価したいですすがその方法教えていただきませんか？

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御社と商品を評価したいですがその方法を教えていただけませんか？