スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — 付けたレビュー

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We are sorry for contacting late.
Thanks for your reply.
Although the same name but different company is listed to the Tokyo Stock Exchange 2nd section, was are afraid that we are not listed it yet.
Here's our website (URL), but the other with same name is for (URL).
You had better make sure it as the submission of the financial statements would be required.
Could to tell us theURL, ID , and PASSWORD of your platform?

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We are sorry for contacting late.
Thanks for your reply.
Although the same name but different company is listed to the Tokyo Stock Exchange 2nd section, was are afraid that we are not listed it yet.
Here's our website (URL), but the other with same name is for (URL).
You had better make sure it as the submission of the financial statements would be required.
Could to tell us theURL, ID , and PASSWORD of your platform?
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Thanks for your reply. Sorry for the delay in contacting you. Although there is another company with the listed in the 2nd section of the Tokyo Stock Exchange, we are not listed it yet.↵
Here's our website (URL), but the other company sharing our name the URL is (URL).↵
Confirmation of your submission of the financial statements would be required, please ensure to check this↵
Could to tell us the URL, ID , and PASSWORD of your platform?

元の翻訳
Please pay attention to it.

We settled about sending by small packet.
However, we can send by the small packet only when we have an extra space in air mail, so priority is put on the express mail.

We heard that it takes longer that the items go through customs in the States and Canada due to the increase of the items at Christmas and the year end & beginning of the year.
When we sent the item by small packat at this time of last year, it took 2 months at the longest until it was delivered (around the end of January).

We hope that you understand that it takes long time to be delivered.
We appreciate your understanding.

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Please pay attention to it.
ATTENTION!↵

We settled about sending by small packet.
Regarding the.....↵
However, we can send by the small packet only when we have an extra space in air mail, so priority is put on the express mail.

We heard that it takes longer when the items goes through customs in the States and Canada due to the increase of the items at Christmas and the year end & beginning of the year.
When we sent the item by small (packat <- spelling) at this time of last year, it took 2 months at the longest until it was delivered (around the end of January).

We hope that you understand that it takes long time to be delivered.
We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support.
Thanks to your cancellation process on eBay, the full amount was refunded from "PayPal".
Although your instruction was to pay through "propay", I do not settle a payment anything other than "PayPal.
I bidded the item because it said "PayPal" is available for payment, we are sorry but please let me cancell your order this time.
Thank and best regards,

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Thank you for your support.
Thanks to your cancellation process on eBay, the full amount was refunded from "PayPal".
[Thank you for cancelling the eBay .....]↵
Although your instruction was to pay through "propay", I do not settle a payment anything other than "PayPal.
[...I do not make payment using anything aside from/ apart from 'PayPal'↵
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I bidded (<--not a word) the item because it said "PayPal" is available for payment, we are sorry but please let me cancell (<--spelling) your (<--not your it's MY) order this time.↵
[I bid on the item as it said that 'PayPal' was available as a payment method,
Thank and best regards,

元の翻訳
No, I can not order as 0.1 Lot.
I made setting in order and I tried back-test but still every orders become 0.01 Lot.
Do I leave Safe_lot_Calculation and Lots Percent settings as default?
Settings now is shown below.

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No, I can not order as 0.1 Lot.
I made setting in order and I tried back-test but still every orders become 0.01 Lot.
[ The settings were done as indicated, then I tried a back test but, all of them were ordered as 0.01 Lot]↵
Do I leave Safe_lot_Calculation and Lots Percent settings as the default?
Settings now is shown below.↵
[The current setting are shown below]

元の翻訳
Dear Mr. Richard,
Thank you for your contact.

With regard to the champagne, I provided it to the customers with a glass.
The portion from the other day (JPY1,000 x 3).

Considering the total COGS including champage and glasses, I will duly cover the difference should there be any loss is occurring. I am sorry to bother you, but your kind understanding is appreciated.

Please excuse me, I feel I need to know and learn more about wines.
I will go over again from scratch.

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Dear Mr. Richard, (Starter mistake)
Thank you for your contact.

With regard to the champagne, I provided it to the customers with a glass. (not with a glass, that is how you serve a bottle)
[Regarding the Champagne, It was served to the customer by the glass]↵
The portion from the other day (JPY1,000 x 3).
[The other day that was (JPY1,000 x 3)]
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Considering the total COGS [Cost Of Goods Sold] including champage (<--spelling mistake) and glasses, I will duly cover the difference should there be any loss is occurring. I am sorry to bother you, but your kind understanding is appreciated.↵
[I would like to take responsibility for payment should there be any negative price discrepancy after consideration of the price/purchase costs and glasses of Champagne when it has been tallied.]

Please excuse me, I feel I need to know and learn more about wines.
I will go over again from scratch.

元の翻訳
What you can do at Rirekino

By registering your profile and experiences, you can create your brief profile easily.
It is different from other SNS, and you can summarize the achievement that you would like to show↵
and personality.

With whom have you worked on the profile and experiences? You can register them on the Rirekino.
The portfolio where you are highly reliable is completed.

By the profile, you can communicate by means of comments. I am sure that the Rirekino will be the open and truly live resume on the website.

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What you can do at Rirekino

By registering your profile and experiences, you can create your brief profile easily.
[You can easily register your career history and experiences by registering a profile]↵
↵
It is different from other SNS, as you can summarize the achievements that you would like to show together with personality attributes.

With whom have you worked on the profile and experiences? ↵
[Where have you worked? With whom did you work? ]↵
You can register them on the Rirekino.
The portfolio where you are highly reliable is completed.
[Complete a CV portfolio, showing yourself as a highly trusted reliable employee.]↵

In your profile, you can communicate by means of comments.↵
↵
I am sure that the Rirekino will be the open and truly live resume on the website.↵
[Rirekino will be your 'go to' web based Live CV!]

元の翻訳
Our ODR's cancellation rate exceeds 5%. We misunderstood that customers are responsible for VAT and there is a cancellation due to the typhoon. We are going to implement an improvement plan as followings. When it is typhoon season, we will not use SAL, but EMS so that the order should not be delayed. VAT charge can be found out after you receive the order, and we will be responsible for any VAT charge. We will make sure that you will have our response by email if you contact us.

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Our ODR's cancellation rate exceeds 5%. We misunderstood that customers are responsible for VAT and there is a cancellation due to the typhoon. We are going to implement an improvement plan as follows. When it is typhoon season, we will not use SAL, but EMS so that the order will not be delayed. As VAT charges are unknown till after receiving the order, we will of course be responsible for any VAT charges that are invoiced to us. We will make sure that you will have our response by email if you contact us.

元の翻訳
Thank you for answering to our question.

I got relieved that you are an agency of xx.

We appreciate your discount of xx.
However, for our contentious business, we can’t make a predominance with that price.

We trade with some American firms.
Although it depends on products, the market price of a wholesale price is generally less than 50%-off of their established price.

Could you sell us this product for $170 per one?
We’ll increase the amount of purchase from now on.
Also we want to buy xx.

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Thank you for answering our question.

I was relieved that you are an agency of xx.

We appreciate your discount of xx.
However, for our contentious [continuous] business, [we can’t make a predominance with that price. >?????<]

We trade with some American firms.
Although it depends on products, the market price of a wholesale price is generally less than 50%-off of their market price [RRP
]↵

Could you sell us this product for $170 per unit/item?
We’ll increase the amount of purchase from now on.
Also we want to buy xx.

元の翻訳
Class Dispositions

Pawn Class:
Specializes in transformation magic, the members of this class are easily carried away and many of them are mischievous.
Cheerful, and enjoys discovering everything.
Usually works in public entertainment related jobs, like performers and the front stage.

Rook Class:
Specializes in offensive magic, members of this class are short tempered. Hot headed students and students with course manners are common. There are also those who are always competing and are quick to fight.
Usually works in positions like security or police, that are related to self-defense and guarding.

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Class Dispositions

Pawn Class:
Specializes in transformation magic, the members of this class get carried away easily, many of them are mischievous,
cheerful, and enjoy discovering everything.
Usually works in public entertainment related jobs, like performers and the front stage.

Rook Class:
Specializes in offensive magic, members of this class are short tempered. Hot headed students and students with coarse manners are common. There are also those who are always competing and are quick to fight.
Usually works in positions like security or police, or related to self-defense and guarding.

元の翻訳
I apologize for the wrong item was shipped to you this time.
As I notified you the other day, your ordered item was shipped on October 4, 2014, which was 3 days after the shipment of the DHC suppliments. Would you please wait for little longer?
Also, as per previously explained, the DHC suppliments are brand new, so you may use them as they are, so please use them if you like.
The shippment for this occasion was via SAL.
Your kind understanding is appreciated because the expected delivery date may vary due to an international shipment.
I will make sure to take care of your transaction till the end.
Please feel free to contact us any time if any.

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I apologize for that wrong item was shipped to you this time.
[I apologize that the incorrect/wrong item has been shipped to you in this instance]↵
↵
As I had notified you the other day, your ordered item was shipped on 4th of October, 2014, which was 3 days after the shipment of the DHC suppliments (spelling error [supplements]). Would you please wait for little longer?
[As I reported to/informed you the other day, your order was shipped on the 4th of October, 2014. 3 days later than the DHC supplements.]↵
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Also, as per previously explained, the DHC suppliments (sp) are brand new, so you may use them as they are, so please use them if you like.
The shippment (spelling error) for this occasion was via SAL.
[As I have also explained previously, they are in a new unopened condition and can be used as is if you like.]↵
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Your kind understanding is appreciated because the expected delivery date may vary due to an international shipment.
I will make sure to take care of your transaction till the end.
Please feel free to contact us any time if any. if any what???↵
[Please feel free to contact us any time if there is anything we can help you with]↵
↵

元の翻訳
It is very unlikelly to believe that the accessories of the merchandise has been lacking from the start.
Have you had a chance to check it thoroughly?
We could obtain it from the manufacturer, but it will take 1 to 2 months for you to wait. Would you please take its product number and send the image to me? I will arrange it for you accordingly.

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It is very unlikelly (sp) to believe that the accessories of the merchandise has been lacking from the start.
[It is highly unlikely that the accessories were not included in the merchandise originally.]↵
Have you had a chance to check it thoroughly?
↵
We could obtain [it] (plural accessories) from the manufacturer, but it will take 1 to 2 months [for you to wait]??.↵
[We can obtain them from the maker but, it will mean waiting for 1-2 months.]↵
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Would you please take its product number and send the image to me?↵
[Would you please take a photograph of the product serial number, and send it to me?]↵
↵
I will arrange it for you accordingly.

元の翻訳
We do not intend to confirm all defective products. We would like to know how to come to a compromise in discrepancy of quality standard in between the US and Japan.
Compared to the other countries, Japanese company is obsessed about a minor problem in quality. First let us discuss the matter with you then we will decide how much we need to bear the cost of the defective products.

We do not report this quality problem in order to get the money back.
We would like to find out the discrepancies between your quality standard and ours, then we would like to know how much we have to bear the cost of the defective products.

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We do not intend to confirm all defective products. We would like to know how to come to a compromise between the quality discrepancy standards between the US and Japan.
Compared to the other countries, Japanese companies are obsessed with minor quality problems. First let us discuss the matter with you then we will decide how much we need to bear for the cost of the defective products.

We are not reporting this quality control problem in order to get money back.
We would like to find out the discrepancies between your quality standard and ours, then we would like to know how much cost we have to bear for the defective products.

元の翻訳
We appreciate your email.
We are making an effort in the activity of Europe, so we go to London regularly.
When we go to London next time, we will let you know.
We are looking forward to talking with you then.

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We appreciate your email.
We are [making an effort] concentrating our efforts in Europe, so we go to London regularly.
When we go to London next time, we will let you know.
We are looking forward to talking with you then.

元の翻訳
#1 Creamy Pomodoro (Tomato-Cream Sauce)

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Creamy Pomodoro (Tomato-Cream Sauce)

元の翻訳
I am working in the town where many foreigners come.
I thought that I could communicate with a variety of people in the town if I can speak English.
In addition, I feel so happy if I can understand the foreign words in the movies without seeing the translation in Japanese.

The reason that I became interested in IT is that if I have the knowledge of ～, I can create a website where people all over the world can see. I tried to create it, and it was fun.

I have been working in IT industry for 5 years, and I found that it is an appropriate job for me. It is hard to study because the progress of technology is so fast, though.

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I am working in the town where many foreigners come.
I thought that I could communicate with a variety of people in the town if I could speak English.
In addition, I feel so happy if I can understand the foreign words in the movies without seeing the translation in Japanese.

The reason that I became interested in IT is that if I have a knowledge of ～, I can create a website that people from all over the world can see. I tried to create it, and it was fun.

I have been working in IT industry for 5 years, and I found that it is an appropriate job for me. It is hard to study because the progress of technology is so fast, though.