スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — もらったレビュー

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Thank you for your reply.
As I thought you would not be able to help out I tried all sorts of things today and have fixed it myself. Sorry for the trouble.
I think it was a bug, so for the sake of others, next update please fix it.

It is really a wonderful script. When I put the cocnonical tag on Twitter and share the post it's great. Even as it is now I'm really happy with it.

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Thank you for your reply.
As I thought you would not be able to help out I tried all sorts of things today and have fixed it myself. Sorry for the trouble.
I think it was a bug, so for the sake of others, please fix it in the next update.

It really is a wonderful script. It would be great if I can put the cocnonical tag on and share it on Twitter too . But even as it is now I'm really happy with it.

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Item description as follows.

AABB Type ACOG TA31 Replica New Model Focused Tube Scope.
Compatible with 20mm rails.
Unlike traditional battery-powered units, the scope specification actually uses the focus tube.
No need for batteries as the light enters through the fiber tube, to illuminate the cross shaped reticle.
Same as the original, it automatically adjusts the amount of light around the reticle for the best result.
** It will not illuminate in the dark
Therefore there is no excessive bleeding or reflection from the reticle, making it clear and easy, promoting better accuracy in shooting.

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Item description as follows.

AABB Type ACOG TA31 Replica New Model Focused Tube Scope.
Compatible with 20mm rails.
Unlike traditional battery-powered units, the scope specification actually uses the focus tube.
No need for batteries as the light enters through the fiber tube, to illuminate the cross shaped reticle.
Same as the original, it automatically adjusts the amount of light around the reticle for the best result.
* It will not illuminate in the dark
Therefore there is no excessive bleeding or reflection from the reticle, making it clear and easy, promoting better accuracy in shooting.

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New/Unopened item, however the package has a small amount of scuffing, scatches and dents etc please understand this point before purchase. I will send the package via BOON (Yamato Delivery) immediately.
Thank you.

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New/Unopened item, however the package has a small amount of scuffing, scatches and dents etc. Please understand this point before purchase. I will send the package via BOON (Yamato Delivery) immediately.
Thank you.

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I have uploaded the photo,please check it.
I am not considering returning the item. Please issue a partial refund.

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I have uploaded the photo, please check it.
I am not considering returning the item. Please issue a partial refund.

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เรากำลังมองหาคนที่กำลังเรียนภาษาญี่ปุ่น！
คุณต้องการที่จะแปลให้ Conyac เพื่อพัฒนาภาษาญี่ปุ่นของคุณไหม？

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เรากำลังเปิดรับสมัครผู้ที่กำลังเรียนภาษาญี่ปุ่น！
คุณต้องการที่จะร่วมงานแปลกับ Conyac เพื่อพัฒนาภาษาญี่ปุ่นของคุณไปอีกขั้นไหม？

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You gave us negative feedback in the AtoZ Claims.
We understand your anger and frustration with the issue and subsequent trouble, we feel the same. We shipped the item on schedule, we would like you to understand that the loss or theft of the item was beyond our control as it was in the hands of USPS.
Your feedback has a great impact on our reputation as sellers. We kindly ask that you remove the negative evaluation please.

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You gave us a negative feedback and the AtoZ Claims.
We understand your anger and frustration with the issue and subsequent trouble, and we feel the same. We, however, shipped the item on schedule, and we would like you to understand that the loss or theft of the item was beyond our control as it was in the hands of USPS.
Your feedback has a great impact on our reputation as a seller, so, we kindly ask that you remove the negative feedback and the AtoZ claims please.

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As is shown in the photo there is no mistake that it was delivered to New York on the 6th June, after which tracking is not available.
The possible causes we can imagine are loss, held by customs or theft.
You chose standard shipping. As was stated in the description insured value of the item was placed to the value of $60. After you have contacted USPS and have found out that the item has been lost we will refund you $60.

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As is shown in the photo, it was definitely delivered to New York on the 6th of June, after which tracking is not available.
The possible causes we can imagine are loss, customs delays, and theft.
You chose standard shipping. As was stated in the description, the insured value of the item was placed at $60. Once you have contacted USPS to confirm that the item has been lost, we will refund you $60.

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The item may differ slightly from the actual photo. Reason: I have posted an image of the same type of item, but as there are so many types I can not find the exact one.
Please check the web site of ○ △ for details. Item will be shipped from Japan. All goods are new and purchased from an authorized dealer. Please be assured they are not fake.

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The actual item may differ slightly from the photo. Reason: I have posted an image of the item of the same type, but as there are so many types I can not post all of them.
Please check the website of ○ △ for details. All items will be shipped from Japan. All goods are new and purchased from authorized dealers. Please be assured they are not fake.

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Hello.
I must apologize for being late with the payment.
I have just completed it using PayPal.

I am also interested in a product you have listed A.
If I bid on this, is it possible for these to be sent together?
Thank you very much.

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Hello.
I must apologize for being late with the payment.
(I am sorry for the late payment.)↵
I have just completed it using PayPal.
(I have just made it through PayPal.)↵

I am also interested in a product you have listed A.
(I am also interested in a product A you have listed.)↵
If I bid on this, is it possible for these to be sent together?↵
(If I can win this bid, could you ship it together?)
Thank you very much.

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[ Set of 3 LIVE DVDs]
RZBD-59496～7/B　Price: 5,200JPY (item)+tax
Reserve yours here! -->
amazon：http://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B00G3BQ75C
mu-mo：http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/item1/?merc_no=RZBD-59496

[Set of 2 discs LIVE Blu-ray]
RZXD-59493/B　Price: 6,000JPY (item) + tax
Reserve yours here! -->

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[ 3 disc set LIVE DVD]
RZBD-59496～7/B　Price: 5,200JPY (item)+tax
Reserve yours here! -->
amazon：http://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B00G3BQ75C
mu-mo：http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/item1/?merc_no=RZBD-59496

[ 2 discs set LIVE Blu-ray]
RZXD-59493/B　Price: 6,000JPY (item) + tax
Reserve yours here! -->

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Site is Here→ http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/#top

DAICHI MIURA [I'm On Fire]
[Youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Of4bUdLba9g
[iTunes]https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/the-entertainer/id731242104

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Here is the site→ http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/#top

DAICHI MIURA [I'm On Fire]
[Youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Of4bUdLba9g
[iTunes]https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/the-entertainer/id731242104

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Hello Jack,
Thank you for taking care of that for me. I will wait for you reply.

If the goods you recommended are $200, I would like to purchase them all please.
If you will sell them at $200 each, please send me a PayPal Payment Request.
If you send a PayPal payment request, itemizing the quantity price and model numbers I think we can have a safe transaction.

If you have any new product available from now on please feel free to contact me.
We need more and more new products.

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Hello Jack,
Thank you for taking care of that for me. I will wait for you reply.

If the goods you recommended are $200, I would like to purchase them all please.
If you will sell them at $200 each, please send me a PayPal Payment Request.
If you send a PayPal payment request, itemizing the quantity price and model numbers I think we can have a safe transaction.

If you have any new product available from now on please feel free to contact us.
We need more and more new products.

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Warning
I bought a product from you, but I have not received the product even after more than two months. When I checked at the Post Office in Japan with the tracking number they said it has not left the US and is not in Japan. You should have insured the shipment of the product. Please refund the full amount I paid immediately. Otherwise, I will assume this as fraud. I have done nothing wrong. You should always contact the customer in good faith as long as you are in business.
I am looking forward at any time to hear from you.

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Warning
I bought a product from you, but I have not received the product even after more than two months. When I checked at the Post Office in Japan with the tracking number, they said it has not left the US and is not in Japan. You should have insured the shipment of the product. Please refund the full amount I paid immediately. Otherwise, I will assume this as fraud. I have done nothing wrong. You should always contact the customers in good faith as long as you are in business.
I am looking forward at any time to hearing from you.

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I will pay after the return of the $4.30.
How many days will it take for the refund?
Please provide more details.

I love your company's products.
I would like to continue to do business with your company in the future.
Thank you.

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I will make sure to pay after the refund of the $4.30.
How many days will it take you to refund?
Please provide more details.

I love your company's products.
I would like to continue to do business with your company in the future.
Thank you.

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Re the question on Estimated delivery dates

We deliver to various countries through our delivery agency. Therefore, As the shipment location, registered address, and where the item actually ships from area ll different, there are some variations in the arrival dates, this causes us some concern.
With this schedule, Standard Shipping take 7 days, Expedited 3 days to arrive, Is it possible to fix this schedule to fix these estimated shipping dates?

What can other sellers in a similar situation to us with multiple item forwarding addresses do?

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I have some questions about Estimated delivery dates.

We deliver to various countries through our delivery agency. Therefore, as the shipment location, registered address, and where the item actually ships from area ll different, there are some variations in the arrival dates, this causes us some concern.
With this schedule, Standard Shipping take 7 days, Expedited 3 days to arrive, is it possible to fix this schedule to fix these estimated shipping dates?

What can other sellers in a similar situation to us with multiple item forwarding addresses do?

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Please negotiate an offer on the [make offer] section of the product page.

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Please negotiate the price by clicking the [make offer] button of the product page.