スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — もらったレビュー

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WE have planned and are currently implementing the above plans and management controls to reform the above mentioned issues
[] Revision of the pricing system
--> We have identified a problem in the present program we use, and are current underway in rectifying it.
[] All listings have been stopped for new items until the above error in the program can be remedied and the current stock price can be adjusted.
[] When the new .csv file is uploaded, there will be a checking routine in place to evaluate the actual uploaded data and the applicable items for consistency over pricing

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WE have planned and are currently implementing the above plans and management controls to reform the above mentioned issues
[] Revision of the pricing system
--> We have identified a problem in the present program we use, and the rectificaiton is currently underway.
[] All listings have been stopped for new items until the above error in the program can be remedied and the current stock price can be adjusted.
[] When the new .csv file is uploaded, there will be a checking routine in place to evaluate the actual uploaded data and the applicable items for pricing consistency.

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I checked with the manufacturer.
The internal battery is a secondary solar battery.
Also, this battery is not lithium, it is a NiCad battery,
and not dangerous.
Please remove the hazardous substance goods, thank you.

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I checked with the manufacturer.
The built-in battery is a secondary solar battery.
Also, this battery is not lithium, it is a NiMH battery,
and not dangerous.
Please remove it from the category of the hazardous substance goods, thank you.

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Are you not be able to provide a demo site until mid-October?Will take so much time for the server to be ready? I very much doubt this.

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Would the demo site not be available until mid October? Does it take that long to get the server ready? It's very doubtful.

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My apologies but, in the normal return process the goods must be return to Japan and checked prior to issuance of a refund.

All customers from across the world understand this point.

Regarding the shipping charge of the item, International Express Delivery is expensive,
so it will ship via normal Air Mail for a cost of $8.

If the return postage cost will be less than $20, we will return this cost to you when the goods have been returned.

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Another product will become available soon, please wait a short while longer

We have already placed a large discount on this item, further discount is not easy.

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Our apologies but, in the normal return process the goods must be returned to Japan and checked prior to issuance of a refund.

All customers from across the world understand this point.

Regarding the shipping charge of the item, International Express Delivery is expensive,
so it will shipped via normal Air Mail for a cost of $8.

If the return postage cost will be less than $20, we will return this cost to you when the goods have been returned.

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Another product will become available soon, please wait a short while longer

We have already placed a large discount on this item, further discount is not possible.

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I have received 2 items.
One of the 2 items, is missing the makeup box (outer box) & does not have an instruction booklet included.
Could you send these accessories as soon as possible please.
If there is not a box or instructions available, please refund my purchase amount for that item.
Thank you.

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I have received 2 items.
One of the 2 items is missing the fancy box (outer box) and an instruction manual.
Could you send these accessories to me as soon as possible please?
If there is not a box or an instruction manual available, please issue me a partial refund for them.
Thank you.

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I have one more thing I want. Sorry for the many requests.
When the user registers, can you make it so the user gets an alert if they enter anything but characters in English for their password in that column?
I think it best to not limit the amount of characters as it is in the user name column.
I think it best if it remains the same with the alert in place.

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Also, without purchase is there a way to get mail when the script has been updated etc?
If you could please let me know that.

I think it would be great if you had a page view list where you could see the scripts that have been updated also.

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I have one more request. Sorry for the many requests.
When the user registers, can you make it so the user gets an alert if they enter anything but alphanumeric characters for their password in that column?
I think it best not to limit the amount of characters as it is in the user name column.
I think it best if it remains the same with the alert in place.

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Also, is there a way to get an e-mail when the script has been updated before purchasing it?
If you could please let me know that.

Also I think it would be great if you had a page view list where you could see the scripts that have been updated.

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If Amazon Japan's Price X 0.96 > Auction fans price etc. they will purchase outside of Amazon.
If there is no major price difference in the price of the listed goods (apply rule 1), please consult the person in charge.
Please pay careful attention to [New] or [Second-hand].

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If the price on Amazon Japan x 0.96 > the price on Aucfan etc.,↵
purchase from Aucfan etc. except for Amazon.
If there is no major price difference between the listed goods (not applicable with rule 1), please consult the person in charge.
Please pay careful attention to "New" or "Used".

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If the above message occurs, The goods have already been listed, please proceed with listing the next item.

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If the above message appears, the goods have already been listed, so please proceed with listing the next item.

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下さい

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お願いします。

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下さい

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お願いします

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I have several questions I would like some answers to please.

Is this item a smaller prototype of the normal size?
The serial number ending 497 indicates a prototype.

Is it paint break specification? (specifications that the paint on the neck is not applied)

Is there a specification sheet attached to the crown?

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I have several questions I would like you to answer, please.

Is this item a smaller prototype of the normal size?
The serial number ending 497 indicates a prototype.

Is it made to paint break specification? (specifications that the paint on the neck is not applied)

Is there a specification sheet attached to the crown?

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Both yesterday and today the server has stopped.
I do not know the exact cause, but when I run the ABC function it drops off I think.
I am thinking it has something to do with the number of users accessing it (maybe using too much memory?)

Is there a way to turn off just the ABC function? I'm thinking I'd like the function turned off not the display.
It is really troubling to have the server stop everyday. If I could get a reply, it would really help.

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Both yesterday and today the server has stopped.
I do not know the exact cause, but it tends to go down more often since ABC function has been added I think.
I am thinking it has something to do with the number of users accessing it (maybe taking up too much memory?)

Is there a way to turn off just the ABC function itself? I'm thinking I'd like the function turned off rather than turning off the display.
It is really troubling to have the server stop everyday. If I could get a reply, it would really help.

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Hoon

Birthday: 16th August 1991
Blood Type: B
Height/Weight: 180cm/70kg
Role: Vocals
Hobbies: Excersize, Piano performances, Guitar performances
Specialties: Tae Kwon Do
Favorite Japanese Food: Gyudon (beef rice bowl)
What role do you play for the other members: Mom

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Hoon

Birthday: 16th August, 1991
Blood Type: B
Height/Weight: 180cm/70kg
Role: Vocal
Hobbies: Excercise, Piano performances, Guitar performances
Specialties: Tae Kwon Do
Favorite Japanese Food: Gyudon (beef bowl)
What role do you play for the other members: Mom

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I would like the product A I ordered.
Please ensure you do not send product B instead of A by mistake.
If you are waiting for stock of product A at the moment, I will cancel my order.
I am hoping you will be able to send me product A.
Thank you.

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I would like the product A I ordered.
Please ensure you do not send product B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have the stock of product A at the moment, I will cancel my order.
I am hoping you will be able to send me product A.
Thank you.

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I would like to return to you immediately $100.
However, due to the negative comment you left, my PayPal account has been restricted.

So at the moment I can not return your funds.

I will refund the funds from my friends account,
Can I ask that you wait a short time longer please?

Sorry to keep you waiting
but I will get your money returned to you by any means necessary.

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I would like to return to you immediately $100.
However, due to the negative comment you left, my PayPal account has been restricted.

So at the moment I cannot return your funds.

I will refund the funds from my friend's account,
Can I ask that you wait a short time longer please?

Sorry to keep you waiting.
But I will get your money returned to you by any means necessary.

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Have the goods been shipped as yet?
If they have could you please provide the inquiry number please.

I am now considering an additional order, I ask that you contact us as soon as possible.

If the goods have not shipped as yet, they are now too late, I request a full refund
and please understand that we will have no future dealings with you in business.

** I will be reporting this to PayPal if I have not heard from you by the 1st of September, 23:59 Japan time.

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Have the goods been shipped as yet?
If they have, could you please provide me with the inquiry number?

I am now considering an additional order, so I ask that you contact us as soon as possible.

In the case that the goods have not been shipped as yet, the response is too late so I will request a full refund
and please understand that we will have no future dealings with you in business.

** I will be reporting this to PayPal if I have not heard from you by the 1st of September, 23:59 Japan time.

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Have the goods been shipped as yet?
If they have could you please provide the inquiry number please.

I am now considering an additional order, I ask that you contact us as soon as possible.

If the goods have not shipped as yet, they are now too late, I request a full refund↵
and please understand that we will have no future dealings with you in business.

** I will be reporting this to PayPal if I have not heard from you by the 1st of September, 23:59 Japan time.

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Have the goods been shipped as yet?
If they have could you please provide the inquiry number please.

I am now considering an additional order, so I ask that you contact us as soon as possible.

Please understand that if the goods have not been shipped as yet, I will request a full refund and will not be doing business with you anymore.

** I will be reporting this to PayPal if I have not heard from you by the 1st of September, 23:59 Japan time.

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Regarding Tracking Number 420342389400111899561328745397
It is written on it 'Leather' but it is not real leather material.
It is the same items as that of tracking number 420342389400111899561328745151.
Could you please re-check this.

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Regarding Tracking Number 420342389400111899561328745397
It is written on it 'Leather' but it is not real leather material.
It is the same items as that of tracking number 420342389400111899561328745151.
Could you please re-check this?

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As I asked on the forum the error is as follows
The site URL is below.

There is access restrictions so please input both fields as [ABC]

The webmaster/administrator address is [DEF] the password is [GHI]

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As I asked on the forum, the error is shown as follows.
The website's URL is below.

There are access restrictions so please input both fields as [ABC].

The webmaster/administrator's email address is [DEF], and the password is [GHI].