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I have received your request for chargeback.
Firstly, please understand that full refund only occurs if the deal did not meet the satisfaction of the customer.
Also, if there's any reason such as unauthorized use of credit card behind your chargeback request, please tell us.
Your our package is being tracked and apparently it is running later than expected. It has now arrived Washington and another 1-2 days is expected for delivery.
We apologize that the package did not arrive on time.

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I have received your request for a charge back.
First of all, please understand that we only give a full refund in the rare event that the transaction wasn't fully satisfactory to our customers.
Please let us know if there is any reason for the charge back, such as unauthorized use of your credit card, etc.
We tracked your package and apparently it is running later than expected. It has now arrived in Washington and it will take another 1-2 days for delivery.
We sincerely apologize for the package not arriving by the promised date.

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mo104901

Bits of knowledge for the fans of cosplay! What is the famous Japanese traditional colour among the cosplayers?

Ever since year 2003, the biggest cosplyer event in the world "World Cosply Summit" has been held in a facility called Oasis21 in Nagoya City. Among all the colourful and stunning clothings of the cosplayers, what do you think the most popular colour will be? Let's try extract some Japanese traditional colours!

What is World Cosplay Summit?
World Cosplay Summit

WCS Year 2008

Year 2008 Performance of the Brazil Team

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mo104901

Bits of knowledge for the fans of cosplay! What is the famous Japanese traditional colour among the cosplayers?

Ever since year 2003, the biggest cosplayer event in the world "World Cosplay Summit" has been held in a facility called Oasis21 in Nagoya City. Among all the colourful and stunning clothings of the cosplayers, what do you think the most popular colour will be? Let's try extract some Japanese traditional colours!

What is World Cosplay Summit?
World Cosplay Summit

WCS Year 2008

Year 2008 Performance of the Brazil Team

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no101901

Let's go visit the castles to further discover the local history of Japan! Japan's famous 8 castles selection.
The castle is often seen at the areas that are considered as regional centers. The local towns and castles in Japan have a strong and unbreakable historical connection. Let's go and discover the history of the streets and castles!

Nagoya Castle (Nagoya City, Aichi Prefecture)
When talking about Nagoya Castle, the "golden dolphin" (Kinnoshachi) is one of the must-sees. The castle was constructed during the Ieyasu Tokugawa shogunate period, which has its own famous song of "The castle makes Nagoya what she is" being sung by the locals.

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no101901

Let's go visit the castles to further discover the local history of Japan! Japan's 8 famous castles selection.
The castle is often seen at the areas that are considered as regional centers. The local towns and castles in Japan have a strong and unbreakable historical connection. Let's go and discover the history of the streets and castles!

Nagoya Castle (Nagoya City, Aichi Prefecture)
When talking about Nagoya Castle, the "Kin no Shachihoko" (imaginary creature) is one of the must-sees. The castle was constructed during the Ieyasu Tokugawa shogunate period, which has its own famous song of "The castle makes Nagoya what she is" being sung by the locals.

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no88204

Miyajima (Hatsukaichi City, Hiroshima Prefecture)

Miyajima is not only famous for momiji cake, but the maple valley which is also a well known maple viewing spot.
The best time to see maples is around mid-end of November.

Yabakei (Nakatsu City, Oita Prefecture)

Along with the tourist places such as Aonodomon ("blue tunnnel") and Rakan-ji , Yabakei is also famous for maple viewing.
The best time to see maples is around mid November.

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no88204

Miyajima (Hatsukaichi City, Hiroshima Prefecture)

Miyajima is famous for not only momiji cake, but the maple valley which is also a well known maple viewing spot.
The best time to see maples is around mid-end of November.

Yabakei (Nakatsu City, Oita Prefecture)

Along with the tourist places such as Aonodomon ("blue tunnnel") and Rakan-ji , Yabakei is also famous for maple viewing.
The best time to see maples is around mid November.

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＃International Sports(インターナショナルスポーツ)

メールありがとうございました。International Sportsのオナーのマットと申します。もしご注文したいものがあれば、どうぞ直接に私のE-メール：internationalspts@yahoo.comにご連絡ください。

今まで、日本のスポーツアイテムをたくさん販売していました。

LPGAとPGAの日本選手も含めて、F1、MotoGP、サイクリング、UFC、ボクシング、など様々なスポーツアイテムもあります。

今試合やツアーの選手たちからのゴルフボールはありませんが、レギュラーのサインされたゴルフボールは販売されています。ご興味ありませんか。

日本の運動選手だけにご興味ありますか、F1やMotoGPなどのほかのスポーツにもご興味ありますか。

よろしくお願いいたします。

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＃International Sports(インターナショナルスポーツ)

メールありがとうございました。International Sportsのオーナーのマットと申します。もしご注文したいものがあれば、どうぞ直接に私のE-メール：internationalspts@yahoo.comにご連絡ください。

今まで、日本のスポーツアイテムをたくさん販売していました。

LPGAとPGAの日本選手も含めて、F1、MotoGP、サイクリング、UFC、ボクシング、など様々なスポーツアイテムもあります。

今試合やツアーの選手たちからのゴルフボールはありませんが、レギュラーのサインされたゴルフボールは販売されています。ご興味ありませんか。

日本の運動選手だけにご興味ありますか、F1やMotoGPなどのほかのスポーツにもご興味ありますか。

よろしくお願いいたします。

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Okamoto's "evenly 0.02ml"

From 2009, Okamoto's 0.02ml polyurethane condom is now on sale.

The biggest selling point of it is it's "evenly thin".

It might seem usual at the first glance, but in the world of condom is it a very advanced technique!

This technique also raises the "sensation" profoundly!

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Okamoto's "evenly 0.02ml"

From 2009, Okamoto's 0.02ml polyurethane condom is now on sale.

The biggest selling point of it is it's "evenly thin".

It might seem usual at the first glance, but in the world of condom it is a very advanced technique!

This technique also raises the "sensation" profoundly!

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ズーカル（Zookal）は2011年に教科書のレンタルプラットフォームとして設立されました。それ以来、ズーカルはディジタル教科書、ディジタル授業ノート、オンラインチューターリング、インターンシップなど、さまざまなサービスを提供するようになりました。↵
ズーカルは大学の教科書を購入し、学生たちに販売値段の半分で貸しています。↵
現在、約一万冊の本が在庫しており、百万Aドル（US$940,000）も超える年間収益がこれからの三か月に期待されています。

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Zookalは2011年に教科書のレンタルプラットフォームとして設立されました。それ以来、Zookalはディジタル教科書、ディジタル授業ノート、オンラインチューターリング、インターンシップなど、さまざまなサービスを提供するようになりました。Zookalは大学の教科書を購入し、学生たちに販売値段の半分で貸しています。現在、約一万冊の本が在庫しており、百万米ドル（US$940,000）も超える年間収益がこれからの三か月に期待されています。

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Please be responsible.
From the page of the product of your company, it says that it has 1 year guarantee.
Where on the product does it say 3 months?
Please clarify where the sign is. If there is no labels or signs on the product then it will mean what you said makes no sense. Please do not change the rules by yourself.
If things like this ever happen again in the future, I will report to ebay for sure.
Please send me the parts of products that have flaws in them to the following address as soon as possible.

Do you think it is the right manner to deal with things like this?
It is a matter of responsibility and trust.

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Please be responsible.
From the page of the product of your company, it says that it has 1 year guarantee.
Where does it say 3 months guarantee for a part?
Please clarify where it is mentioned. If it is not mentioned, then it will mean what you said makes no sense. Please do not change the rules by yourself.
If things like this ever happens again in the future, I will report the claims to ebay for sure.
Please send me the defect part of the product to the following address as soon as possible.

Do you think it is the right manner to deal with things like this?
It is a matter of responsibility and trust.

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It took sometime on the translation and explanation of the agreement.
This time is the consent of agreement.

I have consulted the host of regarding the Foodex2014 exhibition,
It is planned that small booths will be set up next time.

1.5mx1.2m sized booth is around 1600 dollars. 2.7mx2.7m sized booth is around 5000 dollars.
I think 1.5x1.2 sized booth will be alright.
Which one will you choose? Please let me know your opinions on this.

I have also attached the information.
I am currently researching on the opening medicine related exhibitions.

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It took sometime on the translation and explanation of the agreement.
I consent to the agreement this time.

I have consulted the host the Foodex2014 exhibition,
There are plans that small booths will be set up next time.

A 1.5mx1.2m sized booth is around 1600 dollars. A 2.7mx2.7m sized booth is around 5000 dollars.
I think the 1.5x1.2 sized booth will be alright.
Which one will you choose? Please let me know your opinion about this.

I have also attached the information.
I am currently researching on the opening medicine related exhibitions.

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The newly attired "Travel Amusement Park: Travel Fair Japan 2013" will be held by Japan Tourism Promotion Association from November 8th to 10th in Sunshine City Cultural Exhibition Hall. There were 93,099 people participated last year, including exhibitors from 130 regions/companies/groups at 270 booths.

This year will be the 18th time of the exhibition. There will be 7 theme areas which display much more attractions of national tourism than previous years.
Not just "seeing" and "learning", but to experience the fun of many regional tourism resources is one of the aspects of the "Travel Amusement Park".

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The newly attired "Travel Amusement Park: Travel Fair Japan 2013" will be held by Japan Tourism Promotion Association from November 8th to 10th in Sunshine City Cultural Exhibition Hall. There were 93,099 people last year, including exhibitors from 130 regions/companies/groups at 270 booths.

This year will be the 18th time of the exhibition. There will be 7 theme areas which display much more attractions of national tourism than previous years.
Not just "seeing" and "learning", but to experience the fun of many regional tourism resources is one of the aspects of the "Travel Amusement Park".

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MARS ENTERTAINMENT was established to change the general image towads entertainment management in Japan.

The entertainment management in Japan, generally includes all-round businesses such as artists personal cares, work schedule management, and job arrangments. Even with unsuitable artists, they have to still do the same things.
We, as a company that changes the way of management forms a special negotiation system, that allows artists personal cares to be done by themselves.

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MARS ENTERTAINMENT was established to change the general image towads entertainment management in Japan.

The entertainment management in Japan, generally includes all-round businesses such as artists personal cares, work schedule management, and job arrangments. Even with unsuitable artists, they have to still do the same things.
We are the company that changes the way of management forms with specialized in negotiation system. We will ask artists to do personal cares by themselves.