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元の翻訳
Thank you very much for the proposal.

However, the selling price will be further reduced by matching the price.
It is currently at 1040 yen and we can assume that it would be further reduced.

And for example, even by accepting the difference in the desired purchasing price of approximately 6NZD,
we can assume that it would become a deficit upon reducing the price immediately.

That would lead to non-profitability for both our company and your company.

We are grateful for the proposal, but can you support for the return of the product?

Sorry for the inconvenience but I request for your support.

修正後
Thank you very much for the proposal.

However, the selling price will be further reduced by matching the price.
It is currently at 1040 yen and we can assume that it would be further reduced.

And for example, even by accepting the difference in the desired purchasing price of approximately 6NZD,
we can assume that it would become a deficit upon reducing the price immediately.

That would lead to non-profitability for both of our companies

We are grateful for the proposal, but can you take care of the product return ?

Sorry for the inconvenience but I request for your support.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your usual support.

The invoice for the $340.92 product that arrived last February is incomplete,
so what should I do?

I want to ship it immediately so please kindly inform me on a workaround.

In addition, since the change to the system that fills out the invoice from last year,
it was really hard to use. Would you be able to improve the service and make it smoother in the user-side?

I do not intend to declare any lies.
So is there a need to be always suspicious about it?

I will look forward for your response.

修正後
Thank you for your usual support.

The invoice for the $340.92 product that arrived last February is incomplete,
so what should I do?

I want to ship it immediately so please kindly inform me on a workaround.

In addition, since the change to the system that fills out the invoice from last year,
it was really hard to use. Would you be able to improve the service and make it smoother on the user-side?

I do not intend to declare any lies.
So is there a need to be always suspicious about it?

I will look forward for your response.

元の翻訳
Dear ○○

Regarding your inquiry, the item is the first edition. (It is not the best-of edition).

I am unable to confirm whether the spin card is attached to the item.

Thank you very much for visiting the store.

修正後
Dear ○○

Regarding your inquiry, the item is the first edition. (It is not the best-of edition).

I am unable to confirm whether the spin card is included with the item.

Thank you very much for visiting the store.

元の翻訳
I will swear not to leave any traces of confidential information or recording mediums with me after returning these.

5 (Maintenance of confidentiality after resignation)
I promise not to disclose or leak your company's confidential information after I have resigned.

6 (Damages payment and criminal complaint)
If I have violated any provisions in this written oath that would incur damages to your company, then I promise that I will abide to this written oath and understand that there are legal disciplinary action such as a disciplinary dismissal, compensation claims, and criminal complaint will be filed against me.

修正後
I promise not to leave any traces of confidential information or recording mediums with me after returning these.

5 (Maintenance of confidentiality after resignation)
I promise not to disclose or leak your company's confidential information after I have resigned.

6 (Damages payment and criminal complaint)
If I have violated any provisions in this written oath that would incur damages to your company, then I promise that I will abide to this written oath and understand that there are legal disciplinary action such as a disciplinary dismissal, compensation claims, and criminal complaint will be filed against me.