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元の翻訳
There was one defect among the head that I have purchased from you before.

Product Name :
Serial number :

Immediately after the shrink peeled off, the painting of the crown fell apart and there were two areas that were peeled off. There were no scratches on the shrink so I think this might highly be a production defect. I am sorry for the inconvenience, but I would like to request for a refund after I return the product.

I will be waiting for your response.

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There was one defective head among those that I have purchased from you before.

Product Name:
Serial number:

Immediately after removing the shrink film, flakes of painting (coating) fluttered down by which revealed the ground metal of two portions of the crown. There were no scratches in the shrink film, so I think it is highly possible that it might be a production defect. I am sorry for the inconvenience, but I would like to request for a refund after I return the product.

I will be waiting for your response.

元の翻訳
The peeling on the bridge is clearly an initial defect of the maker. I sent the guitar to be able to receive the repair warranty of the maker, but it is not possible to receive the warranty so it did not make any sense. The guitar that was sent back to me was not repaired nor improved and since the condition became worst so that is the reason why I was seriously in doubt if it was really repaired by Taylor. I will send the guitar by next week so can you kindly issue the refund? I would not be requiring an exchange for the product.

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The peeling on the bridge is clearly an initial defect of the maker. I sent the guitar to be able to receive the repair warranty of the maker, but it is not possible to receive the warranty so it did not make any sense. The guitar that was sent back to me was not repaired nor improved and since the condition became worse, that is the reason why I was seriously in doubt if it was really repaired by Taylor. I will send the guitar to arrive by sometime next week so can you kindly issue the refund? I would not be requiring an exchange for the product.

元の翻訳
Greetings.

I am searching for the following new items.

- Tour Issue RBZ Hybrid(not stage2) Head 20 degrees or 21 degrees real loft
↵
- Tour Issue SLDR Driver Head
Model with a screw on the concave area.
Model without a screw.
I am looking for both of the models.

Please kindly provide a quotation if it is possible for you to obtain the items.

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Greetings.

I am searching for the following new items:

- Tour Issue RBZ Hybrid (not stage2) Head 20 degrees or 21 degrees real loft
- Tour Issue SLDR Driver Head
Model with a screw on the concave area.
Model without a screw.
I am looking for both models.

Please kindly provide a quotation if you can obtain the items.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support. This is Yamada from Japan.
The product arrived the other day.
Thank you very much for your very quick turnaround.

I immediately tried operating the product, but the 000 of company A did not function at all.
I also look thoroughly through some conditions for the confirmation.
I would like to ask for your guidance moving forward.

I have a question on another item.
Will it be possible to use the 000 from company B on the 000 of company C.
I understand that this will be something done at my own risk.
I am thinking of purchasing one if the operation is possible.
It would be really appreciated if you can kindly answer regarding this.

修正後
Thank you for your support. This is Yamada from Japan.
The product arrived the other day.
Thank you very much for your very quick turnaround.

I immediately tried operating the product, but the 000 of company A did not function at all.
I also look thoroughly through some conditions for the confirmation.
I would like to ask for your guidance moving forward.

I have a question on another item.
Will it be possible to use the 000 from company C on the 000 of company B.
I understand that this will be something done at my own risk.
I am thinking of purchasing one if the operation is possible.
It would be really appreciated if you can kindly answer regarding this.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support. This is Yamada from Japan.
The product arrived the other day.
Thank you very much for your very quick turnaround.

I immediately tried operating the product, but the 000 of company A did not function at all.
I also look thoroughly through some conditions for the confirmation.
I would like to ask for your guidance moving forward.

I have a question on another item.
Will it be possible to use the 000 from company B on the 000 of company C.
I understand that this will be something done at my own risk.
I am thinking of purchasing one if the operation is possible.
It would be really appreciated if you can kindly answer regarding this.

修正後
Thank you for your support. This is Yamada from Japan.
The product arrived the other day.
Thank you very much for your very quick turnaround.

I immediately tried operating the product, but the 000 of company A did not function at all.
I also look thoroughly through some conditions for the confirmation.
I would like to ask for your guidance moving forward.

I have a question on another item.
Will it be possible to use the 000 from company C on the 000 of company B.
I understand that this will be something done at my own risk.
I am thinking of purchasing one if the operation is possible.
It would be really appreciated if you can kindly answer regarding this.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the comprehensive explanation.

With regards to the Bill of Lading that is needed for the resolution,
would the following document be fine?

If this is not the case then where can I get hold of such document?

We are selling in Japan and the shipping address is not Ohio.
Your products are transported to Yamato (shipping company) in New Jersey and delivered to Japan.
But in that case, which state's resale certification is required?

Moreover, the recent order number is below.

Apologies for this, but please kindly confirm.

修正後
Thank you for the comprehensive explanation.

With regards to the Bill of Lading that is needed for the resolution,
would the following document be fine?

If this is not the case then where can I get hold of such document?

We are selling in Japan and the shipping address is not in Ohio.
Your products are transported to Yamato (shipping company) in New Jersey and delivered to Japan.
But in that case, which state's resale certification is required?

Moreover, the recent order number is as follows.

Apologies for this, but please kindly confirm.

元の翻訳
First of all, the Craft/Classic /Handmade Series are all produced in the Japan factory. Each one is handmade by a craftsman. The price difference depends on the materials used.

The DUKE guitar is the high-end of the Handmade Series.
This expensive guitar was called the master builder and is produced with the best craftsman and best materials. It is a guitar with playability and tone supporting the needs of a true player.

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First of all, the Craft/Classic /Handmade Series are all produced in the Japan factory. Each one is handmade by a craftsman. The price difference depends on the materials used.

The DUKE guitar is the high-end of the Handmade Series.
This expensive guitar was called the master builder and is produced by the best craftsman and the best materials. It is a guitar with playability and tone supporting the needs of a true player.

元の翻訳
The external box of the product has a damaged corner (crack) so please package it carefully when you ship it. In addition, please use vinyl taping to avoid the product to slip out of the external box. It should include markings. And please ship it with enough and appropriate packaging.
If the product arrives as indicated above, then I will provide a good evaluation.
Sorry to bother you but I request for your support.

修正後
The external box of the product has a damaged corner (crack) so please package it carefully when you ship it. In addition, please use vinyl taping to avoid the product slipping out of the external box. It should include markings. And please ship it with enough and appropriate packaging.
If the product arrives as indicated above, then I will provide a good evaluation.
Sorry to bother you but I request for your support.