mura (mura) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply mail.
To send the item to you naturally needs the shipping charge.

I understand that you want to check the item condition. ↵
But I think it is useless to send you the item broken in pieces.

I will send you many picturesso that you can understand its condition. I want to settle this case in this way.
Don't you think you can see the item condition?
↵
If you agree with me, please refund me for the broken two pieces of the item.
Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
Shipping the items back will cost me.

I understand that you want to check the item condition, but I think it is useless to ship back the items broken in pieces.

I will send you many pictures for you to review. Can we settle this case in this manner?

If you agree with me, please refund me for the two broken items.↵

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Mr./Ms. Baosan:
I checked the status of your item.
Please check it from this site.

If you want, I will refund you.
Please let me know how you want.

Thak you.

修正後
Mr./Ms. Baosan:
I checked the status of your item.
Please check it from this site.

If you want, I will refund you.
Please let me know how you want.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your detailed explanation. I could understand very well.
I always appreciate your careful bundle packaging of items and discount.
I think I will increase the amount of business with you, so please keep a nice deal with me hereafter also.

修正後
Thank you for your detailed explanation, it was easy to understand.
I always appreciate your extra gifts and discounts.
I think I will increase the amount of business I do with you, so please continue to deal with me in the future.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your attentive reply. I heartily appreciate your kindness. Could you make a smiling baby doll like a baby shown in the picture and send it to Japan at $ 300 including the shipping charge (as a result of $ 100 discount as you proposed)? The details are as follows; the color of the hair is black or dark brown, a magnetic teething ring is attached, and the dress is pink. I want to have the picture of it after it is made. If my proposal is OK, please send me an invoice.
I will pay all the money by June 2.
I am looking forward to having your favorite reply.↵

修正後
Thank you very much for your attentive reply. I heartily appreciate your kindness. Could you make a smiling baby doll like a baby shown in the picture and send it to Japan at $ 300 including the shipping charge (as a result of $ 100 discount as you proposed)? The details are as follows; the color of the hair is black or dark brown, a magnetic teething ring is attached, and the dress is pink. I want to have the picture of it after it is made. If my proposal is OK, please send me an invoice.
I will pay up by June 2.
I am looking forward to having your favorable reply.