翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/05/31 13:05:30

mura
mura 50 翻訳歴8か月
日本語

大変丁寧なお返事をありがとうございました。心から感謝申し上げます。100ドルお値引して頂きまして、お写真の子のような、ほほ笑みの赤ちゃんを、日本までの送料込みで300ドルで作って頂くことは可能でしょうか?髪の色は黒又はダークブラウン、磁気おしゃぶり、ピンクの衣装、完成後のお写真が欲しいです。もしOKなら、インボイスをください。私は、6月2日までに全額お支払い致します。それでは、良いお返事をお待ちしております。

英語

Thank you very much for your attentive reply. I heartily appreciate your kindness. Could you make a smiling baby doll like a baby shown in the picture and send it to Japan at $ 300 including the shipping charge (as a result of $ 100 discount as you proposed)? The details are as follows; the color of the hair is black or dark brown, a magnetic teething ring is attached, and the dress is pink. I want to have the picture of it after it is made. If my proposal is OK, please send me an invoice.
I will pay all the money by June 2.
I am looking forward to having your favorite reply.

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naoko_horigome330 52 英語公用語の国に3年の在住経験あり。 産業翻訳アシスタント1年ほどやって...
naoko_horigome330はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/06/07 11:17:03

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your attentive reply. I heartily appreciate your kindness. Could you make a smiling baby doll like a baby shown in the picture and send it to Japan at $ 300 including the shipping charge (as a result of $ 100 discount as you proposed)? The details are as follows; the color of the hair is black or dark brown, a magnetic teething ring is attached, and the dress is pink. I want to have the picture of it after it is made. If my proposal is OK, please send me an invoice.
I will pay all the money by June 2.
I am looking forward to having your favorite reply.

修正後
Thank you very much for your attentive reply. I heartily appreciate your kindness. Could you make a smiling baby doll like a baby shown in the picture and send it to Japan at $ 300 including the shipping charge (as a result of $ 100 discount as you proposed)? The details are as follows; the color of the hair is black or dark brown, a magnetic teething ring is attached, and the dress is pink. I want to have the picture of it after it is made. If my proposal is OK, please send me an invoice.
I will pay up by June 2.
I am looking forward to having your favorable reply.

mura mura 2013/06/07 12:44:09

丁寧なレビューありがとうございました。  Mura

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