mura (mura) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
We have already paid for this product. When could you refund the money?↵
Please refund as soon as possible.
Please don't put the items which you don't sell.↵
Please penalize this seller.
Please reply immediately.

修正後
Please don't put the items which you don't sell.
ここのところputではわかりにくいと思います。↵
Please do not display items, which do not sell well, on your site.とか具体的に示した方がいいと思います。
Please reply me immediately. reply は自動詞ですからreply to me とto が必要ではないかと思います。↵

元の翻訳
Piano playing by Mr.Nakamori is exquisite, well-balanced and most of all, COOL!

修正後
Piano playing by Mr.Nakamori is exquisite, well-balanced and most of all, COOL!↵
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簡潔な文章でいいです。COOLがいい。↵
でも　”正確に時を刻んでるみたいでホントにゲームの曲みたい”を、ここまで無視するのはどうかと思います。

元の翻訳
It looks like the refund hasn't been done yet on the transaction display.
Please contact me if I need to proceed a order cancel on ebay etc.

Please arrange for it as soon as possible.
Thank you.

修正後
It looks like the refund hasn't been done yet (on) (seeing の方がいいのでは。display 上での返金ではないでしょうから）the transaction display.
Please contact me if I need to proceed (a) (anです） order cancel on ebay etc.

Please arrange for it as soon as possible.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
From the second half of the project, it is a bit difficult to see his current situation about the development. The difference of language and time may also be the cause.
During his work time as a remote employee, I think he can report the progress of the simple project at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.

修正後
From the second half of the project, it is a bit difficult to see his current situation about the development. The difference of language and time may also be the cause.
During his work time as a remote employee, I think he can report the progress of the simple project at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.
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I think he can report the progress of (the simple project ここおかしい。簡単な、は報告にかかるのでI think he can give me a simple report concerning the project progress とか) ↵
at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.↵
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元の翻訳
I don't know what excuse to make how to apologize to you.
The notification of shipping I sent you just ago is wrong.
I will correct the error, so please please check it.

I noticed the shipping in error.
Although I still don't ship, but how should I correspond to him?

修正後
I don't know what excuse to make how to apologize to you.
丁寧すぎてわからなくなります。文法的にも間違いがあります。↵
I am very sorry.だけでいいと思います。↵
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The notification of shipping I sent you just ago is wrong.
I will correct the error, so please please check it.
please を意識して２度使われたのではないと思います。↵

I noticed the shipping in error.
これでは私が気が付くということで、↵
I notified of a wrong shipping とか↵
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Although I still don't ship, but how should I correspond to him?↵
Although と butの二つの接続詞があります。それから後半は？が必要です。それからまだ出していないということで現在形ではなくて完了形だと思います。↵
Although I still haven’t ship it, how should I correspond to him?↵
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