miwa-nagahara — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
ただいま、ご購入商品が返送されてまいりました。いただいたご住所にお届けできない様ですが。いただいたご住所にお送りしたのですが、商品のお送り先住所をいただけないでしょうか？そのご住所に毎の郵便料金をお支払いいただくこととなります。荷物追跡情報によれば、ご指定のご住所に2度届けられたのちに、返送されてきた様です。お返事をお待ちしております。

この度は商品をお受け取りいただけず、申し訳ありません。ご購入者様に喜んでいただける様、勤めてまいります。ご満足のフィードバックをいただける様、今回は再送の費用はこちらで負担させていただきます。2〜3日以内にお受け取りいただける様、尽力させていただきます。

修正後
こんにちは。
ただいま、ご購入商品が返送されてまいりました。いただいたご住所にお届けできない様です。いただいたご住所にお送りしたのですが、商品のお送り先住所をいただけないでしょうか？そのご住所にこの郵便料金をお支払いいただくこととなります。荷物追跡情報によれば、ご指定のご住所に2度届けられたのちに、返送されてきた様です。お返事をお待ちしております。

この度は商品をお受け取りいただけず、申し訳ありません。ご購入者様に喜んでいただける様、努めてまいります。ご満足のフィードバックをいただける様、今回は再送の費用はこちらで負担させていただきます。2〜3日以内にお受け取りいただける様、今回も優先扱いで対応させていただきます。

元の翻訳
It has been almost a month since I placed the order, but the item had not been delivered yet. Please let me know when will it be sent.

修正後
It has been almost a month since I placed the order, but the item has not been delivered yet. Please let me know when it will be sent.

元の翻訳
Let us inform you about our USB audio device that we could confirm its operation.
We hope this would help you (and we would like you to include this information in the next release note if it's possible).
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Although we appreciate your great work on designing 5-year-ver,
we still have 3-year-version in stock at the moment.
So we intend to deliver it to our partner as 5-year-version with adding 2-year license.
Could we have discount even such case?
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修正後
Let us inform you about our USB audio device that we could confirm its operation about.
We hope this information would help you (and we would like you to include this information in the next release note if it's possible).
--
Although we appreciate your great work on designing 5-year-ver.,
we still have 3-year-version in stock at the moment.
So we intend to deliver them to our partner as 5-year-version with adding 2-year license.
Could we have a discount even in such a case?
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元の翻訳
We are very sorry for the late reply.
RMA is 12.
As we mentioned before, the refund rate for unsealed item will be 50% of its price according to rule.
However, after some internal considerations about your mistaken order, we intend that refunding you 80%.
Once the item is return, we have to send it back to Japan, inspect it, and need to sell as a second hand so that it costs us.
It would be appreciated if you could understand that this offer is the best we can do and agree with it.

修正後
We are very sorry for the late reply.
RMA is 12.
As we mentioned before, the refund rate for unsealed item will be 50% of its price according to our rule.
However, after some internal considerations about your mistaken order, we intend to refund you 80%.
Once the item is returned, we have to send it back to Japan, inspect it, and need to sell as a second hand so that it costs us.
It would be appreciated if you could understand that this offer is the best we can do and if you could agree with it.