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元の翻訳
It's a pleasure to work for you.
I do aplogize for product arrive delayed.
Please wait for a while as i will track with post office tomorrow as soon as possible.
I will work responsibly with this so please be assured.
thank you for your understanding.

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It's a pleasure to work for you.
I do apologize for product arrive delayed.
Please wait for a while as i will track with post office tomorrow as soon as possible.
I will work responsibly with this so please be assured.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the contract.I have confirmed the content and it seems no problem.
I entried the name of the company and the address.

I would like to ask if I can order the things in the attached order sheet or not although you told me ○○ was almost sold out.
I changed ○○ to ＊＊.

I can feel your wonderful energy by the living wood.
I can sympathize with you, although I can't understand English and this English is translated by another person, I really understand your warm feeling.

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Thank you for the contract.I have confirmed the content and there seems to be no problem.
I filled in the name of the company and the address.

I would like to ask if I can order the things in the attached order sheet or not although you told me ○○ was almost sold out.
I changed ○○ to ＊＊.

I can feel your wonderful energy by the living wood.
I can sympathize with you, although I can't understand English and this English is translated by another person, I really understand your warm feeling.

元の翻訳
It really is an Original Full Album long awaited by the fans.

And for the official AYUMI HAMASAKI "TeamAyu" member limited edition, there are interview video of AYUMI HAMASAKI about behind the scenes story and explanation about the songs. Furthermore, "Milenas Boutique Aroma Candle", the one that is the favourite AYUMI HAMASAKI for a long time and is incredibly popular among celebrities all around the world is included inside the Luxurious Box set.

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It really is an Original Full Album long awaited by the fans.

And for the official AYUMI HAMASAKI "TeamAyu" member limited edition, there are interview videos of AYUMI HAMASAKI about a behind the scenes story and explanation about the songs. Furthermore, "Milenas Boutique Aroma Candle", the one that is the favourite AYUMI HAMASAKI for a long time and is incredibly popular among celebrities all around the world is included inside the Luxurious Box set.

元の翻訳
We have informed you by email at X/X that the product's name is wrong, but we aren't replied so we keep the product in store.
It is still in store, and ready to delivered anytime.

May I have your reply of confirming the mail please?

The mail noted X/X has not been replied.
If we could not contact with you, it is difficult to correspond 30 days after product reached.

We apologized for the incovenience may caused you↵
Please understand and looking forward to your reply

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We have informed you by email at X/X that the product's name is wrong, but we are not replied so we keep the product in store.
It is still in store, and ready to be shipped anytime.

May I have your reply of confirming the mail please?

The mail noted X/X has not been replied.
If we could not contact with you, it is difficult to correspond 30 days after product reached.

We apologized for the inconvenience.↵
Thank you for your understanding and we are looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Nice to meet you.

I am Japanese seller A, who earn 500 million JPY in a year on Amazon US.

Congratulations on opening event. I guess you are having busy days.

Actually I got know today that the event is held. I really wanted to participate to it, but unfortunately I could not set my available day in next week.

However, this event is very worth for sellers. So, although I cannot join event this time, can I buy texts which you are going to distribute in the event?

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Nice to meet you.

I am a Japanese seller A, who earn 500 million JPY in a year on Amazon US.

Congratulations on your opening event. I guess you are having busy days.

Actually I got to know today that the event is held. I really wanted to participate in it, but unfortunately I could not set my available day in next week.

However, this event is very worth for sellers. So, although I cannot join the event this time, can I buy leaflets which you are going to distribute in the event?

元の翻訳
4. The solution of this issue is expected from Amazon.
2 shipments can not be done until the reply comes.
The response for the purchasers who don't reply
The response for the cases in which the returns occur
Can the damage from the refunds be recovered from Amazon?

5. The deterrence of the recurrence of the issue
For me to evade such a loss as this afterwards, I will confirm thoroughly.

6. In the last, I will do my best to solve this issue soon.
Even though the claim arises from this issue, as it dose not due to my mistake, I will respond not for me to be undermined.

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4. The solution of this issue is expected from Amazon.
2 shipments cannot be done until the reply comes.
The response for the purchasers who do not reply
The response for the cases in which the returns occur
Can the damage from the refunds be recovered from Amazon?

5. The deterrence of the recurrence of the issue
For me to evade such a loss as this afterwards, I will confirm thoroughly.

6. In the last, I will do my best to solve this issue soon.
Even though the claim arises from this issue, as it dose not due to my mistake, I will respond not for me to be undermined.

元の翻訳
As schedule, we’ll ship on 13th-14th, and normally it’ll arrive within 3-5 days.
However expected arrival date may go beyond the schedule in case of delay of customs clearance or USPS.
Can I continue your order?

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As schedule, we will ship on 13th-14th, and normally it will arrive within 3-5 days.
However the expected arrival date may go beyond the schedule in case of delay of customs clearance or USPS.
Can I continue your order?

元の翻訳
Thank you for inquiry the other day.
We decided to lower the price of VOLVO S60 which you made enquiry.
The new CIF price is $XXX.
This car is in very good condition. Its engine is in good health, and exterior and interior is very nice, there is no problem at all really.
We exchanged its timing-belt also so you can drive it for pretty long time with no worry.
If you have any question, please do not hesitate and ask us.
We wish your good consideration.

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Thank you for inquiry the other day.
We decided to lower the price of VOLVO S60 which you made an enquiry about.
The new CIF price is $XXX.
This car is in a very good condition. Its engine is in good health, and the exterior and the interior are very nice, there is no problem at all really.
We exchanged its timing-belt also so you can drive it for pretty long time with no worry.
If you have any question, please do not hesitate and ask us.
We wish your good consideration.

元の翻訳
We are getting claims, because there was error in product-name on Amazon end.

In Amazon US, the product title is 4-in-one set, but in Amazon JP, this product is distributed as one.

We have also responsibility that we didn’t notice for wrong title, however regards to this circumstance, I think we are not supposed to be blamed.
Therefore, we want you to cope with this so that our account valuation wouldn’t get fall with customer’s claim etc.

Currently, we are coping with customers to whom we already shipped, or those who ordered the article, like returning, paying back.
We are having very hard time, of course those customers too.

We want you to deal with this promptly.

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We are getting complaints, because there was an error in product-name on Amazon end.

In Amazon US, the product title is 4-in-one set, but in Amazon JP, this product is distributed as one.

We have also responsibility that we did not notice for the wrong title, however regards to this circumstance, I think we are not supposed to be blamed.
Therefore, we want you to cope with this so that our account valuation would not get fall with customer’s claim etc.

Currently, we are coping with customers to whom we already shipped, or those who ordered the article, like returning, paying back.
We are having a very hard time, of course those customers too.

We want you to deal with this promptly.

元の翻訳
Regarding the description of the XX that you have purchased,
there is a mistake that there are 4 packages in it.
We apologized for our mistake caused your inconvenience.

We are now research for the reason, and the description on AMAZON was wrong.
* Only 1 in the product.

We also have responsibility of the mistake.
If you want we will refund to you

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Regarding the description of the XX that you have purchased,
There is a mistake that there are 4 packages in it.
We apologize for our mistake which caused you inconvenience.

We are now researching the reason, and the description on AMAZON was wrong.
* Only 1 in the product.

We also have responsibility of the mistake.
If you want we will refund to you

元の翻訳
Handshake event is going on!
Date: Friday, August 1st in 2014
Place: On the stadium-stage in the SHINTAIRIKU Great summer
Time: 12:00pm-13:00pm

If you have booked "the AHHAHHA!- the Super funny chorus-"s Music Card Cheeky Parade Member ver. of a 11th single of SUPER☆GIRLS at the place of event on the day, take part the Cheeky Parade shaking hands event divided each groups.

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Handshake event is going on!
Date: Friday, August 1st in 2014
Place: On the stadium-stage in the SHINTAIRIKU Great summer
Time: 12:00 p.m.-1:00 a.m.

If you have booked "the AHHAHHA!- the Super Funny Chorus-"s Music Card Cheeky Parade Member ver. of a 11th single of SUPER☆GIRLS at the place of event on the day, you can take part in the Cheeky Parade shaking hands event divided each groups.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We made mistake pricing this product. Comparing other companies we were selling this product unusually cheap.
As it stands, we make no profit with this shipping cost.
According other shops, VAT and other costs may be charged.
Even so, we were selling the products cheaper than other shops.
How can we show our gratitude?

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Thank you for your message.
We made a mistake pricing this product. Comparing other companies we were selling this product unusually cheaper.
As it stands, we make no profit with this shipping cost.
According other shops, VAT and other costs may be charged.
Even so, we were selling the products cheaper than other shops.
How can we show our gratitude?

元の翻訳
We received your return as requested.

We will give you full refund include return shipping costs.
Could you please send us back the returning items?

Refunds: $118.55
Cost of return shipping: Please let us know how much it would cost.

※Please let us know the tracking number and return shipping cost.

I am very sorry that we made you confused because of the product name.
We will give you full refund back once we receive the tracking number of returning items.
I'm looking forward to working with you.

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We received your return as requested.

We will give you full refund including return shipping costs.
Could you please send us back the returning items?

Refunds: $118.55
Cost of return shipping: Please let us know how much it would cost.

※Please let us know the tracking number and the return shipping cost.

I am very sorry that we made you confused because of the product name.
We will give you full refund back once we receive the tracking number of returning items.
I am looking forward to working with you.

元の翻訳
Where I can download the HTML template which has a left sidebar on the demo screen? I am okay with the premium version.
Could you tell me the website?

*I am thinking to add a how-to page.
Please excuse my English skill.

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Where can I download the HTML template which has a left sidebar on the demo screen? I am okay with the premium version.
Could you tell me the website?

*I am thinking of adding a how-to page
Please excuse my English skill.