mikang (mikang) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Sorry for the delayed reply.

Thank you for the invoice.
I have a question, I thought the wholesale price was 30% off from the retail price minus VAT, was it wrong?

I have not receive the products. I will contact with you when they arrive.

修正後
I apologize for the delayed reply.

Thank you for the invoice.
I have a question. I thought the wholesale price was 30% off from the retail price minus VAT, was it wrong?

Since I have not received the products. I will get in touch with you when they arrive.

元の翻訳
荷物はそちらに向かっています。来週中に届くと思います。請求書を次のメールで送ります。当社は通常、荷物が届くと確信するまで請求書を送りません。

私は規則を詳しく知りませんが、お金でいろいろ解決できることを知っています。 残念ながら。そして私は認知されるまで時間がかかることも知っています。スロベニアは小さいので、回っていくのは簡単だった。

在庫に関しては、実際には一つか二つづつはあるけれど、半分出来ている製品があり、完成させるだけです。10〜15個のオーダーでしたら送るまで大体-5-7日掛かります。もし、何かあってもっと時間がかかりそうでしたら、あなたが注文する時、私たちがどんな状況かを説明いたします。その場合はお待ちいただきます。

修正後
荷物はそちらに向かっています。来週中に届くと思います。請求書を次のメールで送ります。当社は通常、荷物が届くと確信するまで請求書を送りません。

私は規則を詳しく知りませんが、お金でいろいろ解決できることを知っています。 残念ながら。そして私は認知されるまで時間がかかることも知っています。スロベニアは小さいので、上手く逃れられました。

在庫に関しては、実際には一つか二つづつはあるけれど、半分出来ている製品があり、完成させるだけです。10〜15個のオーダーでしたら送るまで大体-5-7日掛かります。もし、何かあってもっと時間がかかりそうでしたら、あなたが注文する時、私たちがどんな状況かを説明いたします。その場合はお待ちいただきます。

元の翻訳
Could you please send me 4 carbon fiber panels, ( 2 at the back, 2 at the front).
The picture I attached last time was to convey the image of the color. Sorry for the lack of explanation.

For the delivering time, the end of September is no problem, but I'm glad if you could send it even a little earlier.

Finally, about the purse, is it possible to make the inside of The S-SS to the same specifications of the inside of The S?

修正後
Could you please send me 4 carbon fiber panels, (2 at the front and 2 at the back)?
The picture I attached last time was to convey the image of the color. Sorry for the lack of explanation.

For the delivering time, the end of September is no problem, but I'd be glad if you could send it any sooner.

Finally, about the purse, is it possible to have the specification inside the S-SS the same as that of the S?

元の翻訳
もし私が出品して壊れていたら、私は買い手に返送費用を支払います。普通壊れたものを売るのは売り手の間違いです。もし壊れていないのならばその時は買い手が返送費用を支払うべきです。

修正後
もし私が出品した商品が壊れていたら(動かなければ）、私は買い手に返送費用を支払うでしょう。売り手の間違いで壊れたものを売る場合のみです。もし壊れていないのならばその時は買い手が返送費用を支払うべきです。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your prompt reply about The SQ. There are some colors when I see your home page, what color is possible to manufacture?
I would like to order one for the beginning, in the future.

About the delivery at Christmas, since it depends on the sales situation in the future, it is undecided at this stage now, however I will order as soon as possible if necessary.

修正後
Thank you for your prompt reply about the SQ. There are some colors when I see your home page, which colours are available for production?
As a starter, I would like to order one later.

About the delivery at Christmas, since it depends on the sales situation in the future, it is undecided at this stage, however I will place an order as soon as possible if necessary.

元の翻訳
※ There is a limit to the number of specials. And, because CD / DVD purchasers and goods purchasers will using the same lottery kit, ↵
it may be out of special prior to the goods sale time if the delivery of special is completed by CD / DVD purchaser. Please understand.

■ Notes
※ there is a case the lottery may be finished even there are customers still waiting on line, because of the convenience of venue.
※ Please refrain from the inquiry to the venue.
※ The CD sales and the specials are limited in number on the day, it will be closed when they gone, please acknowledge beforehand.

修正後
※ There is a limit to the number of specials. And because CD / DVD purchasers and goods purchasers will [verb missing] using the same lottery kit, it may be out of special [?] prior to the goods sale time if the delivery of special [parts of speech confusion] is completed by CD / DVD purchaser. Please understand.

■ Notes
※ there is a case the lottery may be finished even there are customers still waiting on line, because of the convenience of venue.
※ Please refrain from the inquiry to the venue.
※ The CD sales and the specials are limited [CD sales are limited? Really?] in number on the day, [comma splice] it [unclear antecedent] will be closed [word choice] when they [verb missing] gone, [comma splice] please acknowledge [word choice] beforehand.

元の翻訳
-機関車と三つの車両ができる
-丸～く並べる？ 30"×30"テーブルの上に収まります
-曲線のレールを自由につなげられます
-ユニークな二重結合のレールの接続
-160建設部品と8曲線軌道区間

Be Good Companyが提供するJawbonesは、モデルや芸術作品を自分で作成することができる玩具です。精密な品質の Jawbonesの部品は旋回したり、くっつけたり外したりでき、無限の遊び方ができます。このカラフルな列車のセットは、口部、つめ車、回転台、回転翼、ボールと接続部が含まれ、ユニークなスタイルの列車を創れ、二重結合のレールをいろいろな形において、何時間でも創造的に楽しく遊べます。対象年齢7才以上。小さな部品は、3歳以下のお子様には危険です。

修正後
-機関車と三つの車両ができます
-丸く並べると、 30"×30"テーブルの上に収まります
-曲線のレールを自由につなげられます
-独特な二重結合のレールの接続ができます
-160個の建設部品がありと8つの曲線軌道区間ができます

Be Good CompanyのJawbonesは、自分でモデルを作成することができる玩具です。精密な品質の Jawbonesの部品は自在回転軸、ラチエットレンチ、スナップがセットされていて、無限の遊び方ができます。このカラフルな列車のセットは、口部、つめ車、回転台、回転翼、ボールと接続部が含まれ、ユニークなスタイルの列車が創れます。また、二重結合のレールをいろいろな形に置いて、何時間でも楽しく遊べます。対象年齢は7才以上。小さな部品は、3歳以下のお子様には危険です。

元の翻訳
猫たちはここにいて元気です。ワシントン条約の許可書が二週間くらいでこちらに届くと思うので、それからお送りいたします。

私はあなたの両方の猫のYouTubeのビデオを撮り、あなたの贈り物への感謝を公表します！

ありがとう!!!!

あなたに言われたようにして子猫が生まれました。この子たちはお互いに血縁はなく、私が過去にあなたに送ったり、日本に出荷したどの猫とも血縁はありません。

もう一回ありがとう!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

修正後
猫たちはここにいて元気です。ワシントン条約の許可書が二週間くらいでこちらに届くと思うので、それからお送りいたします。

私はあなたの両方の猫のYouTubeのビデオを撮り、あなたの贈り物への感謝を公表します！

ありがとう!!!!

あなたに言われたように、生まれた子猫を使いました。この子たちはお互いに血縁はなく、私が過去にあなたに送ったり、日本に出荷したどの猫とも血縁はありません。

もう一回ありがとう!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

元の翻訳
関係者各位
コンディショナーは受け取りましたが、シャンプーがありませんでした。私が注文し間違えたのか、箱にシャンプーを入れ忘れたのか、わかリません。コンディショナーは25.4オンスボトルを一つしか受け取っていないので、シャンプーの25.4オンスボトルが入ってたはずなので、送っていただけますか？私はこれらの製品を使うのを楽しみにしています。お手数をおかけしますがよろしくお願いいたします。
どうぞよろしくお願いいたします。
アビーギルクリスト

修正後
関係者各位
コンディショナーは届きましたが、シャンプーが入ってませんでした。私が注文し間違えたのか、箱にシャンプーを入れ忘れたのかはわかリません。コンディショナーは25.4オンスボトルを一本しか受け取っていませんので、シャンプーの25.4オンスボトルもお待ちしています。商品を使うのを楽しみにしています。お手数をおかけしますがよろしくお願いいたします。
どうぞよろしくお願いいたします。
アビーギルクリスト

元の翻訳
こちらでのリサーチを行った結果、貴殿が購入者に発送日を知らせるメールを送ろうとしたとき「未通知メッセージ：受信者のメールアドレスが無効です」というエラーメッセージを受け取っていることが判明いたしました。

このエラーメッセージが表示されたときはいつでも購入者アカウントの電子メールの受信トレイに通知され、購入者が見に来ればこれらのメッセージは見れますが個人のメールに配送されません。

回避策として、購入者の電話番号（607）584ー4164に連絡することをお勧めします。

修正後
こちらでのリサーチを行った結果、貴殿が購入者に発送日を知らせるメールを送ろうとしたとき「未通知メッセージ：受信者のメールアドレスが無効です」というエラーメッセージを受け取っていることが判明いたしました。

このエラーメッセージが表示されたときはいつでも購入者アカウントの電子メールの受信トレイに通知され、購入者が見に来ればこれらのメッセージは見られますが個人のメールに配送されません。

回避策として、購入者の電話番号（607）584ー4164に連絡することをお勧めします。

元の翻訳
I was confirmed, but the warranty of the product from the first place is not being provided from the manufacturer.

If you want it so strong, why didn't you confirm it before ordering.

As general, no other buyers of mine care for warranty.

And If you would like a new box that is provided by the manufacturer, I will send it to you.

Otherwise, I have nothing I can help.
↵
Thank you for understandings.

修正後
I confirmed, but the warranty of the product from the manufacturer is not being provided from the first place.

If you want it so strong, why did not you confirm it before ordering.

Incidentally, no other buyers of mine care for warranty.

And If you would like a new box that is provided by the manufacturer, I will send it to you.

Otherwise, there is nothing I can do.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
May I ask a question before I order?
As for my previous order (the product A $1000), how much can I purchase?
I will order over 10 items, I would like to consider the products to purchase depending on the price.

I will send you a formal order form within one day of your reply.
Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
May I ask a question before I order?
As for my previous order (the product A $1000), for how much can I purchase?
I will order over 10 items when an actual order, I would like to consider the products to purchase refering to the price.

I will send you a formal order form after I get your reply within one day .
Thank you.

元の翻訳
There was a contact from the post office today. The parcel has arrived to the Kazakhstan.
As it is untraceable in Kazakhstan, we asked for the confirmation from international post office to Kazakhstan post office,↵
however, it may be found very soon, but it may take a month for the latest.
We will contact you as soon as more information come to us. Sorry for your inconvenience.

修正後
We have heard from the post office today, and they have told us that the parcel has arrived in Kazakhstan.
As the shipment status is untraceable within Kazakhstan, we asked the international post office to confirm the status with Kazakhstan post office. We have learned that it may be found immediately if early, but there is a possibility that it may take as long as a month.
We will contact you as soon as we have information available to us. Sorry for your inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Because of the differences of description at Amazon, we got some complains.

At Amazon USA, the product is in a pack of four.↵
At Amazon Japan, it is by itself.

Our mistake was we did not find the difference of the description.↵
We believe we did our best,↵
please understand and please don't rank down as the result of this.

Currently we are dealing with the customers whom we shipped already, and explaining to other customers who ordered, as well as refund. Not only our customers but also we ourselves are taking inconvenience.

Please fix the situation as soon as possible.

修正後
Because of a wrong item description on Amazon, we got some complaints.

On Amazon USA, the product is described as four in one package while it actually is single package as described on Amazon Japan.

We should have taken care of the item description, but we are sure it's none of our faults. Please take care of this issue on your end and make sure it won't hurt our ratings.

Currently we are dealing with the customers whom we shipped already, and explaining to other customers who ordered, as well as refund. Not only our customers but also we ourselves are taking inconvenience.

Please fix the situation as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
<Date>
total 24 events for seven days

*Sep 13th (Sat), Sep 14th (Sun), Sep 20th (Sat), Sep 21st (Sun), Sep 23rd (Tue/Public Holiday)
→4 events per day (10:30/13:30/16:30/19:30)

*Sep 19th(Fri), 22nd(Mon)
→two events per day(18:00/21:00)

*Each event last around 120 minutes.
*AAA members are not perform in this event.

<Address>
"SHIDAX HALL"
Shidax Culture village, 1-12-10, Jinnan, Shibuyaku, Tokyo

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<Date>
total 24 events for seven days

*Sep 13th (Sat), Sep 14th (Sun), Sep 20th (Sat), Sep 21st (Sun), Sep 23rd (Tue/Public Holiday)
→4 events per day (10:30/13:30/16:30/19:30)

*Sep 19th(Fri), 22nd(Mon)
→two events per day(18:00/21:00)

*Each event would last around 120 minutes.
*AAA members would not be performing in this event.

<Address>
"SHIDAX HALL"
Shidax Culture village, 1-12-10, Jinnan, Shibuyaku, Tokyo

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your successful bid.
I understand delay of your payment.
As for your inquiry, it will be sent by EMS, if it would not stop at custom too long, probably it takes four to five days to reach you, within one week at most.
The state of the product is as the explanation, there is no big problems, there could be a bit of dust, but not mildew.
I will pack carefully.
Please check when it arrives. Please let me know if anything occurs.
Thank you very much.

修正後
Thank you very much for your successful bid.
I understand delay of your payment.
As for your inquiry, it will be sent by EMS, if it would not be stopped at customs too long, probably it takes four to five days to reach you, within one week at most.
The condition of the product is as the explanation, there is no major problems, there could be a bit of dust, but not mildew.
I will pack the item very carefully.
Please check it when it arrives. Please let me know if any problem occurs.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
It is possible for you to use our co-working space. It is expected to be used by two to three people. Co- working space is in our office. The address is as below.

Please let us know When you use the co-working space, as the application is needed.

修正後
It is possible for you to use our co-working space. It is expected to be used by two to three people. It is in our office. The address is as below:

Please let us know when you use the space, as the application is needed.

元の翻訳
It is possible for you to use our co-working space. It is expected to be used by two to three people. Co- working space is in our office. The address is as below.

Please let us know When you use the co-working space, as the application is needed.

修正後
It is possible for you to use our co-working space? It is expected to be used by two to three people. Co- working space is in our office. The address is as below.

Please let us know when you use the co-working space, as the application is needed.