翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

御社が弊社のコワーキングスペースを利用することは可能です。
利用できる人数は2～3名を想定しています。
コワーキングスペースは我々のオフィスの中にあります。
住所は以下の通りです。

利用する場合は手続きが必要になりますので、その際は教えてください。

英語

It is possible for you to use our co-working space. It is expected to be used by two to three people. Co- working space is in our office. The address is as below.

Please let us know When you use the co-working space, as the application is needed.

レビュー ( 2 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/03 12:08:54

元の翻訳
It is possible for you to use our co-working space. It is expected to be used by two to three people. Co- working space is in our office. The address is as below.

Please let us know When you use the co-working space, as the application is needed.

修正後
It is possible for you to use our co-working space? It is expected to be used by two to three people. Co- working space is in our office. The address is as below.

Please let us know when you use the co-working space, as the application is needed.

細かいところを指摘してしまいましたが。良い文章だと思います。

[mikang]

どうもありがとうございました。

dosankoはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/06 14:01:03

元の翻訳
It is possible for you to use our co-working space. It is expected to be used by two to three people. Co- working space is in our office. The address is as below.

Please let us know When you use the co-working space, as the application is needed.

修正後
It is possible for you to use our co-working space. It is expected to be used by two to three people. It is in our office. The address is as below:

Please let us know when you use the space, as the application is needed.

application だと、申請してしまえば、その後の処理をまたなくても良いような感じがしますので、procedureのほうがよいと思います。

[mikang]

レビューをありがとうございました。これからもよろしくお願いいたします。