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This is masa who sent a message through PayPal.

Let me send a message to this email address again.

I bought a water filter last time.

But this filter wouldn't supply water properly.

So, I would like to return this product.

I will buy one more water filter, so could you send me two products with the price of one product?

Or, I don't mind to get the pay back first, and I order two items after that.

Which is better for you?

I will return this from Japan, so could you cover the shipping expenses?

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This is masa who sent a message through PayPal.

Let me send a message to this email address again.

I bought a water filter last time.

But this filter wouldn't supply water properly.

So, I would like to return this product.

I will buy one more water filter, so could you send me two products with the price of one product?

Or, I don't mind to get the refund first, and then order two items after that.

Which is better for you?

I will return this from Japan, so could you cover the shipping expenses?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.
We do not attach the tracking numbers to the products which are under $70. This is because the shipping cost will be high.
Please understand it.

Thank you for your email.
We feel sorry about the product did not arrive at the address.
If the address is correct, please send a replacement.
We will send the tracking number together.
Is that alright?

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Thank you for your email.
We do not attach tracking numbers to the products which are under $70. This is because the shipping cost would be too high if we did.
Please understand it.

Thank you for your email.
We feel sorry that the product did not arrive at the address.
If the address is correct, please ask a replacement.
We will send the tracking number together.
Is that alright?

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Anzairen says you can survive even if you slump into the crevasse by tying the bodies each other with a rope.
This short rope method is based on the thought the first person never slumps into the crevasse.
"What do you do if Raki slumps into there?"
"Don't worry. I'm not gonna slump. If it happens I'll cut the rope by myself"

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"By the way, have you become good at playing piano?"
"No, I haven't"
"You've become able to play proudly but how come you can make mistakes?"
"Shut up"

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Anzairen says you can survive even if you fall into the crevasse by tying the bodies together with a rope.
This short rope method is based on the idea that the first person never falls down into the crevasse.
"What are you going to do if you fall in?"
"Don't worry. I'm not gonna fall. If it happens, I'll cut the rope myself"

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"By the way, have you become good at playing piano?"
"No, I haven't"
"You can play proudly now, but how come you make mistakes?"
"Shut up"

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説明
ルイ・ヴィトンの茶色と緑の「Speedy」トートバッグは飾りジッパーのトップジップファスナー、サイドに付いている金色の南京錠、金色の金属に付いたトップに付いているコントラストになっている2つのむき出しの短い丸の持ち手、グラフィティプリント、綾文に特徴づけられます。ビンテージの商品は新品ではないので小さい傷があるかもしれません。

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説明
ルイ・ヴィトンの茶色と緑の「Speedy」トートバッグは飾りジッパーのトップジップファスナー、サイドに付いている金色の南京錠、金色の金属に付いたトップに付いているコントラストになっている2つのむき出しの短い丸の持ち手、グラフィティプリント、綾文に特徴づけられます。ビンテージ商品は新品ではないので小さい傷があるかもしれません。ご注意ください。

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The video which captures the moment the thunder hit the train on Odakyu Line. No one was injured but we realized the natural threats. If you need to hurry, please look at 1:00; the paper cutout drawer who draws by cutting the paper by knife. The video shows the process his making an art by cutting a big black paper. One can tell the process is the pile of sophisticated works; the research corps who attach the bill board of Shingeki no Kyojin; the graffiti which popular cartoon artists draw before breaking down buildings. They can be cultural assets. What a sumptuous thing it is!

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The video that captures the moment lightning hit a train on the Odakyu line. No one was injured, but we have realized the natural threats. If you need to hurry, please look at 1 o' clock; the cutout artist who draws by cutting paper with a knife. The video shows the process of his art by cutting a big black piece of paper. One can tell the process is a series of sophisticated actions; the investigation corps that attaches the bill board of Shingeki no Kyojin; the graffiti which popular cartoon artists draw before breaking down buildings. They can be cultural assets. What a luxury!

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Do you know if you drink water properly everyday, it will give you various kinds of effects such as diet, beauty care, getting over one's constipation and detox?

"Water Log" is the application which manage your water taking. It supports your beauty and health by getting in the habit of drinking water.

Let's stay beautiful and healthy with drinking enough water.

Functions and features
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- posting on Twitter
- posting on Facebook
- daily changeable photograms
- daily changeable goals
- memo
- records of the weight and the body fat
- flat design

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Do you know if you drink water properly everyday, it will give you various kinds of effects such as diet, beauty care, getting over one's constipation and detox?

"Water Log" is the application which manages your water intake. It supports your beauty and health by helping you habitually drink water.

Let's stay beautiful and healthy drinking water enough.

Functions and features
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- posting on Twitter
- posting on Facebook
- daily changeable photograms
- daily changeable goals
- memo
- records of the weight and the body fat
- flat design

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US
Thank you for purchasing a product at our shop.
We made a mistake about the price of this product.
We are so sorry.
We extend our sincere apologies to you.
The correct price is ●●●.
We have not shipped, so we did not charged you yet.
If you want to cancel the order, we will have the prompt cancelation procedure.
Thank you.
Have a good day!

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US
Thank you for purchasing a product at our shop.
We made a mistake about the price of this product.
We are so sorry.
We extend our sincere apologies to you.
The correct price is ●●●.
We have not shipped, so we did not charge you yet.
If you want to cancel the order, we will promptly take care of it.
Thank you.
Have a good day!

元の翻訳
先週、Hongkiatの皆さんは35か国以上のウェブデザイナーや創設者から年収を回収するという素晴らしい業績を残しました。 データはその分野で働いている報告書を管理するPayScaleから送られています。我々は、7つのアジアー大西洋の国々 (インド、インドネシア、マレーシア、シンガポール、香港、日本、オーストラリア) の創設者とデザイナーの給料を調べようとしています。そして、アメリカとの違いをを比べています。
給料は高いところもあれば安いところもあります。

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先週、Hongkiatの皆さんは35か国以上のウェブデザイナーや創設者から年収を回収するという素晴らしい業績を残しました。 データはその分野で働いている報告書を管理するPayScaleから送られています。我々は、7つのアジアー大西洋の国々 (インド、インドネシア、マレーシア、シンガポール、香港、日本、オーストラリア) の創設者とデザイナーの給料を調べようとしています。そして、アメリカとの違いをを比べています。
これらが、給料の高いところと安いところです。。

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I pay through American Express so I get 20% off shipping cost at the moment.

American Express will have 30% off shipping cost this time.

URL

May I get this 30% off shipping?

Please reply this question.

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I pay through American Express, so I can currently get 20% off shipping cost.

This time, however, American Express announced that it would offer a 30% discount on shipping cost.

URL

May I benefit from the offer as well?

Please reply to this question.

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Each of them is handmade in order to intake nutrition in the body effectively. The taste builds a reputation as well. This product which Japanese food analysts praise has rich and natural sweetness, and it also has spicy flavour with fresh gingers. You can enjoy the unique pop texture.
It is going to be a dessert like shake with the mix of soy milk.
For the people who want to reduce the size of your waist.

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Each of them is handmade in order to intake nutrition in the body effectively. The taste builds a reputation as well. This product which Japanese food analysts praise has rich and natural sweetness, and it also has spicy flavour with fresh ginger. You can enjoy the unique pop texture.
It is going to be a dessert like shake with the mix of soy milk.
For the people who want to reduce the size of your waist.

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I recomend you only 7 seconds excercise which is made by a posture beauty expert. Anyone can develop one's muscle without hard work for sure. If you do it with this product, you will increase the basal metabolism effectively.

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I recomend you only 7 seconds excercise which is designed by a posture beauty expert. Anyone can surely develop their muscle without hard work. If you do it with this product, you will increase the basal metabolism effectively.

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This is the response to your inquiry. The product will be shipped to the address (Japan) below.
Please do not worry it will not be shipped to Hong Kong.
The product will be shipped today.
We will let you know after we ship it to you.
Thank you.

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Concerning your inquiry, the product will be shipped to the following address (Japan).
Please be assured it will not be shipped to Hong Kong.
The product will be shipped today to Japan.
We will contact you after we have shipped it to you.
Thank you.

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我々の許可なしにお客様がモデルを送ってくることは喜ばしくないです。

我々は商品の輸入でたくさんの問題を抱えています。

モデルを送り返す正しい方法を知っていましたか？輸入に必要な見積書はあなたが送ってきた手紙のどこですか？今日送っていただけますか？どの住所にそのモデルを送り返したのですか？

我々は今ホリデーなので誰でもがその荷物を手に入れることができるのです。

ホリデーから戻ってきましたら上司と話し合い、輸送費に関してお知らせ致します。

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我々の許可なしにお客様がモデルを送ってくることは喜ばしくないです。

我々は商品の輸入でたくさんの問題を抱えています。

モデルを送り返す正しい方法を知っていましたか？輸入に必要な、あなたのヘッダーがついた見積書はどこですか？今日送っていただけますか？どの住所にそのモデルを送り返したのですか？

我々は今ホリデーなので誰でもがその荷物を手に入れることができるのです。

ホリデーから戻ってきましたら上司と話し合い、輸送費に関してお知らせ致します。

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装飾が施されたオートバイのアクセサリー（タイミングカバー、大きいメダルなど）（購買者はそれらが小さく、輸送するには少なすぎる場合に、箱に他のものと一緒にそれらを入れる）
ジャケット、ヘルメット、手袋、ブーツなどの全ての衣料品

一般的に、高い商品ほど日本への搬送費を賄う利益を確保できる。

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装飾が施されたオートバイのアクセサリー（タイミングカバー、大きいメダルなど）（購入者はそれらが小さく、送料もあまり変わらないので、箱に他のものと一緒にそれらを入れられる）
ジャケット、ヘルメット、手袋、ブーツなどの全ての衣料品

一般的に、高い商品ほど日本への搬送費を賄う利益を確保できる。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support.↵
I have a question about ＬＯＷＰＲＩＣＥ+ＤＥＬＩＶＥＲＹ of ＩＮＶＥＮＴＯＲＹ (I attach a file).
I think this price is the cheapest in both brand new products and used ones. Are there any ways to display only the brand new products?

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Thanks always for your help. I have a question about low price + delivery of inventory (file attached).
I think this price is the cheapest in both new and used products, but are there any ways to display only the new products?

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Yes, I will purchase 6 more.
If possible, I would like to buy about 30.

Could I deal with you directly with using PayPal?

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Yes, I will purchase 6 more.
If possible, I would like to buy about 30.

Can we make a direct transaction using PayPal?

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We assume that the procedure has already done after we sent w-8BEN to you.

Therefore, we would like to relegate the stock of Zynga which we gave you to the broker.
Merrill Lynch which is our broker asked us to get your information statement which you write the balance, account number, tax and ID, which are important to relegate and the preparation for that. So could you send it to us?

After that, please let us know how to proceed your actual transfer directions.

Thank you.

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We assume that the procedure was already done after we sent w-8BEN to you.

Therefore, we would like to relegate the stock of Zynga which we gave you to the broker.
Merrill Lynch, which is our broker, asked us to get your information statement where you provide the balance, account number, tax and ID, which are important for the relegation and the document preparation. So could you send it to us?

After that, please let us know how to proceed your actual transfer directions.

Thank you.

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Because you did not send me the invoice which was $60 including shipping cost, this auction was closed.
Whey you did not send it to me?
I have waited your invoice for a long time.
When are you going to send the invoice to me?
Please response to me immediately.

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Because you did not send me the invoice which includes $60 shipping cost, this auction was closed.
Why didn't you send it to me?
I have been waiting for your invoice.
How long will it be before you send it to me?
I would appreciate prompt action on the matter.

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We have four seasons in Japan, so we do not have so many mosquitoes whole year like Uganda.↵
We have mosquitoes from around April to October in Japan.↵
It means there is few demands from November to March.

The season of mosquitoes has reached the peak, so it is too late to prepare for the sales in this year.

We need to start preparing from the end of this year or the beginning of next year at the latest, and prepare for building the website in three months. It is ideal that we send the direct mails to the retail shops after three months.

If we have the chance to participate in the exhibition by April, we want to exhibit this Kite and ask for the retail shops.

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We have four seasons in Japan, so we do not have as many mosquitoes year-round like in Uganda. Here we have mosquitoes from around April to October. It means there is little demands from November to March.

The mosquito season has already reached the peak, so it is too late to prepare for sales this year.

We need to start preparing from the end of this year or the beginning of next year at the latest, and prepare for building the website within three months. After that it would be ideal to send direct mail to retail stores after three months.

If we have the chance to participate in exhibitions by April, we want to exhibit this Kite and solicit retail stores.