翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

日本は四季があり、ウガンダと違い年中蚊はいません。
日本では4月位から発生し、10月位まで蚊がいます。
つまり、11月～3月は需要が殆どなくなります。

今年はもう蚊のピークを迎えており、今から準備しても
年内のセールスは殆ど見込めないでしょう。

年末か、遅くとも2014年初めから準備を開始し、3ヶ月程度を
掛けてサイトの構築準備を進めます。その後、３月位にDM
を小売店へ送るのが理想です。

４月までに展示会に参加するチャンスがあれば、そこでも
このKiteを出展し、小売店を募りたいと思います。

英語

We have four seasons in Japan, so we do not have so many mosquitoes whole year like Uganda.
We have mosquitoes from around April to October in Japan.
It means there is few demands from November to March.

The season of mosquitoes has reached the peak, so it is too late to prepare for the sales in this year.

We need to start preparing from the end of this year or the beginning of next year at the latest, and prepare for building the website in three months. It is ideal that we send the direct mails to the retail shops after three months.

If we have the chance to participate in the exhibition by April, we want to exhibit this Kite and ask for the retail shops.

レビュー ( 1 )

tokyomanlyはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/16 00:28:07

元の翻訳
We have four seasons in Japan, so we do not have so many mosquitoes whole year like Uganda.↵
We have mosquitoes from around April to October in Japan.↵
It means there is few demands from November to March.

The season of mosquitoes has reached the peak, so it is too late to prepare for the sales in this year.

We need to start preparing from the end of this year or the beginning of next year at the latest, and prepare for building the website in three months. It is ideal that we send the direct mails to the retail shops after three months.

If we have the chance to participate in the exhibition by April, we want to exhibit this Kite and ask for the retail shops.

修正後
We have four seasons in Japan, so we do not have as many mosquitoes year-round like in Uganda. Here we have mosquitoes from around April to October. It means there is little demands from November to March.

The mosquito season has already reached the peak, so it is too late to prepare for sales this year.

We need to start preparing from the end of this year or the beginning of next year at the latest, and prepare for building the website within three months. After that it would be ideal to send direct mail to retail stores after three months.

If we have the chance to participate in exhibitions by April, we want to exhibit this Kite and solicit retail stores.

OK translation, just made it more natural