marikowa (marikowa) — 付けたレビュー

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I am sorry to contact you many times.
Could you take a look at a following article just for reference.
It seems you can watch on iPhone.
I haven't checked it so I am sorry when it did not work.

An article of a sample code that automatically play when it is mute.
・a movie will be filled here
・choose a parameter of the movie.
・a function that is done after finishing set up for playing the movie.
・it will react when a player's condition has changed.

I don't need reply.


I think it might be ok because he said he was fine when he did 2 performance a day.
I would rather worried about ABC's throat.

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I am sorry to contact you many times.
Could you take a look at the following article just for a reference.
It seems you can watch it on iPhone.
I haven't checked it so I am sorry if it does not work.

An article of a sample code that automatically play when it is muted.
・a movie will be filled here
・choose a parameter of the movie.
・a function that is done after finishing set up for playing the movie.
・it will react when a player's condition has changed.

I don't need reply.


I think it might be ok because he said he was fine when he did 2 performances in a day.
I would rather worry about ABC's throat.

元の翻訳
Price
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This is the price of the product.
The difference with the image size differs per person so I do not think that this is not my error.
Can I request for this evaluation to be deleted?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

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Rating
Insert a space
This is the rating of the product.
The image size differs with each person so I do not think that this is my error.
Could you delete this evaluation?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

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Thank you for contacting me. If you want to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. Please do not use this tool when I am using it. I will let you know beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please study about Terapeak by my finishing making the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template witch fits the product weight.

Please get the following products up on eBay from your PC.

元の翻訳
Hot curry with melted cheese on top is truly delicious.
You may want to compare the tastes of different baked-curry restaurants that are all over the place.

Go a little way further from Mojiko on Mojiko Retro Train "Shiokaze-go"!

If you still have time left after enjoying Mojiko Retro Area, we recommend taking Mojiko Retro Train "Shiokaze-go."

The train, connecting Mojiko Retro Area and Kanmon-kaikyo Mekari Area, runs on weekends and national holidays from mid-March to late November, as well as during spring break and summer vacation.
The travel time is approximately 10 minutes.

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Hot curry with melted cheese on top is truly delicious.
You may want to compare the tastes of different baked-curry restaurants that are all over the place.

Go a little way further from Mojiko on Mojiko Retro Train "Shiokaze-go"!

If you still have time left after enjoying Mojiko Retro Area, we recommend taking Mojiko Retro Train "Shiokaze-go."

The train, connecting Mojiko Retro Area and Kanmon-kaikyo Mekari Area, runs on weekends and national holidays from mid-March to late November, as well as during spring break and summer vacation.
The travel time is approximately 10 minutes each way.

元の翻訳
I have a strategy to succeed in selling TPMSs in Japan, as I told you at your company the other day.
Its opportunity will come in 2014.

I am sorry but we will not prepare a deposit for 2000 sets.

What we can save is as the first estimate a 30% deposit for 500 sets, and 2000 sets of a Japanese manual & package.
We will pay all the rest of 70% when the products are ready to be shipped.

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I have a strategy to succeed in selling TPMSs in Japan, as I told you at your company the other day.
Its opportunity will come in 2014.

I am sorry but we will not prepare a deposit for 2000 sets.

What we can pay first is for the 30% deposit of 500 sets, and 2000 sets of a Japanese manuals & packages as I estimated at the beginning.
We will pay all the rest of 70% when the products are ready to be shipped.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply so quickly.

I refunded all budget $176.44 via paypall.

Please check your account.

I will send you evaluation list.
I am happy to positive evaluation.

I am willing to your cooporation.

I want to study more by this transaction.

if I can help you, please feel free to contact me.
I will do my best next time.

I am willing to unfair promotion.↵

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Thank you for your reply so quickly.

I refunded all budget $176.44 via paypall.

Please check your account.

I will send you evaluation list.
I am happy if you give me positive evaluation.

I am willing to your cooperation.

I want to study more by this transaction.

if I can help you, please feel free to contact me.
I will do my best next time.

I am willing to your support.

元の翻訳
1 Nice to meet you. I am oo who lives in Japan.
2 I am collecting Crepe books and I am looking in various bookstores within Germany.
3 Is it possible to look for cheap prices??
4 It is possible to pay using Paypal or through money transfer from my friend. If it is not possible to directly send to Japan, then it is possible to have a friend living in the country to receive it.
5 I am looking forward for a favorable response.

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1 Nice to meet you. I am oo who lives in Japan.
2 I am collecting Crepe books and I am looking in various bookstores within Germany.
3 Is it possible to look for cheap prices??
4 It is possible to pay using Paypal or through money transfer from my friend. If it is not possible to directly send to Japan, then it is possible to have a friend living in the country to receive it.
5 I am looking forward to your positive reply.

元の翻訳
I registered my AMEX card, but it seems like a 30%-discount has not been applied. Can you tell me why this is the case?
Please apply the discount.

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I registered my AMEX card, but it seems like a 30%-discount has not been applied. Can you tell me why this happened?
Please apply the discount.

元の翻訳
#will
I understood. In addition, please contact me if you have the item I want.

#golf-xcess
Please suggest a price for Japanese customers if it is available.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but it would be helpful if you can confirm whether or not it is a product which I can order.
Thank you in advance.

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#will
I understood. In addition, I will contact you when I have items I want.

#golf-xcess
I will show the price to Japanese customers if it is available.
I'm sorry to bother you, but it would be helpful if you can confirm whether it is the product which I can order.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello, I would like to place an additional order,

but please ship the item numbers above altogether.

Also I would like to ask if you can ship the additional order from internet operation.

It's described on the site explanation you can?

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Hello, I would like to place an additional order,

but please ship the item numbers above altogether.

Also I would like to ask if you can ship the additional order from website operation.

It's described on the website and the explanation that you can do that.

元の翻訳
She is born from inside a bamboo tree, soon grows up to become a beautiful daughter, turns down suitors for her marriage one by one until, on the night of the full moon, she leaves to go to the moon with the messenger sent for her.

This is the outline of the story "Taketori Monogatari" (The Tale of the Bamboo-Cutter). If it were a movie, how would it unfold? Probably it would be advertised as "The crime the princess committed, and her punishment", which has a strange feel to it.

Out of all the stars, why did Princess Kaguya choose to come to earth? What was she thinking while on earth? Why did she have to go to the moon? Exactly what was the crime that she was guilty of? What was her punishment? This movie would reveal the answers to these many unclear questions from the original story.

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She is born from inside of a bamboo tree, soon grows up to become a beautiful daughter, turns down suitors for her marriage one by one until, on the night of the full moon, she leaves to go to the moon with the messenger sent for her.

This is the outline of the story "Taketori Monogatari" (The Tale of the Bamboo-Cutter). If it were a movie, how would it unfold? Probably it would be advertised as "The crime the princess committed, and her punishment", which has a strange feel to it.

Out of all the stars, why did Princess Kaguya choose to come to earth? What was she thinking while on earth? Why did she have to go to the moon? Exactly what was the crime that she was guilty of? What was her punishment? This movie would reveal the answers to these many unclear questions from the original story.

元の翻訳
I had understood. I will trust you about your things.
Then, please make three of the mold in S,M,L.
Besides, each ring in S,M,L. have to make 35 pieces, total 105 pieces. Is it OK for you if a ring cost USD80?Please contact me about quotation including freight fare from you to Japan, the way how to pay, the delivery time. MOQ will be no problem to 100 pieces after next time.

The ring is in order to the making of website and opening the market of retail stores from now on. Therefore, it would take some months at least to start to sell. I will continually give you the order, so would you please protect the mold made this time?

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I understand. I trust you..
Then, please make three of the mold in S,M,L.
Besides, each ring in S,M,L. have to make 35 pieces, total 105 pieces. Is it OK for you if a ring cost USD80?Please contact me about quotation including freight fare from you to Japan, the way how to pay, and the delivery time. MOQ will be no problem to 100 pieces after next time.

The ring is in order to the making of website and opening the market of retail stores from now on. Therefore, it would take some months at least to start to sell. I will continually give you the order, so would you please protect the mold made this time?

元の翻訳
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①お返事ありがとうございます。質問がございます・・・英国では、おもちゃのガンは５０％が明るい色を使用しなくてはなりません。しかし、このおもちゃのガンは全体が黒色で、本物に見えます。このように本物に見えるガンを所有する事は、法律違反にはならないでしょうか？

②こんにちは・・・こちらのガンは法律違反となるため所有できません、ですから、返信宛先の記入された返送ラベルを送っていただけることは可能でしょうか？

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①お返事ありがとうございます。質問がございます・・・英国では、おもちゃのガンは５０％が明るい色を使用しなくてはなりません。しかし、このおもちゃのガンは全体が黒色で、本物に見えます。このように本物に見えるガンを所有する事は、法律違反にはならないでしょうか？

②こんにちは・・・こちらのガンはイギリスでは法律違反となるため所有できません、ですから、返信宛先の記入された返送ラベルを送っていただけますか？

元の翻訳
・ I noticed XXX just now.
・ What is the antonym of that word?
・ I don't really like it that much.
・ It will be troublesome if the problems happen one after another.
・ I couldn't wake up that easily this morning.

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・ I give attention to XXX just now.
・ What is the antonym of that word?
・ I don't really like it that much.
・ I get bothered because problems occur one after another.
・ I couldn't wake up that easily this morning.