Margaret Smith (maggie_smith05) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
If you could discount it to half price, I will make a purchase. Please send me an invoice of S400. It will be $160 in 16 items of each $10.

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If you could discount it to half price, I will make a purchase. Please send me an invoice for the S400. It will be $160 for 16 items at $10 each.

元の翻訳
I am afraid that I do not have the information on the latest edition yet. I am also hoping that it's going to be on the sale soon. Thank you for inviting me to Facebook. I have registered to it as I did not have account on FB. It would be great if I could talk with you on FB as well. I also have a twitter account so please follow me if you would like. Wasn't the meaning of Sheet clear? I am not sure how I can explain it well but it's made by similar material which is used in plastic folder. I have 10 of these and already placed them on Yahoo auction. But I can put aside 2 of these if you would like.

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I am afraid that I do not have the information on the latest edition of ※ yet. I am also hoping that it's going to be on the sale soon. Thank you for inviting me to Facebook. I have registered to it as I did not have account on FB. It would be great if I could talk with you on FB as well. I also have a twitter account so please follow me if you would like. Wasn't the meaning of Sheet clear? I am not sure how I can explain it well but it's made by similar material which is used in plastic folder. I have 10 of these and already placed them on Yahoo auction. But I can put aside 2 of these if you would like.

元の翻訳
I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we started our business in the USA. You were very kind to us who were not good at English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking to make an order on 22 August.

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I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we did business with in the USA. You were very kind to us who could barely speak English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking of placing an order on 22 August.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for my late reply.

Thank you for waiting for my reply even though you had many other contacts.

Thank you very much for your business as always.

Please send me a quotation including shipping fee for RBZ FW.
Also please send me a list of purchasable Fuel Shafts as well as quotations?

Thank you.

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I am sorry for my late reply.

And thank you for waiting for my reply even though you had many other contacts.

I appreciate you very much for your business as always.

Please send me a quotation including shipping fee for RBZ FW.
In addition, could you send me a list of purchasable Fuel Shafts as well as quotations?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
トラッキングナンバーEJ228593176JPを日本郵便と地元の郵便局（以前、働いているので知っていますが、通常配達してくれる ところです）で確認しましたが、やはり何の情報も得られません。あなたも分かると思いますが、これは心配になります。:(

お問い合わせセンター（リソリューションセンター）で、詳細をみてみてください。

修正後
トラッキングナンバーEJ228593176JPを日本郵便と地元の郵便局（働いているので知っていますが、通常配達してくれる ところです）で確認しましたが、やはり何の情報も得られません。あなたも分かると思いますが、これは心配になります。:(

お問い合わせセンター（リソリューションセンター）で、詳細をみてみてください。

元の翻訳
はい。クレームを送りました。商品を受け取っていません。トラッキングナンバーをみると、日本にあるということになっています。１ヶ月前に支払いをすませています。

教えてくれたトラッキングナンバーをみてみてください。日本にあると表示されます。

私のメッセージをみられたのか分かりませんが、まだ商品は受け取っておらず、トラッキングナンバーで調べるとまだ日本にあるということです。

修正後
はい。クレームを送りました。商品は受け取っていません。トラッキングナンバーを調べてみると、日本にあるということになっていますが、商品の到着はまだです。支払いは１ヶ月以上前に済ませています。

教えてくれたトラッキングナンバーを調べてみてください。日本にあると表示されます。

私のメッセージを見られたのか分かりませんが、まだ商品は受け取っておらず、トラッキングナンバーで調べると、まだ日本にあるということです。