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It seems that there is a scratch on the display of the watch. I am truly sorry for that.

The watch was purchased from a wholesale dealer, so it is brand new.

Could you please take a photo of the scratch on the display of the watch, and send the image to me?

I have to make a protest against the wholesale dealer for this.

If you wish for a refund, I will pay back the whole amount.

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I am truly sorry that It seems that there is a scratch on the display of the watch.

The watch is brand new since I purchased the watch from a wholesale dealer.

Could you please take a photo of the scratch on the display of the watch, and send me it?

I have to make a protest against the wholesale dealer for this.

If you wish for a refund, I will pay back the whole amount.

元の翻訳
EMSでの配達はとても手間がかかりますし、戸口まで配達してくれないので、希望しません。家からとても遠い所まで荷物を受け取りに行かないといけません。フェデックスだと手間がかからず自宅まで配達してくれます。少し手数料がかかっても、あなたがフェデックスで送ってくださるなら購入します。

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EMSでの配達はとても手間がかかりますし、戸口まで配達してくれないので、希望しません。家からとても遠い所まで荷物を受け取りに行かないといけません。FedExだと手間がかからず自宅まで配達してくれます。少し余計にお金がかかっても、あなたがFedExで送ってくださるなら購入します。

元の翻訳
EMSでの配達はとても手間がかかりますし、戸口まで配達してくれないので、希望しません。家からとても遠い所まで荷物を受け取りに行かないといけません。フェデックスだと手間がかからず自宅まで配達してくれます。少し手数料がかかっても、あなたがフェデックスで送ってくださるなら購入します。

修正後
EMSでの配達はとても手間がかかりますし、戸口まで配達してくれないので、希望しません。家からとても遠い所まで荷物を受け取りに行かないといけません。フェデックスだと手間がかからず自宅まで配達してくれます。多少の料金がかかっても、あなたがフェデックスで送ってくださるなら購入します。

元の翻訳
My husband and I used Segway in May 2014.

Berlin is very big and it takes hours to look around the city as individual visitors. But if you just visit and see major sites, Segway makes it possible in half a day. From this point, I would strongly recommend to use it.

We have used Segway in many places and this was our seventh or eighth time, so it was not take so long for us to get used to it. A starter is given 30 minutes to practice before use, so there is no need to worry about. Nevertheless, you are to drive on the public road, so you have to make sure to get used to it at the beginning.

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My husband and I used Segways in May 2014.

Berlin is very big and it takes hours to look around the city as individual visitors. But if you just visit and see major sites, a Segway makes it possible in half a day. From this point, I would strongly recommend to use it.

We have used Segways in many places and this was our seventh or eighth time, so it did not take so long for us to get used to it. A beginner is given 30 minutes to practice before use, so there is no need to worry. Nevertheless, you are to drive on the public road, so you have to make sure to get used to it at the beginning.

元の翻訳
I have received an inquiry from XXXXXXXX Co., Ltd. regarding the cloud service.
I do not have to bother you if I could answer it, however, the questions are for manufacturers and administrators of a server, so I would like to ask you for your kind help.

Please respond to me by filling out the attached Excel file. Since questions are on a general cloud service, some of them are irrelevant, but I hope you kindly forgive me.

I am sorry to trouble you.

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I have received an inquiry from XXXXXXXX Co., Ltd. regarding the cloud service.
I would not bother you if I could answer it, but the questions are intended for manufacturers and administrators of a server, so I would like to ask you for your kind help.

Please respond to me by filling out the attached Excel file. Since questions are for a general cloud service, some of them are irrelevant, but I hope you kindly forgive me.

I am sorry to trouble you.