コウスケ (khayashi06) — 付けたレビュー

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I put handling items in my client's charge,↵
so it may take 5 to 10 days to ship this item.
Please notice it before purchasing.

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As the handling of the product has been assigned to our business partner, it may take 5 to 10 days for the shipment of this item.
Please note this prior to making a purchase.

元の翻訳
There are full of amazing staff on the other side of the door!
Just wait until you see it!

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Amazing things are filled behind these doors!
Just wait until you see them!

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Thank you for your continuous support.
This guitar is very inexpensive. It’s a good buy.
As there are only a few in the Japanese market, the best price is we can offer is $A.
For your reference, the amount we can indicate is $B.
We are sorry that we can’t help.
If you have any other guitar in mind, please tell me your budget beforehand.
It could be several ones. We will deal with your request sincerely.
Thank you. Have a great day!

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Thank you for your continuous support.
This guitar is very inexpensive. It’s a good buy.
As there are only a few of these guitars in the Japanese market, we are unable to provide it to you at less than $A.
For your reference, the amount we can indicate is $B.
Our apologies for being unable to be of assistance.
If you have any other guitars in mind, please tell me your budget in advance.
It is fine if you have multiple guitars. We will deal with your request in earnest.
Thank you. Have a great day!

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
As I checked with Japan Post’s site below, it arrived in MXMEX3 on February 3 and it is being held there.
I am sorry to trouble you, but if you tell the post office near you the tracking number, you should be able to have it delivered to you. Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
Upon tracking the item through Japan Post’s site noted below, it has already arrived in MXMEX3 on February 3, and it is being held there.
I am sorry for the incovenience, but if you notify a post office in your neighborhood with the tracking number, you should be able to have it delivered to you. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Over the recent years, the "noodle stands" located on the platforms in stations throughout Japan are popular with foreign visitors. What exactly are "noodle stands?" Let us introduce you to these "noodle stands".

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In recent years, "noodle stands" located on train station platforms throughout Japan have been popular with foreign tourists. What exactly are "noodle stands?" Let us introduce you to these "noodle stands".

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It's a lacing suit which I attached a picture, but is it possible to make it custom by designating the each sizes?
Please tell me the due date when reproducing exact like the sample, and the price including the shipping charge.

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I am looking for racing suits like the one in the attached photo, but would you be able to make them on a custom made basis with the respective sizes specified?
Please let me know the lead time and the price including shipping charges, if the sample is to be reproduced precisely.

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I would like to ask you to be possible the custom-made racing suit such attached image on each specified size.
Please let me know the delivery deadline and the price including the shipping charge in case of reproducing a sample faithfully.

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I am looking for racing suits like the one in the attached photo, but would you be able to make them on a custom made basis with the respective sizes specified?
Please let me know the lead time and the price including shipping charges, if the sample is to be reproduced precisely.↵

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I am sorry for my late reply.
Then please deal with me at $170.↵
Thank you.
I will order if I get order because it is sold now.
Thank you for your help.

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I am sorry for my late response.
So, let us proceed at $170. Thank you.
As it is currently on sale, I will place an order upon request.
Thank you for your assistance with this matter.

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The shipping cost is expensive. By international parcel SAL, you can ship a package under 3 kg for about 21 dollars, so could you not use international parcel?
Other Pakistani sellers can use international parcel. Your company’s customer handling is excellent, so I intend to increase the transaction.
Please consider using international parcel as I don’t mind a little bit of delay in delivery.

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The shipping cost is expensive. By using international parcel SAL, as it appears a package under 3 kg can be shipped for about 21 dollars, could you please use international parcel?
It seems that other Pakistani sellers can use international parcel. The way your company has dealt with me has been excellent, so I intend to increase the number of transaction in the future.
I do not mind if the delivery is slightly delayed, so that I greatly appreciate your assistance with this matter..

元の翻訳
Oh! You found it!

I've been busy recently so I was missing it.

Can I bit it?
It has 4 more days, but please tell me maximam how much I can bit it for.

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Oh! I am amazed you found it!

I have been busy lately, so I must have overlooked it.

Can I place a bid on it?
There are 4 days remaining, but please tell me the maximum bid I can make.↵

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How long does it take if you use air-cargo?
Also, how do I know that you have shipped it correctly?

I will pay for it as soon as I get the information about shipping.

I do want to process it as you feel like.

Thank you for taking care of it. I look forward to hearing from you.

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Approximately how many days will it take for arrival to Japan via shipment by air?
Also, how will I be able to know that the package was shipped correctly?

I will make arrangements to make the payment as soon as I obtain evidence that the package was shipped.

Similar to you, I would like to process it as soon as possible.

Thank you for your assistance in this matter.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
I succeeded in contacting with the office in China and received the estimate.
I received the estimate not only for 640i series but also for the model number that you suggested.
Thank you for your kindness.
I appreciate you again.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
I was successful in contacting the office in China and received another estimate.
I received an estimate not only for 640i series, but also for the model number that you suggested.
I appreciate your kindness.
Once again, thank you.

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I'm relieved to hear that the item has arrived safely. Please tell me if you are looking for another item which I don't listed on eBay. I would like to help you find items.
I would like to build a good business partnership with you.

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I'm relieved to hear that the item has arrived safely. Please tell me if you are looking for any another items that I have not listed on eBay. I will be able to help you search for other items.
I would like to build a good business partnership with you.

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Thank you for your contact.
I feel assured to hear that the goods have been delivered safely.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us again.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I am relieved to hear that the package has been delivered safely.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.

元の翻訳
How do you do?
The product arrived today.
I like it as it is in a very good condition,
but 2 of the caps were damaged.
(I am attaching the image.)
Can you kindly compensate this?
I will look forward to your response.
Thank you.

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How do you do?
The product arrived today.
I like it as it is in very good condition,
but 2 of the cups were damaged.
(I am attaching a photo.)
Can you kindly compensate me for this?
I will look forward to your response.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
The product has not been arrived yet. The package from America should arrive in 10 days at the latest. There's a possibility that the product has been lost. Can you make a refund? I'm looking forward to your response.

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The product has not arrived yet. The packages from the U.S. should arrive within 10 days at the latest. There's a possibility that the product has been lost. Can you issue a refund? I'm looking forward to your response.

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The product has not arrive. Packages normally take about 10 days to arrive at the latest. I think that it might have been lost. Can you kindly issue a refund? I will look forward to your response.

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The product has not arrived. Packages normally take about 10 days to arrive at the latest. I think that it might have been lost. Can you kindly issue a refund? I will look forward to your response.

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I sent email to you on FEB 2nd, but I have not received your reply yet so I send again. Please until this weekend, please cancel the order via Paypal on 2015 JAN 6th and make a refund. I am waiting for your reply.

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I sent an email to you on Feb. 2nd, but since I have not received your reply yet I am sending it again. Please cancel the order, made via Paypal on Jan. 6, 2015, and issue a refund by this weekend. I am waiting for your reply.

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We could not take only 1 page of the history by some cause. we "corrected" it.

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For some reason, the history for only one page was not recorded properly. We updated the status to "completed" on our end.

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I ordered ABC through Paypal on December 21st, 2014. It seems to not be processed yet. In case of being on back order, when will it be shipped? I am looking forward to your reply.

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I ordered ABC through Paypal on December 21st, 2014. It does not seem to be processed yet. In case it is on back order, when will it be shipped? I am looking forward to your reply.