kai-miya — もらったレビュー

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I apologize for a late reply.
I have just paid for order of 8th August and 15th August today and I would like you to confirm this payment.

For order of 8th August , please use DHL.
For order of 15th August, please use FedEx.

Please ship the products ASAP.

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I apologize for a late payment.
I have just paid for order of 8th August and 15th August today and I would like you to confirm this payment.

For order of 8th August , please use DHL.
For order of 15th August, please use FedEx as usual.

Please ship the products ASAP.

元の翻訳
Dear Sir or Madam

I received the following notice from Amazon.co.uk today.

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I do really apologize for having put your item up for Amazon, which has no marketing permission in EEA.

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Dear Sir or Madam

I received the following notice from Amazon.co.uk today.

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Please accept our most sincere apologies for having listed your item, which has no marketing permission in EEA, for sale in Amazon.
We are terribly sorry.

元の翻訳
We received 3 packages out of 4.↵
We have not received 1 package, which is cable, because of no invoice and it is at customes waiting for the invoice.

Could you please send the invoice of this cable by e-mail?
The declared price is $299.

We can not use your products without this cable.

We are looking forward to your reply and the invoice soon.

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We received three packages out of the four you sent. However, we have not received one package which is the cable, and it is stuck at the customs because there's no invoice.

Could you please send an invoice only for this cable by e-mail?
The declared price is $299.

We can not use your products without this cable.

We are looking forward to your reply and the invoice soon.

元の翻訳
Could you please check it again?
It was 23kg, €80.65 last time.
But this time, it is 235kg and the fee is €967.5.
Why is it so expensive this time?

Anyway, please refund since the products have not been arrived to us yet.
We have paid high shipping cost.
You need to ship the products for certain and that is business manner.
We need you to solve the problem to continue our business.

We are looking forward to your reply soon.

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Could you please check it again?
It was 23kg, €80.65 last time by air.
But this time, it is 235kg and the fee is €967.5 by surface.
Why is it so expensive this time by surface which is slower than by air ?

Anyway, could you please refund since the products have not been arrived to us yet?
We have paid high shipping cost.
You have a responsibility to ship the products for certain and that is a business manner.
We would like to continue business with you after solving the problem.

We are looking forward to your reply soon.