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My Account page says that the status for order #001 is Complete. However I have not received a notification of shipment yet. Please let me know the tracking number is it is shipped.

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My Account page says that the status for order #001 is Complete. However I have not received a notification of shipment yet. Please let me know the tracking number once it is shipped.

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I think that this item is still not for sale in Japan

This wonderful item is the highest grade of safety for pregnant women and unborn children.

Just the other day, my friend encountered an accident.
She was pregnant. Because she wasn't wearing a seat belt, the shock from the accident killed the unborn baby.
Surely, if she had this item then the child would have been saved.
She is depressed and still can't get back on her feet.

I want to decrease the amount of women with the same thoughts as her.

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I think that this item is still not for sale in Japan

This wonderful item is the highest grade of safety for pregnant women and unborn children.

Just the other day, my friend got into a car accident.
She was pregnant. Because she wasn't wearing a seat belt, the shock from the accident killed the unborn baby.
Surely, if she had this item then the child would have been saved.
She is depressed and still can't get back on her feet.

I want to decrease the amount of women with the same thoughts as her.

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Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

My teacher's negotiations will be reached by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you were looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

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Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

According to the doctor, the baby should arrive by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait, but I can send it on Monday.

I know you are looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

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★Name
MARIN YAMAMOTO
★Height
151cm
★Date of Birth
1997/6/11
★Place of birth
MIE province
★Nick name
Marin
★Blood type
A
★Hobby
Painting
★Specialty
Dance
★Favorite artist/talent
Namie Amyuro、Katy Perry、May J

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★Name
MARIN YAMAMOTO
★Height
151cm
★Date of Birth
1997/6/11
★Place of birth
MIE province
★Nick name
Marin
★Blood type
A
★Hobby
Painting
★Specialty
Dance
★Favorite artist/entertainer
Namie Amyuro、Katy Perry、May J

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★Name
Yuuna Sekine
★Height
152cm
★DOB
09/28/1994
★Hometown
Saitama
★Nickname
Yu-nyan, Yuuna
★Blood type
B
★Hobby
Karaoke, shopping, movies, absolute hearing
★Special talent
Piano, balance ball
★Favourite talent
Girls' Generation
★Favourite artist/talent
Shota Shimizu

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★Name
Yuuna Sekine
★Height
152cm
★DOB
09/28/1994
★Hometown
Saitama
★Nickname
Yu-nyan, Yuuna
★Blood type
B
★Hobby
Karaoke, shopping, movies, perfect pitch
★Special talent
Piano, balance ball
★Favourite entertainer
Girls' Generation
★Favourite artist/entertainer
Shota Shimizu

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I am really happy that you can understand my enthusiasm.
''AOB'' is a abbreviation of ''xxxxx'', which is a group that discovers rare products around the world, and does business with customers that have a good sense of art and a creative mind.


I will add an URL of the group's site which does a good job of introducing the various businesses the group is involved in.

This site is online with the goal to give people information about what the group exactly does.

This is just one example of the products individual members handle in. I could keep on writing, so I'll keep it to this one example.

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I am really happy that you can understand my enthusiasm.
''AOB'' is an abbreviation of ''xxxxx'', which is a group that discovers rare products around the world, and does business with customers that have a good sense of art and a creative mind.


I will add a URL of the group's site which does a good job of introducing the various businesses the group is involved in.

This site is online with the goal to give people information about what the group does exactly .

This is just one example of the products individual members handle. I could keep on writing for a while, so I'll keep it to this one example.

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On June 16th, "The Ordinary General Meeting, Heisei 26" was held at Keio Plaza Hotel by Japan Congress Convention Bureau. Approved were the report on the business activities and the settlement of accounts, as well as the business plan in Heisei 26.

Chairman Kuniko Inoguchi expressed her aspiration that "the Olympic/Paralympic games as an opportunity to appeal Japan's innovation, advanced science and technology, Japanese culture, and traditions, is the world's largest MICE. In order to further develop the international convention/ the fields of MICE, JCCB will further enhance its roles.

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On June 16th, "The 2014 Annual General Meeting" was held at Keio Plaza Hotel by the Japan Congress Convention Bureau. The report on the business activities and the settlement of accounts were approved, as well as the business plan for 2014.

Chairman Kuniko Inoguchi expressed her aspirations that, "the Olympic/Paralympic games is an opportunity to show off Japan's innovation, advanced science and technology, Japanese culture, and traditions, and the world's largest MICE. In order to further develop the international convention, the fields of MICE and JCCB will further enhance its roles."

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Thank you for your message.
Although we are not able to take the photos of the item being kept in the warehouse, the item comes with the flower prints, ribbons, metal mascots attached on the ears aadn soles.
◆Size: Approximately 170 x 150 x 75 mm
◆Features: made with boa, attached metal mascots

Please also be informed that this item has already been shipped under the following tracking number:
RR906333451JP
It should be before long to receive your item as it was shipped via EMS.

Certainly.
We will reship the item.
Thank you for your kind regards.

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Thank you for your message.
Although we are not able to take the photos of the item being kept in the warehouse, the item comes with the flower prints, ribbons, metal mascots attached on the ears and soles.
◆Size: Approximately 170 x 150 x 75 mm
◆Features: made with boa, attached metal mascots

Please also be informed that this item has already been shipped under the following tracking number:
RR906333451JP
It should be before long to receive your item as it was shipped via EMS.

Certainly.
We will reship the item.
Thank you for your kind regards.