YOSHI (ierock) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I think that we need writing ability for product titles and descriptions. I would like to repeat that the thing for which you need your most efforts is seeking a Japanese supplier.
Many people who made contracts with me left from me without saying anything. I think that you understand this job if you do not ask me anything.
Did you understand every class without asking your professors?
Now, I have a request to you. Please find an item sold through e-bay in a Japanese e-commerce site.

修正後
I think that we need writing ability for product titles and descriptions. I would like to repeat that the thing for which you need your most efforts is seeking a Japanese supplier.
Many people who have made contracts with me left without saying anything to me. I think that you understand this job if you do not ask me anything.
Did you understand every class without asking your professors?
Now, I have a request to you. Please find an item sold through eBay in a Japanese e-commerce site.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your clarification!!
This product includes 1 stick with 3.6 meter long.

Please think about buying it!

Thank you very much!!

修正後
Thank you for your clarification!!
Each piece of this product is 3.6 meter long.

Please think about buying it!

Thank you very much!!

元の翻訳
Could you kindly tell me product availability and supply status of the order?
I would like to receiver the item as soon as possible.
Appreciate if you can tell me if there is any revision.

修正後
Could you kindly tell me the product availability and supply status of the order?
I would like to receive the item as soon as possible.
I would appreciate it if you could tell me if there are any changes made.

元の翻訳
yamahaya88102012様,

こんにちは、あなたのケーブルはどれくらいの長さですか？ペアでしょうか？メーターではどれくらいの長さですか？

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yamahaya88102012様,

こんにちは、あなたのケーブルはどれくらいの長さですか？　ペアでしょうか？　メーターではどれくらいの長さですか？　メーカーは？

- hifi2000andreas
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