ichiro009 (ichiro009) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I am terribly sorry but I would like to cancel it and get refund because I was looking for the shop has the item and deliver it immediately.

Again I am sorry about this.

If you accept my cancellation, I will rate you high.

Thank you.

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I am terribly sorry but I would like to cancel my order and get refund because I've found the shop that has the item and can deliver it immediately.

Again I am very sorry.

If you accept my cancellation, I will rate you high.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Since I have not received reply from you yet, I am writing this email.

I understand that you need to take some times to answer a number of my questions, however if it is possible , I would like to have answers from simple questions of those first.

As we can have more smooth exchange, we can sell those products early.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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Since I have not received a reply from you yet, I am writing this email.

I understand that you need to take some time to answer my several questions, however if it is possible , I would like to have answers of simple questions of them first.

As we can have more smooth exchange, we can sell those products early.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your cooperation always.

Nowadays, We have strong request from our client that Epithese has a capability for Urinating outdoors.

By the way, is it possible for you to create original products?

Perhaps, FTM from all over the world have same request.

From next transaction, Mr A will be in charge of purchasing.

Please kindly continue to give us 10 & discount with Mr A.

We would like to have an exclusive distribution rights for your products in Japan.

Once sales quantity gets increased, we would like you to consider it.

We are looking forward to receive letters and pictures for our net shop.

Best Regards,

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Thank you for your cooperation always.

Nowadays, We have got a strong demand from our client for combination types of epithesis that has a capability of urinating outdoors.

By the way, is it possible for you to create original products?

Perhaps, FTM from all over the world have same request.

From next transaction, Mr A will be in charge of purchasing.

Please kindly continue to give us 10 % discount with Mr A.

Also, we would like to have an exclusive distribution rights for your products in Japan.

Once sales quantity gets increased, we would like you to consider it.

We are looking forward to receiving letters and pictures for our internet shop.

Best Regards,

元の翻訳
If there are any doubt of my way of thinking, please don't hesitate to say anything to me. And please kindly send replay with details about my questions.

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If there are any doubts of my way of thinking, please don't hesitate to say anything to me. And please kindly send your replys with details about my questions.