Kanno Hayato (hayatooooooo) — もらったレビュー

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１．貴方は封筒配達に金額をいくらと書き込みましたか？
２．包みや封筒は透けて見えますか、それとも見えませんか？
箱は段ボール箱を使用しています。箱に貼り付ける書類にすべて記載しています。段ボールのサイズは23cm×17cm×17cmです。

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１．貴方は封筒配達にどの程度書き込みましたか？
２．包みや封筒は透けて見えますか、それとも見えませんか？
箱は段ボール箱を使用しています。箱に貼り付ける書類にすべて記載しています。段ボールのサイズは23cm×17cm×17cmです。

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私たちとコンタクトを取ってくださりありがとうございます。

貴方がご存知の通り、ここAmazonではとても慎重にお客様のセキュリティを扱っています。貴方と貴方のお客様を守るために、私たちが貴方の登録を完了させる前により多くの情報を提供していただく必要があります。登録されたemailアドレスのアカウントから、emailでご返事ください。

・全ての会社の実質的な所有者もしくは株主の名前、そして、彼らの会社の株式保有比率を列挙してください。

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私たちとコンタクトを取ってくださりありがとうございます。

貴方がご存知の通り、ここAmazonではとても慎重にお客様のセキュリティを扱っています。貴方と貴方のお客様を守るために、私たちが貴方の登録を完了させる前により多くの情報を提供していただく必要があります。登録されたemailアドレスのアカウントから、emailでご返事ください。

・御社の実質的な所有者もしくは株主様全員のお名前、またその方々が保有している御社の株式の比率を列挙して頂けますでしょうか。

元の翻訳
あいにく私たちは貴方が連絡を取るために使用してきたe-mailアドレスと登録した販売アカウントが違うため、現在問い合わせを詳細に検討することができません。それゆえ、誠に恐れ入りますが貴方の販売アカウント⚪︎⚪︎と関連させたe-mailアドレスから私たちにご返信いただくようお願い致します。

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あいにく私たちは貴方が連絡を取るために使用してきたe-mailアドレスと登録した販売アカウントが違うため、現在問い合わせを詳細に検討することができません。それゆえ、誠に恐れ入りますが貴方の販売アカウント⚪︎⚪︎と関連させたe-mailアドレスから私たちにご返信いただくようお願い致します。↵

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あいにく私たちは貴方が連絡を取るために使用してきたe-mailアドレスと登録した販売アカウントが違うため、現在問い合わせを詳細に検討することができません。それゆえ、誠に恐れ入りますが貴方の販売アカウント⚪︎⚪︎と関連させたe-mailアドレスから私たちにご返信いただくようお願い致します。

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あいにく私たちは貴方が連絡を取るために使用してきたe-mailアドレスと登録した販売アカウントが違うため、現在問い合わせを処理することができません。それゆえ、誠に恐れ入りますが貴方の販売アカウント⚪︎⚪︎と関連させたe-mailアドレスから私たちにご返信いただくようお願い致します。

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We are allowed to buy from you several times.
This time also I would like to buy ◯ now exhibiting.
Could you sell for me at USD 750.00 in postage to Japan?
We have been the also allowed to buy at this price last time.
Also how many stocks left are there?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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I have purchased from you many times before.
I would like to buy the ◯ that is on display again this time.
Can you sell it to me for USD $750.00, including postage, to Japan?
It was purchased at this price last time as well.
Also, how many are left in stock?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Merci de l'envoyer aux bagages rapidement.
Cependant, il ne peut pas importé parce que le seul document manque.

La facture et l'invoice sont coincé sur les bagages 「No.9 ey00000000000 」est manquant.

Je suis désolé, mais pourriez-vous adressé à moi joint document par e-mail?

Si vous être en mesure de le faire, je vous envoie les documents immédiatement société de livraison, et puis il va résoudre le problème.

Je me recommande à votre bienveillance.

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Merci d'avoir envoyé le colis rapidement.
Cependant, l'importation n'est toujours pas faite à cause d'un document manquant.

Il nous manque la facture et l'invoice qui doivent être collés sur le colis 「No.9 ey00000000000」.

Pourriez-vous me les envoyer en fichier joint par e-mail?

Dès que je les aurai, je les enverrai immédiatement à la société de livraison, et le problème sera réglé.

Merci d'avance.

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アマゾンに認証された数分後に、私は注文をキャンセルしました。
私に私の注文が正しくキャンセルされたことを知らせてくださりありがとうございました！

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私はアマゾンで注文を確定した数分後に、注文をキャンセルしました。
商品が無事にキャンセルされていることを確認していただき、ありがとうございました！

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mo109011

Shareholders holding more than 100 stocks are to be presented an eBook coupon available for buying e-books sold on "eBookJapan".
They are going to insert character of masterpiece mangas into it so that they can enjoy collecting them each year.

WonderCorporation
This is the company expanding the entertainment specialty store "WonderGOO" mainly in Kanto region in Japan.
They sell and buy goods with a focus on game software, music and video software, DVD, and books.

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mo109011

Shareholders holding 100 or more stocks are to be presented an eBook coupon available for buying e-books sold on "eBookJapan".
They are going to insert character of masterpiece mangas into it so that they can enjoy collecting them each year.

WonderCorporation
This is the company expanding the entertainment specialty store "WonderGOO" mainly in Kanto region in Japan.
They sell and buy goods with a focus on game software, music and video software, DVD, and books.

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mo109010

Shareholder holding more than 100 stocks: one complimentary ticket for a stockholder for reserved infield seat(A)
Shareholder holding more than 300 stocks: two complimentary ticket for a stockholder for reserved infield seat(A)

info.finance.yahoo.co.jp
eBookJapan
They have run distributing e-books on the website "eBookJapan" as their main business.
They have dealt with almost one hundred sixty thousand books, the number of manga works of which is the best of all others in this field.
They have been the leading company in this world as a pioneer of e-book business, and developed into the largest e-book sale website in Japan.
eBook coupon available for buying e-books sold on "eBookJapan".

The following is the content of a complimentary ticket for a stockholder.

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mo109010

Shareholder holding 100 or more stocks: one complimentary ticket for a stockholder for reserved infield seat(A)
Shareholder holding 300 or more stocks: two complimentary tickets for a stockholder for reserved infield seat(A)

info.finance.yahoo.co.jp
eBookJapan
They have run distributing e-books on the website "eBookJapan" as their main business.
They have dealt with almost one hundred sixty thousand books, the number of manga works of which is the best of all others in this field.
They have been the leading company in this world as a pioneer of e-book business, and developed into the largest e-book sale website in Japan.
eBook coupon available for buying e-books sold on "eBookJapan".

The following is the content of the stockholder incentives.

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mo109009

They have competed in the administration of one of the professional baseball teams "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at the end of 2011.
They have expanded their management resources into "Platform business" in addition to "Social Game business", and they are aiming at the No.1 Social Entertainment Platform.
complimentary ticket for a stockholder( the official baseball game watching tickets for "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" of Yokohama Stadium )

The following is content of complimentary goods for shareholder
Those who have their shares will be presented "Complimentary goods for shareholder", which can be used for the official baseball game watching which Yokohama DeNA BayStars sponsor at the Yokohama Stadium.

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mo109009

They have competed in the administration of one of the professional baseball teams "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at the end of 2011.
They have expanded their management resources into "Platform business" in addition to "Social Game business", and they are aiming to be the No.1 Social Entertainment Platform.
Complimentary ticket for a stockholder (the official baseball game watching tickets for "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at Yokohama Stadium)

The following is a content of complimentary goods for shareholder.
Those who have their shares will be presented "Complimentary goods for shareholder", which can be used for the official baseball game watching which Yokohama DeNA BayStars sponsor at the Yokohama Stadium.

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mo109005

In past days, they had focused on their main business on running "Vector" which is the largest software downloading website in Japan. However, they are now concentrating on their core business on offering and running online games.
The ticket available for online games of 10,000 yen

The following is the content of complimentary goods for shareholder
Shareholders holding more than 100 stocks are to be equally presented the ticket available for online games for P.C. of 10,000 yen.
(The tickets subject to both browser game service and client-server model online game service)

TOEI ANIMATION CO., LTD.

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mo109005

In past, they had focused on their main business on running "Vector" which is the largest software downloading website in Japan. However, they are now concentrating on their core business on offering and running online games.
10,000 yen worth of online games use ticket

The following is the content of complimentary goods for shareholders.
Shareholders holding more than 100 stocks are to be equally presented 10,000 yen.worth of ticket available for P.C. online games use.
(The tickets apply to both the browser game service and client-server model online game service)

TOEI ANIMATION CO., LTD.

元の翻訳
Complimentary goods for shareholder Handbook 2013-2014

Because there are many people who buy stocks in order to get shareholder incentives, a lot of books introducing complimentary goods for shareholder are published.

・Complimentary goods for shareholder in America (example)
Complimentary goods for shareholder of Starbucks Corporation, which is based on Seattle, are gift certificates of Starbucks.

・What are complimentary goods for shareholder in Japan?
Mandarake
It is the largest specialty store in used-books in Japan which deals with manga and secondhand books. It also runs sales for original anime pictures and toys.

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Complimentary goods for shareholder Handbook 2013-2014

Because there are many people who buy stocks in order to get shareholder incentives, a lot of books introducing complimentary goods for shareholder are published.

・Complimentary goods for shareholders in America (example)
Complimentary goods for shareholders of Starbucks Corporation, which is based in Seattle, are gift certificates of Starbucks.

・What are complimentary goods for shareholders in Japan?
Mandarake
It is the largest specialty store in used-books in Japan which deals with manga and used books. It also runs sales for original anime pictures and toys.

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9514
こんにちは。もうしわけありませんが、請求書を同封しないで、これは関税がかからないようにするためのプレゼントであることを示してください。お願いします。

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9514
こんにちは。もうしわけありませんが、請求書を同封しないで、これは関税がかからないようにするためのプレゼントであることを示してください。お願いします。↵
→関税がかからないように、請求書は同封せず贈り物であることを明示してください。よろしくお願いします。↵
または、請求書は同封せず贈り物であることを明示し、関税がかからないようにしてください。よろしくお願いします。↵
（pour以下は請求書・プレゼントの両方にかかっています）

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①I received the heater yesterday.
I tried to use it in my car right now. Then it didn't work suddenly in about one minute. I guess that the cigarette lighter socket in my car was broken because of excess voltage.
I will try to repair the cigarette lighter socket in my car by exchanging the fuse, and so on. However I would like you to ask how you cope with this item. I hope your repayment.

②Could you send the parcels not for Tanaka Kenta who paid for them, but for Yoshida Yuriko?
③I don't care about the any way you send them, so send them to Japan in a cheaper and faster way.

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①I received the heater yesterday.
I tried to use it in my car right away. Then it suddenly stopped working after about one minute. Maybe it was due to excess voltage but the cigarette lighter socket in my car is now broken.
I will try to repair the cigarette lighter socket in my car by exchanging the fuse. However I would like you to ask how you plan to respond regarding this item. I hope for a refund.

②Could you send the parcels not to Tanaka Kenta who paid for them, but to Yoshida Yuriko?
③I don't mind how you send them, so please send them to Japan in a cheaper and faster way.

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The old couple who had lived in the neighborhood for 60 years entered into a home for the aged. The remained house and land were sold to a ready-built house. Just after they began to move there, demolition work was started and a vacant lot appeared in an instant. I'll record the dismantle, construction, and completion from the beginning to end.
The dismantle work started. No more than one week hadn't passed yet after they left.
It was needed only 5 days to make the property where they had lived for more than 60 years vacate.
When a heavy machine's arm was on the house's roof, it was destroyed easily just like a house of paper.
A wall was built in the center of the ground. It seems that two houses are to be built.

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The old couple who had lived in the neighborhood for 60 years moved into a home for the aged. The house and the land that were left behind were sold to a ready-built house maker. Just after they moved out, demolition work was started and a vacant lot appeared in an instant. I'll record the dismantle, construction, and completion from the beginning to end.
The dismantle work started. No more than one week had passed after the old couple left.
It took only 5 days to turn the place into a vacant lot from the place where they lived for 60 years.
When a heavy-duty vehicle's arm caught onto the roof of the house, it was destroyed easily just like a house made of paper.
A wall was built in the center of the empty lot. It seems that two houses are to be built.

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We have inventories as follows and you are able to order them.
You can pay through paypal. Currency of payment are fixed to Yen.
We can send them to both Poland and America by EMS.
The postage depends on their weight.
From about 3,000-5,000 yen payment of postage would be needed.
In addition, you may be needed to pay for their tariffs.
Because the way of order doesn't correspond to shipping to foreign countries by means of website, please contact with us by replying this E-mail with the necessary information below.
After confirming, we will tell you the price of goods, the postage, and the necessary information for the payment of paypal.
Confirming your payment, we will send goods.

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We have the following items available in stock and you are able to order them.
You can pay through paypal. Currency of payment are fixed to Yen.
We can send them to both Poland and America by EMS.
The postage depends on their weight.
From about 3,000-5,000 yen would be needed for the postage.
In addition, you may need to pay for the custom duties in your country.
Because the way of order doesn't correspond to shipping to foreign countries by means of website, please contact with us by replying this E-mail with the necessary information below.
After confirming, we will tell you the price of goods, the postage, and the necessary information for the payment of paypal.
Confirming your payment, we will send goods.

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al73405

Insert a puff sleeve T-shirt into a skirt arranged like a corset!

We have jumper skirts which costs ¥3,990 designed by WEGO.
Enjoy a little rock style, fitting with a pair of platform rubber sole.
Amo's plain clothes are full of pasrtel colors which have attracted a lot of girls oriented to Harajuku! They have an attractive figure and style as if you wewe like a doll!

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al73405

A puff-sleeved T-shirt is inserted into a skirt and arranged like a corset.

The jumper skirt is from WEGO and sells for ¥3,990.
It's matched with a pair of thick-rubber-sole shoes for a bit of a rock style.
Amo's clothes are full of pastel colors that are loved by many girls whole like Harajuku style, creating a figure and style just like that of a doll.