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日本語

mo109009

2011年末にプロ野球球団「横浜DeNAベイスターズ」の運営に参入。
近年は「ソーシャルゲーム事業」の他に「プラットフォーム事業」も展開し、No.１ソーシャルエンターテインメントプラットフォームを目指している。
株主優待証（横浜スタジアムの「横浜ＤｅＮＡベイスターズ」野球公式戦観戦）


以下、株主優待の内容
横浜DeNAベイスターズが横浜スタジアムで主催するプロ野球公式戦の観戦に利用できる「株主優待証」を贈呈。

英語

mo109009

They have competed in the administration of one of the professional baseball teams "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at the end of 2011.
They have expanded their management resources into "Platform business" in addition to "Social Game business", and they are aiming at the No.1 Social Entertainment Platform.
complimentary ticket for a stockholder( the official baseball game watching tickets for "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" of Yokohama Stadium )

The following is content of complimentary goods for shareholder
Those who have their shares will be presented "Complimentary goods for shareholder", which can be used for the official baseball game watching which Yokohama DeNA BayStars sponsor at the Yokohama Stadium.

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mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/25 19:07:36

元の翻訳
mo109009

They have competed in the administration of one of the professional baseball teams "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at the end of 2011.
They have expanded their management resources into "Platform business" in addition to "Social Game business", and they are aiming at the No.1 Social Entertainment Platform.
complimentary ticket for a stockholder( the official baseball game watching tickets for "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" of Yokohama Stadium )

The following is content of complimentary goods for shareholder
Those who have their shares will be presented "Complimentary goods for shareholder", which can be used for the official baseball game watching which Yokohama DeNA BayStars sponsor at the Yokohama Stadium.

修正後
mo109009

They have competed in the administration of one of the professional baseball teams "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at the end of 2011.
They have expanded their management resources into "Platform business" in addition to "Social Game business", and they are aiming to be the No.1 Social Entertainment Platform.
Complimentary ticket for a stockholder (the official baseball game watching tickets for "Yokohama DeNA BayStars" at Yokohama Stadium)

The following is a content of complimentary goods for shareholder.
Those who have their shares will be presented "Complimentary goods for shareholder", which can be used for the official baseball game watching which Yokohama DeNA BayStars sponsor at the Yokohama Stadium.

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