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元の翻訳
The customer would like to purchase the cheaper one, so please advice the price that we can offer.

If we cannot match other manufacturer's price, please let us know as soon as possible. The deadline of the manufacturers' order is coming up soon.

Is it ok to resell the products that we ordered for Osaka store to our Tokyo store? The products arrived earlier than expected and we cannot pay for it soon.

Since we are paying more, could you give some discount? We will make payment soon.

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The customer would like to purchase the cheaper one, so please advice the price that we can offer.

If we cannot match other manufacturers' price, please let us know as soon as possible. The deadline of the manufacturers' order is coming up soon.

Is it ok to resell the products that we ordered for our Osaka store to our Tokyo store? The products arrived earlier than expected and we cannot pay for it soon.

Since we are paying more, could you give some discounts? We will make a payment soon.

元の翻訳
正直言って、この腕時計は何かが壊れています。

写真を参照の上、返金をお願いします。

クロノグラフを開始したとたん、秒針が落ちました。

至急返信をください。

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正直言って、この腕時計は何かが壊れています。

何か起こっているのかご覧ください。下記の写真を参照の上、返金をお願いします。

クロノグラフを開始したとたん、秒針が落ちました。

至急ご意見をください。

元の翻訳
We have ⚪︎⚪︎newly in stock.
It has been maintained and works well.
We do not see any big scratch.

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We have ⚪︎⚪︎newly in stock.
It has been maintained and works well. Please check its exterior in the photo.
We do not see any big scratch.

元の翻訳
Is it really Responsive?
Even when I make the browser narrower, the Pop up does not change its with.

Also, it will be better to be able to show videos such as YouTube.

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Is it really Responsive?
Even when I make the browser narrower, the Pop up does not change its width.

Also, it will be better to be able to show videos such as YouTube.

元の翻訳
I have contacted EMS yesterday and today.
Plus, sent a request for investigation.
I have not received any answer from your country yet.

However, from what we discovered, the goods are still over there.

Could you let the delivery post office know of the above?

In case the goods get returned to us, there is no other way but to repost.

if so, we need to charge shipping cost.

We hope that you will be able to receive the parcel.

I will let you know as soon as we have further information.

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I contacted EMS yesterday and today.
And I submitted a request for investigation.
I have not received any answers from your country yet.

However, what we discovered is the goods are still over there.

Could you let the delivery post office know the information above?

In case the goods get returned to us, there is no other way but to send it again.

If so, we need to charge you another shipping cost.

We hope that you will be able to receive the parcel.

I will let you know as soon as we have further information.