e.m. (emrt) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I have asked Mr./Ms. () to refund $100 to you for me.
Please kindly receive.

In the meanwhile, I will submitted a request of changing evaluation.

Sorry to trouble you, but please kindly change the evaluation.

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I have asked Mr./Ms. () to refund $100 to you for me.
Please kindly accept it.

In the meanwhile, I submit a request of changing evaluation.

Sorry to trouble you, but please kindly change the evaluation.

元の翻訳
If I purchase today, when would I receive the item?
I would like to receive it within about a week, so I wonder if you could ship it as early as possible.
I would be happy to pay any additional fee for fast delivery.

Would I be able to receive the item within 4-7 days by EMS?

Thank you and best regards.

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If I purchased the item today, when would I receive the item?
I would like to receive it within a week or so, so I wonder if you could ship it via express shipment option.
I would be happy to pay any additional fee for fast delivery.

Would I be able to receive the item within 4-7 days by EMS?

Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
I will make the item temporarily available for purchase.

Usually I cannot send it to Europe, as the manufacturer would claim.

The item cannot be purchased again tomorrow, so please kindly purchase it as soon as possible.

This is the address.

Thank you very much for contacting me many times.

If there is xx you want in the future, please feel free to contact me and I will be able to look for it for you.

修正後
I will make the item temporarily available for purchase.

Usually I cannot send it to Europe, as the manufacturer would claim.

The item will be unavailable for purchase again tomorrow, so please kindly purchase it as soon as possible.

Here is the address.

Thank you very much for contacting me many times.

If there is xx you want in the future, please feel free to contact me and I will be able to look for it for you.

元の翻訳
These five tracking numbers were all for the items ordered on July 18th.
They didn't include a single item ordered on July 24th.
Please kindly investigate further.

There is new orders for today. Please find the attached order sheets.
I will cancel the order made on the 24th and will include it in today's order.
Please kindly despatch the ordered items to my address in Florida.

When can you despatch A?
When will B and C be on sale?

I have made the payment for the purchase made last month.
Since A hasn't arrived me yet, I haven't completed the payment for it.

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These five tracking numbers were all for the items ordered on July 18th.
They didn't include a single item ordered on July 24th.
Please kindly investigate further.

There is new orders [subject-verb agreement] for today. Please find the attached order sheets.
I will cancel the order made on the 24th and will include it in today's order.
Please kindly despatch the ordered items to my address in Florida.

When can you despatch A?
When will B and C be on sale?

I have made the payment for the purchase made last month.
Since A hasn't arrived yet, I haven't completed the payment for it.