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Thank you for the message.
We are terribly sorry for keeping you waiting for a very long time.
The following is the tracking number.
Please confirm it.


Thank you for the message.
About a month has passed since we made a shipment to Brazil. Has the item not been arrived yet?
We also confirm the delivery statement.
We apologize for this inconvenience.

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Thank you for the message.
We are terribly sorry for keeping you waiting for a very long time.
Provided below is the tracking number.
Please confirm it.


Thank you for the message.
About a month has passed since we made a shipment to Brazil. Has the item not been arrived yet?
We will also check the shipment status from one end.
We apologize for the inconvenience.

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Thank you for inquiry.
I am afraid that the time of the restock is unknown according to the wholesaler.
Though the ordinary wholesaler seems to have the stock, the retail price is the regular price so I cannot sell it to you at the reduced price.
When I get the information of restock from our wholesaler, I will let you know.

Thank you for informing me of receiving the item.
I am glad that you like it since I also love the crane pattern design.
I am looking forward to your next order.
Please take care of yourself.

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Thank you for inquiry.
I am afraid that the time of the restock is unknown according to the wholesaler.
Though the ordinary retailer seems to have the stock, the retail price is the regular price so I cannot sell it to you at the reduced price.
When I get the information of restock from our wholesaler, I will let you know.

Thank you for informing me of receiving the item.
I am glad that you like it since I also love the crane pattern design.
I am looking forward to your next order.
Please take care of yourself.

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<Precious Experience>
As my movie buff son desired, I participated in the tour with him. My trip to Korea is always for entertainment. This time, I was looking forward to “Sachoom”, whose dance is magnificent so that I was reluctant to join in fact.
On the day, we were taken from our hotel to the meeting place Lotte Hotel, which was pretty helpful. First, we visited the war memorial museum. The buildings were majestic and stately, including videos worth watching. Though there were a lot of place to see, the time of visit was limited so I felt a little unsatisfied. The lunch, bulgogi couldn’t have been better. ↵

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<Precious Experience>
As my movie buff son desired, I participated in the tour with him. My trip to Korea is always for entertainments. This time, I was looking forward to watching “Sachoom”, whose dance is magnificent, so I was reluctant to join the tour in fact.
On that day, the courtesy bus took us to the meeting place Lotte Hotel from our hotel, so it was pretty helpful. First, we visited the war memorial museum. The buildings were majestic and stately, and screened images were worth a watch. I was a little unsatisfied becouse we only have short time to look around even though there were a lot of places to see. The lunch, bulgogi couldn’t have been better.

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Further, we will let you know your ID and Password when the inspection application is passed safely.
*The contact for the result of the inspection will be after 1-3 business days.

We are sorry to give you trouble, but when the application is not accepted, we will inform you that with the unsatisfactory points.
When all of the points are solved, the membership registration will be completed.
Please be sure to understand that.

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Further, we will let you know of your ID and Password when your review application is passed without problems.
*The contact for the result of the inspection will be after 1-3 business days.

We are sorry to give you trouble, but when the application is not accepted, we will inform you that with the unsatisfactory points.
When all of the points are solved, the membership registration will be completed.
Please be sure to understand that.

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*Open / Curtain time may be changed.

★Ticket fee
Premium Seat: 21,800 yen (include tax) *Fun club members, a-ticket only
S general reserved seat (with a penlight): 10,000 yen (include tax) *Fun club members, a-ticket only
S sitting reserved seat (with a penlight): 10,000 yen(include tax) *Fun club members, a-ticket only
S sitting reserved seat: 9,000 yen(include tax) *Fun club members, a-ticket only
S general reserved seat: 9,000 yen (include tax)

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*Open / Curtain time may be changed.

★Ticket fee
Premium Seat: 21,800 yen (include tax) *Fan club members, a-ticket only
S general reserved seat (with a penlight): 10,000 yen (include tax) *Fan club members, a-ticket only
S seating reserved seat (with a penlight): 10,000 yen(include tax) *Fan club members, a-ticket only
S seating reserved seat: 9,000 yen(include tax) *Fan club members, a-ticket only
S general reserved seat: 9,000 yen (include tax)

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I have a question to Kory. If I ask you to make a smiling baby “kit by Crystal”, how much will it cost including shipping fee to Japan? I would like its paint to be like a kid in the 1st picture and hair style to be a kid in the 2nd. The color of hair will be dark brown. Also, it would be nice if 2 sets of pink costumes are included. I need a magnetic pacifier, too. I also have some kids to ask you to deal with, but currently I need this kid in a hurry. I am sorry to ask you all the time.

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I have a question for Kory. If I ask you to make a smiling baby “kit by Crystal”, how much will it cost including shipping fee to Japan? I would like the paint to be like the child in the 1st picture and the hair style to be like the child in the 2nd. I would like the hair color to be dark brown. Also, it would be nice if 2 sets of pink costumes are included. I need a magnetic pacifier too. There is other children I would like to request but currently I need this child in a hurry. I am sorry to ask you questions all the time.

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There was a massage from the post office right now.

3 cases are possible to cause the issue.
1. Due to the custom duty that I told you a while ago.
However, they said this case seldom happens.
The post office handling this issue has never experienced such a case.

2. Due to wrong declaration about weight.
However, it turned out to be no error when we confirmed the post office.

3. Due to a false accusation.
Some countries may charge high price which never costs. Unfortunately there were the similar cases in Singapore.

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There was a massage [spelling] from the post office right now.

3 cases are possible to cause the issue [?].
1. Due to the custom duty that I told you a while ago [incomplete sentence].
However, they said this case seldom happens.
The post office handling this issue has never experienced such a case.

2. Due to wrong declaration about weight [incomplete sentence].
However, it turned out to be no error when we confirmed the post office [?].

3. Due to a false accusation [incomplete sentence].
Some countries may charge a high price which never costs. Unfortunately there have been similar cases in Singapore.

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Thank you for contacting me.
Since I had made a shipment on January 18th through the air mail of Japan Postal Service (without tracking number), so the item was supposed to be delivered to you by January 28th. However, the fact that the item has not arrived yet is because the Post office may have lost them or the item may have been confiscated in the custom house. I am very sorry to bother you, but I will send the same item through the air mail (with tracking number) again. When I completed the sending procedure, I will inform you the tracking number. Please be sure to wait for a while.

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Thank you for contacting me.
Since I have shipped the item on January 18th through the air mail of Japan Postal Service (without tracking number), so the item was supposed to be delivered to you around January 28th. However, the fact that the item has not arrived yet is because the Post office may have lost them or the item may have been confiscated in the custom house. I am very sorry to bother you, but I will send the same item through the air mail (with tracking number) again. When I completed the shipment procedure, I will inform you of the tracking number. Please be sure to wait for a while.

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The budget is around $200.00 at most. Please complete the work within this budget. We do not have specific image of the logo design so that we hope “trendy style” one considering the tone and the spelling of our name if possible. We like round-shape design, but it is all right for the lettering-taste design. Is it difficult to make as you like? If you can, we would like you to create 2 kinds of logo and we choose one or revise. How can we request officially? I would like to ask you soon.

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The budget is around $200.00 at most. Please complete the work within this budget. We do not have specific image of the logo design so that we hope “trendy style” one considering the tone and the spelling of our name if possible. We like round-shape design, but it is all right for the design with lettering-type. Is it difficult for you to work on it if we leave it all to you? If you can, we would like you to create 2 kinds of logo so that we can choose one or have it revised. How can we place official order? We would like to ask you soon.

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Hello.
Thank you for your continuous support.
Have you found out the result of tracking missing items?
I am sorry to bother you,
please let me know.
Thank you.

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Hello.
Thank you for your continuous support.
Have you found out the result of tracking missing items?
I am sorry to bother you,
Please let me know.
Thank you.

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When applying please write how fast can you make tools which can extract ASIN to refer. (e.g., 3000/hr)

Also, we can consult you about the reward, so if you are not satisfied with the amount of payment which I show, let me know your desired amount.
Those who have an experience to create such tools are preferable, but at first, I expect the applicants who can consult us with skype or email in detail before creating tools.

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It would help me if you can indicate how fast you can make tools for extracting ASIN, when you submit your application. (e.g., 3000/hr)

Also, the compensation will be negotiable, so, you may give me your figures before the commencement of your employment, in case you are not satisfied with the amount which I will give you.
although we prefer someone with experience of creating those tools are preferable, but at we are looking forward for hearing from someone whom we can discuss the details via Skype or email before the creation if the tool.

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This time, I have purchased “DVD GIFT”. I am really sorry to bother you, but I would like to return the item because it is suspected that this DVD is unauthorized one which violates the Copyright Protection. I apologize for this inconvenience, but I would like you to refund for the item. Can you issue the label for return? Also, please let me know the address to send it back. Thank you for your corporation.

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This time, I have purchased “DVD GIFT”. I am really sorry to bother you, but I would like to return the item because it is suspected that this DVD is an unauthorized one which violates the Copyright Protection. I apologize for this inconvenience, but I would like you to refund for the item. Can you issue a return label? Also, please let me know the address to send it back to. Thank you for your corporation.

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鈴木様
早急なご返事ありがとうございます。
発注シートの領収書と先払いのコピーを確認しました。

この製品が４月末の発送に間に合わせるのに、今週に製造を始めるという旨、ご承知おきください。

重ねましてありがとうございました。
敬具
Filomena

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鈴木様
早急なご返事ありがとうございます。
発注シートの領収書と先払いのコピーを確認しました。

この製品の４月末の発送に間に合うように、今週に製造を始めるという旨、ご承知おきください。

重ねましてありがとうございました。
敬具
Filomena

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The custom duty check is unfair and very wired system.
I can’t make a shipment without writing the contents of the package and price in detail, so it is difficult for me to ship the item stating only “gift”.
I stated a gift on the check of the document for the delivery, not a commercial item, though.

Do you send me the comic in French? Then I want ○!
I like both the picture and story by the author because they’re cute.
Though I’ve read the comic in English, but never read in French.

For the strategy for the customhouse, I will state the price of the retailed price of ◇ on the invoice, not the bid price.
Be sure to understand that the custom duty should be paid by the buyer. ↵

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The customs checking system is such an unfair and weird system.
I can’t make a shipment without writing the contents of the package and price in detail, so it is difficult for me to ship the item by only stating it as a “gift”.
On the other hand, I always send check documents as gifts instead of as a commercial item.

Are you going to send me a French comic book? Then I want ○!
I like both the picture and story by the author because they’re cute.
Though I’ve read English comics before, I've never read French ones in the past.

To avoid problems with customs, I will state the retail price of the ◇ on the invoice, not the bid price.
Please understand this because custom fees must be paid by the buyer.

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How to use the fountain pen
When you use a fountain pen after purchase, fill the pen with the special ink. When you insert the cartridge for the first time, remove the pile and direct the nib downward, slowly turn it right and insert the cartridge in depth until the stainless ball at the edge falls into the ink.
From the next time, direct the nib upward and insert it. As for the cartridge, use the platinum cartridge ink SPSQ-400 ( 10 per one box ) or SPN-100A ( 2 per one box).↵

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How to use the fountain pen
Upon use of the fountain pen after purchase, enter the attached ink to the pen. When you insert the cartridge for the first time, remove the barrel and direct the nib downward, slowly turn the ink cartridge to the right and insert deeply until the stainless ball at the edge falls into the ink. Wait until the ink infiltrates and you can write in a smooth fashion.
From the next time, direct the nib upward and insert it. As for the cartridge, use the platinum cartridge ink SPSQ-400 ( 10 per one box ) or SPN-100A ( 2 per one box).

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Please give me an advice.
I would like to know whether there is no problem if the client who has an account in in Credit Suisse keeps the account as it is.
I often hear the trouble that the users cannot withdraw a large amount of money from the account of UBS.
Have you heard of such a problem on Credit Suisse?

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Please give me an advice.
I would like to know whether there is no problem if the client who has an account in with Credit Suisse keeps the account as it is.
I often hear the trouble that the account holders cannot withdraw a large amount of money from their UBS accounts.
Have you heard of such a problem with Credit Suisse?

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Thank you for dealing immediately.
I have not received the invoice yet.
I will pay the money on February 16th.

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Thank you for your immediate response.
I have not received the invoice yet.
I will pay the money on February 16th.

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2. About the late shipment of the items.
We increased the number of the workers for shipment from 1 to 3.
For this, the speed and efficiency of the procedure has improved.
That has solved the late shipment of the items.

We are planning to deliver the items to FBA in the future.
We aim at the further sale.

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2. About the late shipment of the items.
We increased the number of workers for shipment from 1 to 3.
For this, the speed and efficiency of the procedure has improved.
It has solved the prolonged shipping time of the items.

We are planning to deliver items to FBA in the future.
We aim to increase sales even further.

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Could we have our business discussion in Tokyo at 14:00, on 18th?
And could you change the place we meet from Shibura to Akasaka?
When you confirm this email, please send me back to the following email address.

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Could we have our business discussion in Tokyo at 14:00, on 18th?
And could you change the place we meet from Shibura to Akasaka?
When you have received this email, please send your reply to the following email address.

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The items I ordered the last time and the time before last have not arrived yet.
Have the tracking numbers still not found out yet?
I would like to know the scheduled arrival date today.
Please confirm them promptly.

I provided the invoice for this package yesterday.
I provided the invoice for these 3 packages 4 days ago.
We will deliver the items by Special Handling Instructions.
Please remove the restriction immediately.

I love this Rug.
The design is magnificent.
The hue and texture are similar to the picture of the product.
The hue and texture are a little different from the picture of the product.

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The items I ordered the last time and the time before last have not arrived yet.
Have the tracking numbers still not been found out yet?
I would like to know the scheduled arrival date today.
Please confirm them promptly.

I submitted the invoice for this package yesterday.
I submitted the invoice for the 3 packages above 4 days ago.
We will deliver the items with Special Handling Instructions.
Please remove the restriction immediately.

I love this Rug.
The design is magnificent.
The hue and texture are similar to the picture of the product.
The hue and texture are a little different from the picture of the product.