Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

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Four-dimensioned infinite exchange

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Four-dimensional infinite exchange

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I will bit. Is it Hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I will bid. Is it hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I'll bid. Do you have the items shortened? I'm looking forword your reply.

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I'll bid. Do you have the item shortened? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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Want to dress up, but earn beautiful legs as well!

http://www.sho-bionlinestore.jp/shopbrand/ct966/

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Want to dress up, but get/gain beautiful legs as well!

http://www.sho-bionlinestore.jp/shopbrand/ct966/

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Visit us to reserve the tickets! on the first come first served basis
ticket pia ：http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahooticket：https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

【Date・Venue】
11月10日(Mon) Sendai Rensa Open18:30 /Start19:00
■Ticket Handling GIP TEL:022-222-9999

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Visit us to reserve the tickets! on the first come first served basis
ticket pia ：http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahoo ticket：https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

【Date・Venue】
Nov. 10th (Mon) Sendai Rensa Open18:30 /Start19:00
■Ticket Handling GIP TEL:022-222-9999

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Please follow the links below for the ticket purchase! *First come basis
Ticket Pia: http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahoo Ticket: https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

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Please click the links below for ticket purchase! *First come basis
Ticket Pia: http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahoo Ticket: https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

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Book your ticket here! ※First come first served
チケットぴあ(Ticket Pia) ：http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahooチケット(Yahoo ticket)：https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

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Book your ticket here! ※First come first served
チケットぴあ(Ticket PIA) ：http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahooチケット(Yahoo ticket)：https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

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You can order ticket here! ※It's first come, first served.
Ticket pia:http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahoo ticket:https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

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You can order tickets here! ※It's first come, first served.
Ticket PIA:http://ticket-search.pia.jp/pia/search_all.do?kw=URATA%20NAOYA
yahoo ticket:https://y-tickets.jp/urtny14-ip2

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Fanclub Shop URL:
KUMI KODA Fanclub Reservation Page: http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/140131kuu3/
playroom Member Reservation Page: http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/140131kuu4/

KUMI KODA 'Dance In The Rain' Special Website:
http://rhythmzone.net/koda/ditr/

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Fanclub Shop URL:
KUMI KODA Fanclub members Reservation Page: http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/140131kuu3/
playroom Members Reservation Page: http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/140131kuu4/

KUMI KODA 'Dance In The Rain' Special Website:
http://rhythmzone.net/koda/ditr/

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Please download the album from the links below:
*The URL becomes effective on Wednesday June 11th.

iTunes: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/id883031950
Recochoku: http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumi-happylovesongcollection2014/
Mu-mo: http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_of140611/

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Please download the album from the links below:
*The URLs will be effective from Wednesday June 11th.

iTunes: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/id883031950
Recochoku: http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumi-happylovesongcollection2014/
Mu-mo: http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_of140611/

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[Download from the blow]
* The below URL will be available from 6/11 (Wed).

iTunes: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/id883031950
RecoChoku: http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumi-happylovesongcollection2014/
mu-mo: http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_of140611/

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[Download from below]
* The below URL will be available from June 11 (Wed).

iTunes: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/id883031950
RecoChoku: http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumi-happylovesongcollection2014/
mu-mo: http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_of140611/

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Hello,
Thanks for polite reply.
I felt happy to get known so much about the product.
Looking forward to speak to you again.

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Hello,
Thanks for the polite reply.
I am happy to be able to know so much about the product.
Looking forward to speaking to you again.

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Hello.
Thank you for your polite reply.
I'm glad to know a lot about products.
If I have other chance, hope to business with you again.

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Hello.
Thank you for your polite reply.
I'm glad to know the details of the product.
I hope to have another chance to work with you again.

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◆recochoku
http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumihalltour2014bonvoyage/

◆mu-mo
http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_apf/

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◆RecoChoku
http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumihalltour2014bonvoyage/

◆mu-mo
http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_apf/

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◆Recochoku
http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumihalltour2014bonvoyage/

◆mu-mo
http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_apf/

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◆RecoChoku
http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumihalltour2014bonvoyage/

◆mu-mo
http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_apf/

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◆Reco choku
http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumihalltour2014bonvoyage/

◆mu-mo
http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_apf/

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◆RecoChoku
http://recochoku.com/a0/kodakumihalltour2014bonvoyage/

◆mu-mo
http://q.mu-mo.net/koda_apf/

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[INFO] Billboard Live Osaka 06-6342-7722
Details here → http://www.billboard-live.com/pg/shop/show/index.php?mode=detail1&event=9248&shop=2

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[INFO] Billboard-LIVE Osaka 06-6342-7722
Details here → http://www.billboard-live.com/pg/shop/show/index.php?mode=detail1&event=9248&shop=2

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【INFO】Billboard Live Osaka 06-6342-7722
Info→http://www.billboard-live.com/pg/shop/show/index.php?mode=detail1&event=9248&shop=2

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【INFO】Billboard-LIVE Osaka 06-6342-7722
Details→http://www.billboard-live.com/pg/shop/show/index.php?mode=detail1&event=9248&shop=2

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X'mas live in NAGOYA Blue Note
12/22 (Mon) Nagoya Blue Note
http://www.nagoya-bluenote.com/

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X'mas live in NAGOYA Blue Note
Dec. 22 (Mon) Nagoya Blue Note
http://www.nagoya-bluenote.com/

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Hello,
I lost my order number.
Would you please inform me when my order item will be delivered to my addess?
Thank you.

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Hello,
I lost my order number.
Would you please inform me when the item I ordered will be delivered to my address?
Thank you.

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[Price] General admission 1,000 yen (tax included)

[General Sales] October 4 (Sat) starting from 10:00
Ticket Pia http://md-ticket.pia.jp/pia/ticketInformation.do?eventCd=1444462&rlsCd=001

[Contact Information]
Toyo Gakuen University Tel: 04-7150-3001
Hirehire Festival page: http://www.tyg.jp/campuslife/school_festival.html

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[Price] General admission 1,000 yen (tax included)

[General Sales] October 4 (Sat) starting from 10:00
Ticket PIA http://md-ticket.pia.jp/pia/ticketInformation.do?eventCd=1444462&rlsCd=001

[Contact Information]
Toyo Gakuen University Tel: 04-7150-3001
Hirehire Festival home page: http://www.tyg.jp/campuslife/school_festival.html