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元の翻訳
We will send it out as planned on 13th or 14th, it should arrive within 3-5 days. However, in case of a delay due to customs or USPS, the day of arrival might be later.
Should we proceed with the order?

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We will send it out on 13th or 14th as planned , it should arrive in 3 to 5 days. However, in case of a delay due to customs or USPS, the day of arrival might be later.
Should we proceed with the order?

元の翻訳
As schedule, we’ll ship on 13th-14th, and normally it’ll arrive within 3-5 days.
However expected arrival date may go beyond the schedule in case of delay of customs clearance or USPS.
Can I continue your order?

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We will ship the item on 13th or 14th, as scheduled, and it will arrive in 3 to 5 days under the normal circumstance.
However, expected arrival date may be delayed in case of delay caused by customs clearance or USPS.
May we continue processing your order?

元の翻訳
The item will be shipped out on 13th or 14th as scheduled, and you will receive it within 3 to 5 days. However, if it is delayed due to USPS or the customs, the arrival will be delayed than scheduled.
Do you agree to continue this order?

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The item will be shipped out on 13th or 14th as scheduled, and you will receive it within 3 to 5 days. However, if it is delayed by USPS or the customs, the arrival will be delayed from the date scheduled.
Would you like us to continue processing this order?

元の翻訳
Regarding the product hasn't reached, we apologized.
We have followed-up, but the post office in Japan has closed, so we would ask them tomorrow.
Thank you for your pacience.

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We are sorry to hear that you still have not received the product you have ordered. We sincerely apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused you.
We intend to track the shipment however, since it is already after the office hours of Japan Post now that we will definitely check and update you on the status.↵
Please allow us some time until tomorrow.
We appreciate your patience and understanding.↵

元の翻訳
As I have placed an order today, please confirm it.
Please ship it by DHL only at this time though I have been requesting the shipping method by FedEx so fa.
Please ship the items as soon as possible as I make the payment immediately. Thank you for your cooperation.r

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As I have placed an order today, so please confirm it.
Please ship it by DHL only at this time though I have been requesting the shipping via FedEx so far.
Please ship the items as soon as possible as I make the payment immediately. Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
As　I put an order. So please confirm it.
I always ask you send by FedEx but send by DHL only this time.
I will pay soon, so please send your product. Thank you.

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I have placed an order today so please confirm it.
I always ask you to ship my items via FedEx, but ship it via DHL only this time.
I will pay immediately, so please ship the item promptly. Thank you.

元の翻訳
I have sent you the order today, please check and confirm.
Usually I request you to ship with FedEx but this time please ship with DHL.
I will pay you immediately so please proceed the shipping as soon as possible.
Thank you in advance.

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I have placed the order today, so please check and confirm.
Usually I request you to ship my orders with FedEx, but this time please ship with DHL.
I will pay you immediately, so please proceed with the shipping as soon as possible.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
As I tell you over and over again, the product has been sent to the post office(code; 14604).
Please accept it right away.
We have already sent the product.
Unless you accept it, this useless conversations goes on forever.
So, please go to accept it now.
This is actually an issue between you and the post office.
Nothing is solved by messaging me.

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As I have been telling you over and over again, the product has been sent to the post office(code; 14604).
Please accept it right away.
We have already sent the product.
Unless you accept it, this useless conversations goes on forever.
So, please go to accept it now.
This is actually an issue between you and the post office.
Nothing is solved by messaging me.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for the late response.

I will contact you within 24 hours.↵
Even if there is something cause delay, I will try to contact you within 48 hours.

Also we don't ship on Sunday.

Multiple items can be packed as one but if there are pictures of items, each items 5 dollars is the maximum.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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I'm sorry for the belated response.

We normally respond to customers within 24 hours, and we try our best to respond to customers within 48 hours even when we experience delays due to unavoidable circumstances.

Please note that we do not ship merchandise on Sundays.(
毎週日曜日なのでSundaysと複数になります）
Multiple items can be packed as one, but in case where the picture must be taken for each item, then, 5 dollars per unit is the maximum.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for the late reply.

Usually, we respond within 24 hours.
Even if we're late due to circumstances, we respond within 48 hours.

Also, we don't send out any merchandise on Sundays.

Packing many items in one package is possible, but in case of taking a photo of an item and then sending, $5 per one unit is the limit.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

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We apologize for the belated response.

Usually, we respond within 24 hours.
Even if we're late due to circumstances, we respond within 48 hours.

Please note that we do not ship any merchandise on Sundays.

Packing many items in one package is possible, but in case of taking a photo of an item and then sending, $5 per one unit is the limit.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Hello, A and B

I promised you to send the slide to you for application of partner lase week, but I was too busy to make of it.
Apologize for in your inconvenience. Please kindly wait for another moment.

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Hello, A and B

I promised you to send the slide to you for application of partnership last week, but I was too busy to make of it.
I apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused you. Please kindly wait for a little longer.

元の翻訳
Hello A & B

Last week I had promised to send over the slides for partner application, but as I was too busy I had yet to do so.

I am really sorry for having you wait for so long. Please kindly wait a while longer.

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Hello A & B

Last week I had promised to send over the slides for partnership application, but as I was too busy I have not been able to prepare the slides.

I am really sorry for having you wait for so long. Please kindly wait a while longer.

元の翻訳
こんにちわ

メールありがとうございます。グッズは今週中に生産します。↵
8/18以降一箱で発送予定です

どうぞよろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは

メールありがとうございます。商品は34週目、8/18の週に生産が完了しますので、その日付以降に発送する予定です。発送手続きが完了次第追跡番号をお知らせします。

どうぞよろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
Asahi Junior High School Weekly

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Asahi Chugakusei Weekly

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for contacting me.
I'm sorry, but is a return possible?
I would return the shipping costs after the package arrives.

Below is the returning address.

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Hello.
Thank you for contacting us.
We're sorry, but may we ask you to return the item to us?
We will reimburse you the shipping costs after the package arrives.

The return address is as follows:

元の翻訳
早速発送していただきありがとうございます。もし将来的に交換バンドが必要になったら、同じようにそちらに注文できるでしょうか？

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早速に発送していただきありがとうございます。もし将来的に交換バンドが必要になったら、同じようにそちらに注文できるでしょうか？

元の翻訳
送球に主かして頂き有難うございます。交換用バンドが必要であるかどうかを伺いたいのですが、今後バンドの注文もまた販売店様に出来るのですか。

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早急に出荷して頂き有難うございます。将来的に交換用バンドが必要になった場合、貴店に注文して入手することができるのでしょうか？

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
I have understood.
I will inquire once again at the post office to reach a solution.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
Your request is duly acknowledged.
I will inquire once again at the post office.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
この注文の配送には8月29日から9月22日まで本当にかかるのですか。まじめに注文を取り消す事を考えています。

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この注文の配送には8月29日から9月22日まで本当にかかるのですか？まじめに注文を取り消す事を考えています。

元の翻訳
Please let me confirm two things.

1. Is this Script available by iPhone and Android phone?
2. Your explanation says that you use API of YouTube.↵
Is it right?

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Please let me confirm two things:

1. Does this script work on iPhone or Android devices?
2. You have indicated on the product description that you are using YouTube API. Is it correct?

元の翻訳
I want to confirm the following 2 points.

1. Will this script work in iPhone or Android?
2. In the manual it is written that it is using YouTube API, is this statement correct?

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I want to confirm the following 2 points:

1. Will this script work on iPhone or Android?
2. In the manual it is written that it is using YouTube API, is this statement correct?

元の翻訳
I would like to confirm two things:
1. Does this ScriptiPhone work on Android?
2. It's written in the manual that it uses the Youtube API, is that right?

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I would like to confirm two things:
1. Does this Script work on iPhone or Android devices?
2. You have indicated that it is using YouTube API on the description, is it correctly indicated?