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Thank you very much for your email/letter/call.
My wife is in labor and I'm beside her and taking care of her at the hospital.
I would like to send your order as soon as possible, but I really cannot leave here till the time our baby comes.
According to the doctor, it should be done by Sunday.
I am very sorry to keep you waiting. I am sure that I can send it by Monday.

I know you are looking forward to it, and once again I am sorry that I can't send it you right away.
I appreciate your understanding.

Thank you.

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Thank you very much for contacting me.
My wife is in labor, and I'm beside her to take care of her at the hospital.
I would like to send your order as soon as possible, but I really cannot leave here as I am not sure when the baby will be born.
According to the doctor, the baby should be born by Sunday.
I am very sorry to keep you waiting, but I am sure that I can send it by Monday.

I know you are looking forward to it, and once again I am sorry that I can't send it you right away.
I appreciate your understanding.

Thank you.

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Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

My teacher's negotiations will be reached by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you were looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

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Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and I am at the hospital to take care of her.
I want to send it quickly, but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

The doctor said the baby will be born by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you were looking forward to the arrival of your item, but please wait a little longer.

元の翻訳
Hello,

So you will pick up twenty cups that UPS has delivered accidentally to our company?

Thank you so much for the arrangement.

Anyway, I'm not sure how much your company had to pay for the shipping, so is it possible to cancel the order and get the fee reimbursed? Or is it possible to change the product?

Please consider those option and give me your reply.

Thank you so much.

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Hello,

So, you are telling me that UPS will pick up twenty cups that were delivered accidentally to our company?

Thank you so much for the arrangement.

Anyway, I'm not sure how much your company had to pay for the shipping, so is it possible to cancel the order and get the fee reimbursed? Or is it possible to change the product ordered?

Please consider these options and give me your response.

Thank you so much.

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All orders are made by this email address.
It seems that the payment has been completed by PayPal, yet due to I still have not received the order confirmation email, does this mean my order has not been received by you, or the payment actually has not been completed yet?
Would it be better for me to contact PayPal directly?
Or, could you please help me to make sure the situation as well?
PayPal issued the following ID for the transaction.
I am sorry to bother you.

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All orders are made by this email address.
It seems that the payment has been completed via PayPal, I still have not received the order confirmation email yet. Does this mean my order has been not been received by you, or the payment actually has not been completed yet?
Would it be better for me to contact PayPal directly?
Or, could you please help me to verify the situation as well?
PayPal issued the following ID for the transaction.
I am sorry to bother you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for you message.
Can you you please check the tracking number?
Please let me check it from here.
After I have check the status of the item I will contact you.

Thank you for your message.
Sorry to bother you but,↵
could you please give me the URL or ASIN code of the product you wish to purchase?

Thank you for your message
I can not confirm if it has English subtitles.
Thank you

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Thank you for you message.
Can you please check the tracking number?
Please let me check it from here.
After I have checked the status of the item I will contact you.

Thank you for your message.
Sorry to bother you, but, could you please give me the URL or ASIN code of the product you wish to purchase?

Thank you for your message
I can not confirm if it has English subtitles.
Thank you

元の翻訳
マイク ICOM SM 20 x Hf radioについて質問します。
ICOMは新品で192,84ドルですが、日本からイタリアまでのDHLまたはEMSの費用ははどのくらいかかるでしょうか？
至急paypalでお支払いします。
ありがとうございます このマイクにとても興味があります わたしのsm 20 は動かないのでラジオが使えません...
DHLまたはEMS Expressを入れた合計金額をお知らせください、Paypalにて負担し購入します。
よろしくお願いします。

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マイク ICOM SM 20 x Hf radioについて質問します。
ICOMは新品で192,84ドルですが、日本からイタリアまでのDHLまたはEMSの費用ははどのくらいかかるでしょうか？
至急paypalでお支払いします。
ありがとうございます このマイクにとても興味があります わたしのsm 20 が故障している（動かない＝故障した）ためラジオが使えません...
DHLまたはEMS Expressを入れた合計金額をお知らせください、Paypal経由で購入します。
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for recommending the sale of the “Salba Chia Bar”. Analysis of the nutrients came out. Nutritional value per bar, energy 181.2kcal, protein 2.68g, fat 7.88g, carbohydrate 23.64g, dietary fiber 2.52g, sodium is 14.8mg. Calories corresponding to two bananas it is the best for a high-energy diet. The Japaneses label will display the date of manufacture. Please to sell it within 1 year of the manufacture date. I hope that this will be a hit product.

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Thank you for promoting the sale of the “Salba Chia Bar”. Analysis of the nutrients came out. Nutritional value per bar, energy 181.2kcal, protein 2.68g, fat 7.88g, carbohydrate 23.64g, dietary fiber 2.52g, sodium is 14.8mg. Calories equivalent to that of two bananas, it is the best for a high-energy diet. The label in Japan will indicate the manufacturing date. Please sell it with 1 year of the manufacturing date as the best-before date. I hope that this will be a hit product.

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Please refer me to the good quality outdoor brand.

I like to know the brand that is not commonly known.
Also I like to know the brand that was established recently.
Thank you.

Please refer me to the general stores I can purchase online.

I prefer the site with large selection of products and stylish.

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Please refer me to the good quality outdoor brand that you recommend.

I like to know the brand that is not yet commonly known.
Also I like to know the brand that was established recently.
Thank you.

Please refer me to the general stores I can purchase online.

I prefer the stylish website with a large selection of products.

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Please recommend me outdoor fashion brand with good quality.

I would like to know a brand which is not yet major and new brand which does not have longer years after establishment.

Please let me know fancy goods brand that you can buy online. I would prefer brand with a lot of fashionable items.

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Please recommend me outdoor goods brand with good quality.

I would like to know a brand which is not yet major and new brand which does not have longer years after establishment.

Please let me know fancy goods brand that you can buy online. I would prefer brand with a lot of fashionable items.

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Please let me know high-quality recommended outdoor brand?

I would like to know not well known brand.
The brand which is new to the outdoor gears industry.
Thank you for your cooperation.

I appreciate if you can tell me online grocery shop.

I would like to know the one selling fashionable and variety of goods.

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Please let me know high-quality outdoor brand that you recommend?

I would like to know the unknown brand if possible.
The brand which is new to the outdoor gears industry.
Thank you for your cooperation.

I appreciate if you can tell me about the variety shops where online shopping is available.

I would like to know the one selling fashionable with great number of items.

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Thank you for contacting me. Has anything changed with you?
My Google shop sales have slumped due to the Panda update, hits have been reduced
Also, I am really feeling the effect of the no time difference between the America and the Official Japan store and them selling new product in Japanese.

However, I will continue to promote the items items not sold in Japan via promotion and keep the shop going.

Luckily as I am replying to you, I just got 2 more orders.
Can we do business as usual?

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Thank you for contacting me. Has anything changed with you?
My Google shop sales have slumped due to the Panda update, and the number of page view has been reduced.
Also, I am really feeling the effect of the no time difference between the US and the Official Japan store and them selling new product in Japanese.

However, I will continue to promote the items not sold in Japan via promotion and keep the shop going.

Luckily as I am replying to you, I just got 2 more orders.
Can we do business as usual?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.

About the matter that had you pointed out,↵
We would like to refund once the current order, and We would like to order again.

We apologize for the request.
Please conduct the correspondence refund processing.

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Thank you for taking your time to contact us.

In regards to the matter that you had pointed out, we would like you to issue us a refund once for the current order, and we will re-order the item.

We apologize for the inconvenience this must have caused you.
Please start processing for the refund.

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I will attach a scanned copy of the EMS paperwork for the item I sent you, please check it.
I can not get a tracking number even from the UPS site, please view he status using the below.

If the goods do not arrive, I can re-post or refund,whichever is convenient for you.

I hope it work on your eczema you described!
Previously I ate a lot of junk food and foods with additives, but recently I have been having a lot more fruit and vegetables.
I was able to get a signed copy of OO's book at the book store fair.

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I have attached a scanned image of the EMS documentations for the item I sent you, please check it.
Also, please find the list of statuses regarding the tracking information for the shipments which I was able to obtain through USPS home page as follows.

If the goods do not arrive, I can reship or refund, whichever is convenient for you, so please let me know.

I am interested in the item which you claim to be effective for eczema!
Previously I ate a lot of junk food and foods with additives, but recently I have been having a lot more fruits and vegetables.
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I was able to get a signed copy of OO's book at the book store fair.↵

元の翻訳
なぜまだ届いていないのかわかりません。娘はもうコスチュームパーティーをこの商品なしで終わらせてしまいました。しかし娘はまだ欲しがっています。どのようにパッケージされたのでしょうか？

。 この住所はビジネス用でいつも荷物にサインしてくれます。確認してみます。USPSから２回目の配送の試みがあるなどなにもしらされていません。↵
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とくに特化されたものではありませんでしたが。

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ライフスタイルを一転するいいチョイスをしましたね！エクセマについてのレポートを聞きました。これをカールさせる自然商品の名前を教えてくれました。↵
試してみてお知らせします！

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なぜ商品がまだ届いていないのかわかりません。娘はもうコスチュームパーティーをこの商品なしで終わらせてしまいました。しかし娘はまだ欲しがっています。どのようにパッケージされたのでしょうか？

。 この住所は会社のもので、いつも担当者が受け取ってくれますので確認してみます。しかし、通常、USPSは再配達するために残していく不在通知も受け取っていないようです。とくに特化されたものではありませんでしたが。

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ライフスタイルを一転するいいチョイスをしましたね！湿疹についてのレポートについて知りました。（このレポートでは）湿疹を治すのに役立つ自然素材の製品名が記載されていました。またこれについてはお知らせします。

元の翻訳
Dear staff in charge

We would like to extend our deepest apology for the trouble we have caused because of listing to Amazon the item without selling approval within European Economic Area (EEA).
We are really sorry about it.
We would like to inform you that we have already removed all listings concerned,

PS,
I would like to ask your favor.
We commit that we will not list any items of your company from now on by putting our efforts to prevent the recurrence of same incident while adding the checking processes.
We are truly sorry for taking up your time, but we were wondering if you could contact with Amazon and inform them that the complaint has been lifted.
We truly appreciate for your cooperation on this matter.

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To whom it may concern,

We would like to extend our deepest apology for the trouble we have caused because of listing with Amazon the item without selling approval within the European Economic Area (EEA).
We are sincerely sorry about it.
We would like to inform you that we have already removed all listings concerned,

PS,
I would like to ask your favor from you.
We commit that we will not list any items of your company from now on by putting our efforts to prevent the recurrence of the same incident while adding the checking processes.
We are truly sorry for taking up your time, but we were wondering if you could contact with Amazon and inform them that the complaint has been lifted.
We truly appreciate for your cooperation on this matter.

元の翻訳
Instructions below:

1. Tell the delivery company that your product was damaged.
This is mandatory to move on to the next step.
Create a report.
They will probably ask you details.
As you and we are not specialists, just tell them the fact it was damaged and the abstract of the situation.
We need this report for further steps.

2. The report is sent to our delivery company.
Then I will be able to apply an investigation request.
We will investigate.

3. We will refund you on your item, shipment and returning shipment soon after we confirm.

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The instructions are provided as follows:

1. Contact the delivery company to let them know that your product was damaged.
(This is a mandatory step in moving on to the next step.)
Prepare a report.
They will probably ask you for the details.
As you and we are not specialists, just tell them the fact it was damaged and the abstract of the situation.
(We need this report for further steps.)

2. The report will be submitted to our delivery company.
Then I will be able to apply for an investigation request.
We will investigate.

3. We will refund you for your item, shipment and returning shipment soon after we confirm the information provided.